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Public Korriban : Rituals of a Queen?

Her smile is faint. Calculated.

"I needed you to understand the stakes.

You are not a guest here, Elian.

You are a piece on the board.

And the galaxy is moving."

She steps closer, whispering now, her voice almost a caress.

"If I can seduce a Jedi…

what makes you think I can’t seduce a Council?"

"They’ve already started asking about your silence.

How you’ve been… blurry in your reports."
 
"Then I’ll build a new side…

just for you and me."


Then she turns and walks away—leaving him alone in the dark, in silence, with the weight of a choice only he can make.
 
THE SHADOW CELLS – BENEATH THE SPIRE – NIGHT

Elian’s cloak drips with dust as he slips through the blackened stone corridors—forbidden tunnels once carved by Sith ancestors. Now repurposed as holding cells for enemies, traitors… and those Zori hasn’t decided what to do with yet.

He stops at a reinforced durasteel door, its surface etched with ancient Sith warnings. Inside, the flicker of red energy pulses like a heartbeat.

He opens it.

The cell is bare but dignified. No chains. No filth. Just a dim red glow, and VELETH RAYNE, sitting cross-legged, eyes closed in silent meditation.

She doesn’t look up.

VELETH: "She sent you to finish the job?"

ELIAN: "No. She doesn’t know I’m here."

(That gets her attention. She opens her eyes, guarded but curious.)

VELETH: "Then you’re either braver than I thought…Or more foolish."

ELIAN: "I need to know who she was before all this. Before the throne. Before me."

(Veleth studies him. The broken Jedi. The man caught between fire and faith.)

VELETH: "You’re not the first to fall in love with her. You won’t be the last."

(She leans forward, voice low.)

"But if you think you’re changing her…you haven’t seen what I’ve seen."
 
GRAND HALL – NIGHT

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The Great Hall of the Obsidian Spire stretches like a cathedral carved into a mountain. Black marble floors, polished until they reflect the firelight. Stained glass windows of red and violet cast bleeding patterns across the long banquet table.

ZORI sits at the head, reclining on a throne carved from Korriban’s volcanic obsidian, inlaid with Sith runes. Her armor has been replaced by flowing ceremonial robes—dark silk, wound with shimmering strands of Force-reactive thread that pulse with her presence.

Acolytes move in silence, their faces veiled in crimson and gold.

The feast is ritual. Worship disguised as hospitality.
• One presents roasted myrrlin beast, glazed with black spice sap, harvested from the caves of Yavin IV.

• Another pours smoke-thickened wine, its vapor curling into glyphs as it touches her cup.

• A third kneels, offering spiced ashfruit, which only grows near corrupted kyber fields—each bite carries the sweetness of danger.

They never speak.

ZORI watches them with an unreadable expression—queen, goddess, martyr, tyrant. Her fingers trail along the rim of her chalice. She drinks. Slowly. Thoughtfully.

Her mind drifts to Elian.​
 
LATER THAT NIGHT

The hall pulses with warmth from hanging braziers, casting deep crimson shadows across the ceiling’s arches. The smoke-thickened wine in Zori’s chalice now glows faintly violet, its surface swirling as though whispering secrets.

Zori reclines lazily on her throne, one leg draped over the armrest, the other grounded like a predator at rest.

A slight smirk touches her lips as she finishes her drink.

She lifts the chalice.
"I’m bored. Bring me entertainment."

The acolytes freeze for only a second—then bow wordlessly and begin to move. There’s no panic. This is a ritual. And they’ve been trained well.

From a side corridor emerge two figures—her personal slaves, both beautiful, both silent.

RHYSSA – a tall, lithe Mirialan woman with jade skin and gold-ink tattoos along her cheekbones. She wears a translucent silver tunic, trailing at her ankles.

DAEN – a young human male with dark auburn hair, bare-chested, wearing loose black silk trousers. His wrists bear elegant Sith-script cuffs—decorative, but symbolically binding.

They kneel at the base of the dais, heads bowed. Zori leans forward with theatrical grace, one finger curling against her lips in mock thought.

"Rhyssa. Daen. You’ve been watching the fire dances, haven’t you?"

They nod, eyes averted.

"Then show me something… original."

Rhyssa rises, pulling Daen to his feet. They move like shadows, gracefully circling one another as the room stills. A new music begins—low, pulsing drums mixed with breathy vocals, ancient Sith hymns turned seductive.

The two begin their dance—not crude, but intimate, dangerous. Like two serpents circling flame. Every motion crafted to please her. Every glance a silent offering.

