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The smoldering metal crackled in the early morning light. A pillar of smoke reached high into the sky and drifted east with the breeze. The remnants of a ship jutted above the tall, untouched grass around it, twisted and bent into abstract, irreparable shapes. Behind it, the earth was gouged for half a kilometer, like the tail of a comet. The aftermath of their violent, premature landing.
Sadira stared vacantly at the two suns rising before her, peaking shyly through the cloudy lavender horizon and thorny trees in the distance. One vibrant orange-red, the other a smaller, pale blue. The tall grass--taller than her--hissed softly in the breeze. The occasional dying ember drifted down past her like hellish snowflakes. It was so warm there. Warmer than she expected, but maybe it was just the fire behind her.
She didn't know how long she'd been standing there. A moment of clarity would come, and with it, a sense of panic and urgency. Then returned the realization that she was utterly alone. Without her ship, without her Master, and without a clue what perils this unknown planet hid from her. Then her thoughts would fade again like the receding tide, and she would find the numbing silence. If only the stabbing pain in her skull, and the blistering of her arm, would fade with the rest.
Rivulets of blood weaved through her harassed brown hair and dripped steadily from her ear and jaw. Black and red smudges covered her neutral toned robes. The sleeve of her left arm was torn and singed almost completely off, with a fresh, oozing burn throbbing over much of her arm.
"Master Irion!" She exclaimed suddenly, a light returning to her eyes as if she remembered something important. Then she turned, a little too quickly, to the ship, and the light disappeared again in the face of a burning metal grave. Concentrating was...difficult.
Sadira stared vacantly at the two suns rising before her, peaking shyly through the cloudy lavender horizon and thorny trees in the distance. One vibrant orange-red, the other a smaller, pale blue. The tall grass--taller than her--hissed softly in the breeze. The occasional dying ember drifted down past her like hellish snowflakes. It was so warm there. Warmer than she expected, but maybe it was just the fire behind her.
She didn't know how long she'd been standing there. A moment of clarity would come, and with it, a sense of panic and urgency. Then returned the realization that she was utterly alone. Without her ship, without her Master, and without a clue what perils this unknown planet hid from her. Then her thoughts would fade again like the receding tide, and she would find the numbing silence. If only the stabbing pain in her skull, and the blistering of her arm, would fade with the rest.
Rivulets of blood weaved through her harassed brown hair and dripped steadily from her ear and jaw. Black and red smudges covered her neutral toned robes. The sleeve of her left arm was torn and singed almost completely off, with a fresh, oozing burn throbbing over much of her arm.
"Master Irion!" She exclaimed suddenly, a light returning to her eyes as if she remembered something important. Then she turned, a little too quickly, to the ship, and the light disappeared again in the face of a burning metal grave. Concentrating was...difficult.
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