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Approved Planet Jena'tes

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Darth Vyrassu

Immortal Jen'ari Sith Emperor


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• Intent: A planet for future stories and great Roleplay as well as the Capital for the faction The Jen'ari Empire when the faction becomes major.

• Image Credit:

• Canon: N/A

• Links: Darkside Force Nexus Development Thread


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• Planet Name: Jena'tes

• Demonym: Jenaites

• Region: Outer rim

• System Name: Jena'tes system

• System Features:
1 Sun - jenatate
2 moons - Jen, Menuo

• Coordinates: P, 15
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• Major Imports: Durasteel, Duraplast, Food,

• Major Exports: spices, crops, lightsaber crystals,

GEOGRAPHIC INFORMATION
• Gravity: Standard

• Climate: Muggy, temperate, OK
constant rain and electrical storms, frozen plains, constant rain and snow. Heavily Electrified due to Sith Rituals.


• Primary Terrain: Jungles, forest, tundra, wet desert, swamps and oceans.

• Atmosphere: Type I

• Major Locations:
None - All cities and major buildings were destroyed when the Jen'ari departed Chiss Space.

Force Nexus:
Size: Planet Wide - The planet is blanketed in a darkside force nexus due to the amount of Sith spirits, Sith rituals and dark magic that was conducted on the planet through the years. Some Rituals were done so much it cracked the atmosphere all over the planet. The Darkside nexus enhances darkside users powers, in certain areas such as the caves and the sacred temple, and a few other places, technology won't work. The Darkside nexus also makes any lightsider feel weak also could consume them in the darkside.

Intent: To have a planet that is completely devoured and devoted to the darkside. A planet that has been so warped and twisted and corrupted by the darkside of the force to the point that even lightsiders would have an issue being on the planet without being consumed by the darkside.

Darkside Force Nexus Development Thread



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• Native Species:
* Humans
* True Sith
* Jurgoran
* Yozusk
* Sleen
* Vine Cat
* Swamp Wampa
* Nexu
* Reapers


• Immigrated Species: various

• Population: moderately, millions

• Demographics: Mostly humans, some Sith, small bit of various species
Humans 75%
Sith: 15%
Other: 10%

• Primary Languages: Ancient Sith, Basic

• Culture: Most people on Jena'tes would find entertainment at the various cantinas, opera houses, casinos, and even swoop racing where big stakes where on the line, usually making or breaking people. For those enlisted in the Jen'ari Imperial Military would patrol Akvase city or other various outpost through the planet, others would be training or maintaining their jobs. Those that were Sith within the ranks of Jen'ari Sith were usually doing something to better themselves or gain new power. There was also shopping at the various stores, maintaining farm lands or mining ore or crystals within the scattered caves and try to sell their findings to try and make a living.

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• Government: The planet is controlled by a Magocratic theocratic empire

• Affiliation: The Jen'ari Empire

• Wealth: medium
Wealth is medium range due to the constant sales of crystals, the money coming in from several businesses such as casinos and shops and the various Cantinas, as well as farm lands selling crops. The Jen'ari Empire taxes each business to ensure the Empire always gets a cut of the profit to further advance the wealth of the planet and the Empire.

• Stability: The planet is under Jen'ari Empire law. The sith use fear to keep order and maintain law within the planet. Crime still happens on the planet but when caught by Jen'ari Imperial Military, are met with severe punishment sometimes being execution.

• Freedom & Oppression: The citizens of Jena'tes are pretty much free to do as they please and are under the rule of The Jen'ari Empire. The Dark Lords of the Dark Council strike fear into the citizens to maintain law & order. The Jen'ari Empire doesn't tolerate law breaking within it's main cities and are usually met with severe disciplinary action.

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• Military: The Jen'ari Imperial military patrols the planet and enforces the Empire's law with an Iron Fist. The Jen'ari Empire Imperial Sith Troopers keep peace within the planet as well as serve over as the backbone of the major troop force of the Jen'ari Empire Imperial Military infantry unit. The Jen'ari Empire Imperial Navy operates in orbit of the planet with the Sith Armada, a fleet of various ships of various sizes.