Zori watches, sipping her wine again. Her gaze is heavy, hungry, but also… reflective.

She leans toward a nearby acolyte.

"Do you know what the Jedi never understood?"

"Desire is power."

"And power, properly wielded, is irresistible."

The acolyte says nothing. She doesn’t need him to. Zori reclines again, eyes never leaving the performance. The flames flicker in her gaze like a prophecy being written.

But even as she indulges, her mind is elsewhere.

With Elian.

With Veleth.

With the throne she hasn’t yet taken.
 
VELETH’S CELL

The silence hangs heavy. Only the faint hum of ancient warding runes gives the cell its breath.

ELIAN stands in the half-light, jaw tight, eyes haunted.

VELETH studies him, then speaks, not cruelly—but like one peering into the soul of a man standing on a cliff’s edge.

VELETH: "You’re in love with her."

((He doesn’t answer.))

"You think that makes you special."

"It doesn’t."

(That cuts through him. He moves closer.)

ELIAN: "What do you mean?"

VELETH: "Before you came… there was another. A woman. Jedi-trained."

"Her name was Seris Vale."

ELIAN: "Seris…"

The name coils like a ghost in his memory. He’d heard it in whispers, once, on a patrol manifest.

VELETH: "She came here under the guise of diplomacy. But she was drawn to Zori like a moth to flame. Same as you."

((Elian catches his breath. Veleth watches him closely.))

VELETH: "They were inseparable. More than lovers. They meditated together. Bled kyber together."

"Seris even renounced her Jedi creed, quietly."

ELIAN: "Then what happened?"

(Veleth looks away. Her voice drops.)

VELETH: "She questioned the mission. She tried to convince Zori to delay the uprising. Said she saw… cracks forming. In the Force.

In Zori.
"

((A long pause. Elian feels a chill in his bones.))

ELIAN: "Did Zori kill her?"

VELETH: "No.Worse. She erased her."

"Publicly shamed her. Called her a traitor to the great cause. Had her exiled into the wastelands without protection or allies."

"Her body was never found."

"But there are whispers in the deeper crypts that something… answers to her name"

((The air thickens. Elian’s throat tightens. Veleth leans in now, voice sharp and bitter.))

VELETH: "You’re not her salvation, Elian."

"You’re her pattern."
 
(Meanwhile in ZORI’S PRIVATE CHAMBERS)

Zori stands alone now, the feast long over. Her fingers toy absently with the rim of a silver wine goblet. Her gaze is fixed on a small holo-crystal, flickering with old footage.
"Seris…"

The image: two women laughing, sitting on a cold stone ledge overlooking a canyon. Zori’s face younger, lighter. Her armor missing. Just robes. Just bare skin and trust.

She watches it once more, then deactivates it.

Her eyes harden. She places the crystal inside a sealed drawer…

Then locks it with a thought.

 
LOWER CRYPTS

The stone corridors twist in unnatural ways the deeper Elian goes. Ancient Sith architecture, etched with glowing red sigils, casts long shadows as his torchlight flickers against the obsidian walls. Dust floats like memory in the air.

Bones litter the corners. Some old. Some disturbingly fresh.

Elian’s breath is slow, controlled—but his pulse is racing.

He stops at a circular chamber—half-collapsed, the ground fractured around a forgotten altar. Above it, a half-shattered statue of a woman with an outstretched hand. Her face is cracked, but he knows. He knows.

SERIS VALE.

He approaches, running his fingers along the inscription, worn by time and deliberate defacement. Only a few words remain legible.

“She reached for peace… and found only silence.”
His lips part—he wants to speak her name, to honor her.

But the temperature drops. The air tightens. The flicker of his torch is snuffed out by a sudden gust of unseen wind.

A voice cuts through the dark.​
 
"You shouldn’t be here."

((ZORI stands just beyond the archway, flanked by two silent sentinels. Her robe is darker now, her presence a crushing weight in the crypt.))
 
"She betrayed me. And now you do the same?"

Her eyes bore into him—not seduction now. Not softness. Power. Disappointment. Fear. Perhaps even… heartbreak.

"I brought you into my chambers."

"Into my mind."

"Into my heart."

"And now you dig through the ashes of what I buried…as if that makes you righteous?"
 
"Understanding is for the weak."

"The dead."

(A pause. Her lips twitch—but not in amusement.)

"You forget where you are, Elian."

"This isn’t the Temple, You are not here to save me."
 

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