Approved NPC Ken Sol

[Srina Talon]

Submission Name: Ken Sol


Link to Submission: https://www.starwarsrp.net/threads/ken-sol.90744/


Reason for Moving to Pre-Codex: I must change the picture on him.

Don't forget to include a list of changes and tag a member of Codex Staff when you're ready for it to be moved back to live judging.

 

[Warren Century]

Changes:
Pic Change
Added throwing stars to weapons.

Srina Talon

 

[Srina Talon]

Warren Century

Anytime you have an older submission pulled for edits we do require that it be updated to the most current version of the template. You'll need to sweep through and make sure all the fields match. NPC Template for Individual. Please tag a member of Codex Staff when you're ready for it to be moved. Thanks!

 

[Warren Century]

Changes:

• Changed the Picture
• Expanded upon the intent, and role he plays.
• Moved him to the correct template.

Allyson Locke I'm ready for him to be moved back to Live Judging.

 

[Srina Talon]

Warren Century

You have a lot of broken links. You'll need to fix those - Even if they were due to the site merger.

 

[Warren Century]

Fixed. Srina Talon

 

[Zak Dymo]

Warren Century

I'll be conducting this review for you. I'll admit, I had not encounter the Narrikian species before and it proved a fascinating read! But, on to this submission:

1. Image Credit.

Image Credit: Here

I noticed you changed the image, but the supplied image credit appears to be where you found the image but does not state who the original artist was. As per the Codex rules, we want to give artistic credit to creators. In this case, this is art by a Japanese artist named Se-Na, who publishes her artwork on Twitter and Pixiv. Here is a good source for your image credit.

2. Species.

Species: Narrikian

Please link Narrikian here.

Please tag me once you have completed your edits.

 

[Zak Dymo]

Warren Century

Can I please get a status update on this?

 

[Warren Century]

Zak Dymo The edits you want are done, I do believe.

 

[Zak Dymo]

Warren Century

Approved.