• Technology: The technology galaxy on Jena'tes is kept up to date with the rest of the galaxy, but due to the planet being so far out on the outer rim and keeping a low profile they are last to hear about new advanced technology. But the Jen'ari Empire Science Institute is always doing research to keep up with the galaxy and to discover more advanced technology.

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Immediately following the Hyperspace Wars Vitiate took control of the Sith Empire, for those who didn't wish to follow him left to build their own society. They discovered the planet Jena'tes and begin a society of their very own. The Sith formed a small government to rule over the mass and lived in peace hidden from the events of the Great Galactic War and the cold war. The Eternal Empire came, and valkorian discovered the planet, but with the help of the alliance the Sith defeated the eternal Empire. The alliance left the Sith on jena'tes alone and the Sith continued life. All the Sith that died or does die are buried in the Sith Boneyard, the more high ranking Sith had elaborate tombs while others were buried with a simple headstone. The Sith would travel to the tundra regions to gather crystals for lightsaber and for profit. Many Sith conducted rituals and arcane magic in the Darkside of the force which cracked the Atmosphere causing perpetual electrical storms and rain. Sun hardly could break through the storm clouds, only enough to support plant life which the planet mainly only had plants and trees that could thrive at night.

There always being so much Darkside use on the planet caused a Force nexus of the Darkside that blanketed the entire planet, as well as the spirits of dead Sith always looming around the planet, as well their bodies being buried on the planet. When the rule of two was created, the planet was thought to be abandoned as no activity came from the planet and the Sith on the planet continued to grow in secret. Although the darkside nexus was felt by Jedi, they only assumed it was because of all the darkside spirits around the Sith boneyard, so the planet was left alone and forgotten about. Darth Sidious visited the planet after order 66 and declared everyone on the planet simply Darkside users and not Sith, he recruited several of them to be Sith inquisitors to hunt down Jedi. After the fall of the galactic Empire, the planet again started to reconnect with the rest of the galaxy simply to trade. Upon the rise of Snoke and the first order, the planet population again went quiet. Some time near the One Sith and rise of Darth Krayt, some Sith from the planet left to join Darth Krayt. After Darth Krayt fell the planet started to come alive to the rest of the galaxy but only enough to not cause a disturbance or a threat.

Finally came the gulag plague, otherwise known as the 400 year darkness. The planet fell into dispair without communications and travel was severely restricted. With the lack of supplies and resources needed, the Sith begin turn on each other trying to steal what little resources were left and fighting over what was rationed out. Many Sith and citizens were affected and contaminated by the plague. Multiple Sith and citizens became sick and tons died from the plague. The planet was in chaos for 400 years. Somehow the population survived the 400 year darkness but the fighting continued to ensue until the Jen'ari Empire came to the planet and told the population what the Jen'ari Empire stood for and what's it's goals were. This brought an end to the 400 year planet wide civil war in most cases, there were some small pocketed groups that resented the Jen'ari Empire and caused them distress. The Jen'ari Empire made work constantly fighting to eradicate the traitorous Sith.

The Jen'ari Empire helped rebuild several buildings and major locations, as well as built the new capital city of the planet, Akvase City. A statute was built of Darth Vyrassu in the city plaza, as well Vyrassu had the grand Citadel to be designed by the exact same designs of Vitiate's Citadel on Kaas City, Dromund Kaas. The planets population grew bigger than it was, a massive Sith Society based alone under the leadership of the Immortal Dark Lord Darth Vyrassu and his Empire. The planets Sith Society population continues to grow to this day and the Jen'ari Empire restricts infighting, a crime punishable by death. If Sith had a dispute between each other they were allowed to fight with permission from the Dark Council. Although this law was in place, Sith still in secret sometimes fought over the others power or because of common differences. The Jen'ari Imperial Military though did try and enforce the laws as much as they could.

Darth Vyrassu launched a campaign to eradicate any that opposed the Jen'ari Empire, he was well launched a Campaign simply known as Cloning Campaign to build a massive Clone army of Sith Troopers for the Empire. Vyrassu even used force sight to see into the past to see why the planet was so heavily covered in the Darkside, he had discovered thousands of Sith have died on this planet and their spirits linger, hundreds of Sith are buried in the wet desert valley canyons, as well numerous Sith Rituals had been conducted all over the planet, in one case these rituals cracked the atmosphere and caused heavy electrical storms all over the planet causing permanent rain or in the tundras case snowfall.​
Important Historical Update: When The Jen'ari Empire lost at Csilla and Copero the Jen'ari Empire agreed to leave Chiss Space but before they did they agreed to destroy all they built. Using bombs and starfighter bombardment destroyed every city and major building on Jena'tes leaving the planet in ruins and dark jungles.


