Kesh, The Pain of my efforts. (Advice and suggestions)

[Aithne Charr]

Over the semester during school and now with my summer clear to push it, ive been working on Kesh's Guide page more and more. Im curious what people think of my work so far, if there are areas i should expand right now, and if they know of any events in the past that i don't have on there at the top of their heads.

http://starwarsrp.net/topic/81781-kesh-wip/

So ya, what do you guys think, any suggestion you guys can make?

 

[Bryce Bantam]

No real suggestion but that is some good Chaos fluff dude, a lot of hard work went into that I'm sure.

 

[Marcus Itera]

[member="Solan Charr"]

Outstanding work. I don't think I've ever seen this level of in-depth detail on any planet/organization submission.

 

[Aithne Charr]

[member="Marcus Itera"]

Thanks, anything you think i can expand while im able to at the moment?

 

[Marcus Itera]

[member="Solan Charr"]

Honestly, it looks like you focus a little too much on numbers. Lots of detail on the government and its spending, military fluff, but I see very little in terms of culture.

EDIT: Just found the Wookie page. Let me read it before adding more input.

 

[Marcus Itera]

[member="Solan Charr"]

Sorry for the double post, but I did a little more research and it looks like you've got your bases covered nicely. Awesome work, and effort.

 

[Aithne Charr]

[member="Marcus Itera"]

Ya, thats why i love the planet. Its Canon Culture is so awesome and i made efforts to remove some of the Sith centralized influence and pushed more of the actual Keshiri culture.

(All the new cities are focused more on Keshiri culture and external influences rather than the efforts of the Lost Tribe.)

 

[Jsc]

[member="Solan Charr"]

The checklist I use when researching planets,

• Grid location
• Planet Type
• Star Type
• Species + Population Density
• Government Type
• Capital Name
• Local Navy Density
• Native Exotic Materials
• Planetary Special Features

Optional research I might dabble in,

• Current events
• Lore
• Points of Interest
• Military Schema

You're Kesh write up looks good. A bit too detailed if you asked me. But if that's what floats your boat? Hey. Go for it dude.

 

[Aithne Charr]

I should add the Materials and stuff... good ideas there... and ya i have a habit of getting as detailed as i can. *Points at the Confederacy stuff*

 

[Laira Darkhold]

*Looks at fleet bigger than T6 company Fleet around one planet, with additional company fleet support.*

Why did I work to tier up at all?

 

[Aithne Charr]

[member="Draco Vereen"]

Here is the difference, all those ships can be wiped out with a flick of a wrist from your company... keep in mind you have a company that can field destroyers and cruisers lol

Remember, Quality is much better than quantity...

 

[Aithne Charr]

Plus, Solan bought very few of the ships... most of them were taken in way of leaving from Solan's last two leadership positions once the larger organizations fell apart. So that too.

 

[Jsc]

Why did I work to tier up at all?

Lol. Pretty sure Corporate Fleets are not meant for dick-measuring contents. But I do find that idea hilarious.

 

[Aithne Charr]

[member="Jay Scott Clark"]

Plus, like i said, it can wipe me out as well as resupply itself in a snap. Kesh's fleet can't be resupplied as that is a complete breakdown of every ship they own. (Not counting fighters and small shit. Those can be realistically resupplied).

 

[Jsc]

[member="Solan Charr"]

You're welcome to it man. Go nuts. I just laughed when Draco crunched the numbers.

Also, during the Galactic Event against Omni, it was the local picket fleets of the individual member worlds of the Republic who did most of the fighting at the end of the campaign. As, the Alliance Fleet had mostly been wiped out in the early campaign.

*wink*

 

[Laira Darkhold]

[member="Jay Scott Clark"]

True, they aren't but its still funny to me.

Also, I am a numbers guy. Numbers can't lie. People can only mistake them.

 

[Aithne Charr]

I was sadly not here for that event.

 

[Aithne Charr]

[member="Draco Vereen"]

And i thank you for bringing up the point about the ships, i should add somewhere about how the ships were gained.

 

[Garza]

SO.MUCH.INFO!

This is actually really cool. I had plans on getting my own planet and creating a Minor faction that literally did everything on that one planet alone. Never going Major or whatever. Because I wanted to put a lot of detail into this planet. However what you are doing is far exceeding the expectations that I had for myself.

I must accept the challenge to do better than you did.... or at least come close.

Seriously man, really good.

 

[Aithne Charr]

[member="Nick Imura"]

Funny part is ive been trying to get a faction running with the same amount of detail... its not working,