Approved NPC Mei-Udo-Shael

[Lilla Syrin]

OUT OF CHARACTER INFORMATION
Intent: To provide an NPC Master for Lilla Syrin
Image Credit: Ki-Adi-Mundi from Star Wars
Role: A former Galactic Republic Jedi Master - now serving with the Republic Remnant
Links: Republic Remnant

PHYSICAL INFORMATION
Age: Approaching old age
Force Sensitivity: Master
Species: Cerean
Appearance: Male, 1.98 metres tall, weighing 82 kilograms, with white hair, yellow eyes and pale skin

SOCIAL INFORMATION
Name: Mei-Udo-Shael
Loyalties: The Force: Jedi Order; Republic Remnant
Wealth: None
Notable Possessions: Lightsaber
Skills:
1 Telekinesis - Master
2 Forms I-VI - Master
3 Telepathy - Master
4 Crucitorn - Master
5 Instinctive astrogation - Master
Personality: A devout member of the Order, Mei-Udo-Shael had strong ties to his fellow Jedi but had particularly strong bonds with his Padawans. When the Republic fell, Mei-Udo-Shael became a recluse, meditating on the Force. When the Remnant rose, he was slow to respond but, once convinced the mistakes from the past would not be repeated, he re-joined the Order, but chose not to take a new Padawan, preferring to spend his time lecturing and studying.
Mei-Udo-Shael reviled dark siders and remains conflicted when so many in the Jedi Orders around the galaxy choose to ally with those that fall short of declaring themselves Sith, but that use the Dark side of the Force.
Aside from combat, he is most comfortable in a cockpit, previously serving the Jedi Starfighter Corps as an ace pilot. Upgrading many of the Order's craft, he possesses natural piloting skills. Enhanced by his natural telepathic abilities, he is able to not only read minds, but instinctively astrogate his starfighters through hyperspace without a navigation computer.

COMBAT INFORMATION
Weapons of Choice: Lightsaber and the Force
Combat Function: Trained as a Jedi Guardian, Mei is a talented swordsman and tactician, wielding a lightsaber with a green crystal to produce its emerald blade. Capable of wielding the Force proficiently, Master Mei’s greatest strengths lie in his natural ability to hone his mind into a disciplined weapon.
He is an extremely skilled duelist, and can wield both a single saber and a double-bladed lightsaber. He is best known for utilising Form V, and in particular Djem So.
He has reduced combat effectiveness when he is cut off from the Force and has become too dependent on the Force in general. He is at a disadvantage against ranged opponents as he uses the lightsaber as his sole weapon.
Mei has an innate ability to endure great physical pain, a trait developed throughout his Jedi training. Enhanced through his connection to the Force and his Jedi training, he is a master of the rare technique known as Crucitorn.

HISTORICAL INFORMATION
Mei was discovered at a young age and so has been a Jedi for almost his entire life. After more than two decades as a Padawan he became a Jedi Knight and returned to Cerea to become the Jedi Watchman of the sector. Despite his species' low birth rate he has never married or conceived children, deciding he could not do so without having an emotional attachment to them.
Unlike many Cereans, Mei does not believe in his home world's isolation from the galaxy
A veteran of many invasions and skirmishes, Mei has faced many manifestations of the Sith Order and survived, although the same could not be said of the Republic.

 

[Eugen Aker]

[member="Lilla Syrin"] Under review.

 

[Eugen Aker]

[member="Lilla Syrin"]

Hello there,

OUT OF CHARACTER INFORMATION Intent: To provide an NPC Master for Lilla Syrin Image Credit: Here Role: A former Galactic Republic Jedi Master - now serving with the Republic Remnant Links: Republic Remnant PHYSICAL INFORMATION Age: Approaching old age Force Sensitivity: Master Species: Cerean Appearance: Male, 1.98 metres tall, weighing 82 kilograms, with white hair, yellow eyes and pale skin

You'll need to hyperlink to the RR faction page and species.

The image needs to be properly sourced. You can put down something like "Ki-Adi-Mundi from Star Wars".

COMBAT INFORMATION Weapons of Choice: Lightsaber and the Force Combat Function: Trained as a Jedi Guardian, Mei is a talented swordsman and tactician, wielding a lightsaber with a green crystal to produce its emerald blade. Capable of wielding the Force proficiently, Master Mei’s greatest strengths lie in his natural ability to hone his mind into a disciplined weapon. He is an extremely skilled duelist, and can wield both a single saber and a double-bladed lightsaber. He is best known for utilising Form V, and in particular Djem So.

As a Master Level FU with a broad range of skills, he'll need some kind of weakness to balance this out. Perhaps something like reduced combat effectiveness when he is cut off from the Force or is just too dependent on the Force in general. Being at a disadvantage against ranged opponents as he favors the lightsaber as his primary weapon.

HISTORICAL INFORMATION Mei has an innate ability to endure great physical pain, a trait developed throughout his Jedi training. Enhanced through his connection to the Force and his Jedi training, he is a master of the rare technique known as Crucitorn. Aside from combat, he is most comfortable in a cockpit, previously serving the Jedi Starfighter Corps as an ace pilot. Upgrading many of the Order's craft, he possesses natural piloting skills. Enhanced by his natural telepathic abilities, he is able to not only read minds, but instinctively astrogate his starfighters through hyperspace without a navigation computer.

This reads more like a continuation of the strengths and weaknesses section instead of the character's history. Please integrate this with the proper section and then fill out History again.

Instinctive astrogation needs to be listed as a skill, as it's distinct from normal piloting.

 

[Lilla Syrin]

[member="Jyoti Nooran"]

Many thanks for the feedback - I've updated the information.

 

[Eugen Aker]

[member="Lilla Syrin"]

Thank you for the edits.

Approved, pending secondary.

 

[Zeradias Mant]

Approved.