Submission Modification
Old Version Approved 11/23/2018
All Major Locations​
\\THE JEN'ARI SITH CITADEL//
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The Jen'ari Sith Citadel sits in the heart of Akvase City. It stands as a symbol of power for the Jen'ari Empire. It was designed and built to the exact style of former Sith Emperor vitiate's citadel. The citadel features the Dark Council chambers, the Jen'ari Emperor's private throne room, Sith masters offices, grand moff office, Imperial intelligence command, training dojo, meditation room, Shadow Guard quarters, outdoor landing pad, plus various other Sith related areas.


\\AKVASE CITY//
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Akvase City is the Capital city of the Jen'ari Empire, it houses various shops, cantinas, casinos, Imperial Compound, Jen'ari Sith Citadel, as well as homes and condos and apartments. The city is filled with various walks of life and entertainment. Akvase city is a massive metropolitan city with skyscrapers reaching high into the sky.


\\GERTI CANTINA//
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Gerti Cantina, the place to be over all other cantinas, where secret meetings happened whether it be imperials, mandalorians, Sith, pirates, smugglers, criminals. This cantina had it all, swoop racing gambling, pazzaak, sabacc, exotic dancers, live bands, drinks, dancing, socializing. The Gerti cantina was for sure the place to be for various entertainment and getting drunk, but if you caused any issues, Imperial soldiers would arrest you.


\\IMPERIAL MILITARY HQ//
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The Imperial Military HQ is where most planetary defenses, communications, as well as troops were located. Here imperial troops would conduct imperial military meetings, briefing, and get equipment. It also hosted a jail for those awaiting transport to the Imperial Prison.


\\SITH ACADEMY//
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The Sith Academy is where all new Sith to the Jen'ari Empire would come to, to learn, be tested and become powerful and train until a Sith Lord would take an Acolyte from the academy to be an apprentice. Lightsaber training duels, as well as darkside power training and scholar studies was done hereSpaceport.


\\AKVASE SPACEPORT//
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The biggest Spaceport on the planet and heavily monitored by the Jen'ari Imperial Military. Most of the main traffic on and off comes through this Spaceport.


\\IMPERIAL PRISON//
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The Imperial Prison houses the Jen'ari Empire's most serious offenders and the most valuable prisoners such as Jedi or other important figures. The Prison also has an execution chamber and a torture chamber as well as a interrogation chamber.


\\CRYSTAL CAVES//
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The Crystal caves located in the tundra region are the place people brave to go to harvest crystals to try and sell to make wealth, also the Sith come here to gather their crystals for lightsaber construction. To get here is a dangerous task due to the severity of the cold weather temperatures.


\\SITH BONEYARD//
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The Sith Boneyard is the valley where hundreds of Sith are buried, most having simple tombstones buried in the ground as where the more important Sith were buried in elaborate tombs. To walk this valley is to feel death, darkness and cold. This is not a place visited by many people.


\\DARKSIDE CAVE//
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The Darkside cave is a place ecombed in the darkside of the force from previous rituals and spells done here, not to mention the deaths. Sith academy students as well as other Sith have come here to devoulge deeper into darkness and let the Darkside consume them.


\\UGAIRA CITY//
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Ugaira City is home to the Imperial Military training academy as well as it being the 2nd biggest city on Jena'tes, it holds one casino, various restaurants, shops, and apartments and condos. The entire city is indoors with skybridges connecting the various other platforms that makes up the city. Ugaira City is located in the oceans of the planet far from any land. The city platforms stand on durasteel made pillars.



\\SITH IMPERIAL MILITARY ACADEMY//
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The Sith Imperial Military Academy is located in Ugaira City. It house barracks, training course, classrooms, shooting ranges, scenario testing areas, armory, explosives testing facility. It is where the basic infantry unit of the Jen'ari Imperial Military. The rain and wind elements challenge the troopers in training.


\\VYRASSU'S SECRET LABS//
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Darth Vyrassu's secret labs is hidden deep underground somewhere on the planet, it's exact location is unknown. Vyrassu performs various rituals, spells, enchantments as well as various other darkside restricted magic in this lab.


\\SITH SORCERERS TOWER//
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The Sith Sorcerers tower was a place where sorcerers and alchemist could perform rituals and spells. It was said this is the place where the rituals were conducted that corrupted the sky causing eternal electrical storms. Most of the darkest sith magic happened here. When a ritual was being done a bright flaming energy would come out of the ritual chamber and would form into a flaming eye above the tower.


\\AKVASE CITY PLAZA//
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Akvase City plaza is a wide open round plaza with structures of art around it with a 100 foot tall statute of Darth Vyrassu standing tall watching over his Empire. Many people gather in this plaza to socialize and enjoy the art.

\\JEN'ARI MUSEUM//
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The Jen'ari Museum is a massive 3 story building in Akvase City that houses hundreds of Sith relics and Sith artifacts that Vyrassu has collected and kept safe through his 5,000 + years of life. It includes artifacts and relics from the great hyperspace war, the great galactic war, the clone wars, the galactic civil war, and the 2nd galactic civil war.

\\CLONING FACILITY//
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Darth Vyrassu ordered a Cloning Campaign to eradicate any resistant forces on Jena'tes and clear the way to build this massive facility to begin building a massive Sith Trooper Clone Army, who the exact host is, was only known to the Dark Council and remained classified to everyone else. The facility sits just on the outskirts of Akvase City, constantly under guard by Sith Troopers, hundreds of security cameras and other security systems. Only selected persons were allowed inside the facility.

\\SACRED TEMPLE//
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The Sacred Temple was once a temple of worship now that the Jen'ari Empire has taken over the planet, it has become a sacred temple for only high ranking and high position members of the Jen'ari Empire, although lower ranked people may have permission from the higher ranks to enter on a special occasion. The Sacred Temple is located in the dark jungle outskirts of Akvase City, it has a Sith Library, Training Room, meeting room, private estate rooms for high ranking officials, a sacred meditation room, as well as a Private throne room for the emperor with a chair designed to heal his body and with communications relay and holoprojectors to control his Empire from this room, he would also conduct rituals from this room.

\\EMPEROR'S PRIVATE THRONE//
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The Emperor's private throne was his sanctum. It was a massive round room, like a hollow ball, it had a single catwalk all the way up to a platform that had a specialized throne chair for the Emperor that would heal him, it had a communications relay to communicate with the Entire empire. Along the catwalk was spike pillars, beyond that on each side was 4 power generators, two on top two on bottom, between each pillar was electricity conducting power to the room. The entire room was controlled by central computer system known as Legion. Legion was voice activated and would inform the Emperor of anything they needed to know. The only way into this room was to get passes the Emperor's private shadow guards and his hands.

\\SITH CITADEL ARCHIVES//
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The Sith Archives is a vast library of Knowledge, it has thousands upon thousands of books, scrolls, holodisks all on Ancient sith, spells, darkside powers, sith alchemy, sith arcane magic, events from the past regarding sith in history. Most sorcerers and scholars spend plenty of time in here, the Archives is 3 floors, very dark room with red glowing lights.

\\SITH CITADEL GRAND HALL//
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The Grand Sith Hall was the very first room you entered upon entering the Sith Citadel in Akvase City. The hall was massive, long red carpet down the center with statues of current and former Dark Lords of greatness within the Jen'ari Empire lined along the side, at the end of the hall was the tallest statute, which was always the current Jen'ari Emperor. Behind the statutes along the walls was doors that led to various areas around the Citadel.

\\JEN'ARI EMPEROR'S THRONE ROOM//
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The Jen'ari Emperor's throne room was locked down only allowing entrance to the highest ranking officials or those that had permission. The room was flat on top and bottom but was rounded walls. There was a massive long catwalk to a platform that held the Emperor's throne with places that Shadow Guards and highest ranking officials would stand when needed. Around the room was a ledge that followed the wall, along the wall was low lit lights, doors leading to the Emperor's private bedroom and Medical Wing. The Catwalk had a black carpet over the white tiled floor, the catwalk was lined with Jen'ari Empire Banners, below each banner was low lit Red lights. Above the throne was the central core computer system known as Legion.​
New Version Approved 2/7/2019

Reason for Modification: The Jen'ari Empire left Jena'tes therefore destroying all they built as a goodbye.

Modification:

Removal of the following from major locations
* Akvase city
* Gerti Cantina
* Sith Citadel
* Imperial military HQ
* Sith Academy
* Akvase Spaceport
* Imperial Prison
* Ugaira City
* Sith Imperial military academy
* Vyrassu secret labs
* Sith Sorcerers tower
* Akvase city plaza
* Jen'ari museum​
* Cloning facility
* Sacred temple
* Emperor private throne
* Sith archives
* Sith grand hall
* Jen'ari Emperor throne room

ADD TO HISTORY:

When The Jen'ari Empire lost at Csilla and Copero the Jen'ari Empire agreed to leave chiss space but before they did they agreed to destroy all they built. Using bombs and starfighter bombardment destroyed every city and major building on Jena'tes leaving the planet in ruins and dark jungles.​
 
[member="Darth Vyrassu"]

As I'm given to understand this is a very integral submission to your new major faction (congratulations), I will try to be prompt. Conceptually I think everything looks good here, I just have a couple of minor clarifications before I can pass this along to the RPJs.

While it becomes clear later on in the submission that you mean lightsaber crystals, I would ask that you specify that in the exports section. This is just so people don't get confused as to whether you mean the Force related kind or simply common precious gems.

Your population is listed as Heavily Populated, but you also have millions in parentheses. The scale in Star Wars is pretty large, with city worlds like Coruscant and Empress Teta having anywhere from 80-100 billion people. You could scale that up to billions if you think it would fit the submission, otherwise I'd say Moderately Populated might be more appropriate.

And lastly your Darkside nexus. Good job on the development thread, I have no objections there. I would simply ask that you give some detail on what exactly the nexus' properties are. From your thread, it definitely seems like they enhance a Force user's connection to the Darkside. Is there anything else? Does it have an effect on the NFU populace? Maybe drives them to form Sith worshipping cults? Just want to clarify what characteristics make it unique.

That's pretty much it I think! Once we've got these covered, I'll be satisfied.
 
[member="Darth Vyrassu"]

Over all, this looks good. I'd just like you to add an additional 'intent' in the Nexus portion. From the template:



Size: [Listed below. Remember, if your intent or history does not substantiate the size, you may be asked to downgrade.]

  • Area - [A small location on a world much like the dark grove or oasis that can be destroyed by people.]
  • Location - [Area large enough to be renewed, being both large and powerful. Example is Valley of the Jedi, The Wellspring]
  • Planet - [Force Nexus effects can be felt across the entire planet. Exemplary effort in story telling and history may justify the presence of a planet wide nexus. These are very rare.]
Intent: [Provide the reasoning and motive for this force nexus. A request for a force nexus may be denied on this premise alone.]
This is mostly bookkeeping here, dotting i's and crossing t's. Otherwise I see no issues and can stamp this once that additional field for the nexus is filled out.
 
[member="Darth Vyrassu"]

I'm sorry but I'm not seeing it, where did you add the Nexus intent? Right now it's still:


Force Nexus:
Size: Planet Wide - The planet is blanketed in a darkside force nexus due to the amount of Sith spirits, Sith rituals and dark magic that was conducted on the planet through the years. Some Rituals were done so much it cracked the atmosphere all over the planet. The Darkside nexus enhances darkside users powers, in certain areas such as the caves and the sacred temple, and a few other places, technology won't work. The Darkside nexus also makes any lightsider feel weak also could consume them in the darkside.

Darkside Force Nexus Development Thread
There still needs to be the intent field here, like the part of the template I quoted above.

If I missed it I apologize and just point it out and I'll stamp this :)
 
[member="Darth Vyrassu"]

Approving with the usual caveat that the writers (in this case specifically lightsiders) get to decide the effects of the nexus on their characters, and can't be forced to turn to the darkside, etc etc.

Approved.
 
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