HK-36
The Iron Lord Protector (Neutral Good)
[member="Ashin Varanin"], [member="Valeria Aetani"], [member="Thurion Heavenshield"], [member="Kära Vi'dreya"]
I would like to ask for the recently approved species submission the Barkspawn to be taken back from its approved status and put through the Factory once more for the following three reasons,
Most importantly,
There were no edits done to the submission based on what I have requested of the writer to edit and elaborate on, while he did answered my concerns and questions in his reply he did not apply them into the submission itself. I have asked him about that per Skype before my sudden LOA and he said that he will edit the submission soon.
Furthermore,
The questions he had based on the concerns I put up, specifically for the Barkspawn's cloaking ability as I questioned its effectiveness against Non-Force Users during the day out in the open, were not answered neither by me nor the judge that approved the submission.
Moreover,
I had further questions and concerns based on his answers to my initial edit requests, for example when we spoke about the Semi-Corporeal abilities of the Barkspawn it was mentioned that it can be harmed by Force-based attacks in that form and it stayed on the ground at all times while moving instead of floating as the Starweird. Based on that I was going to ask whether this vulnerability extended to weapons imbued with Force such as some swords and if it is moving via walking, running, sprinting, etc. does it mean that the creature's paws could still be damaged by conventional weaponry like caltrops since moving via ground instead of floating means that the Barkspawn has to push itself off of the ground, that suggest at the moment it touches the ground it has at least partial physical form since otherwise it would just phase into the soil instead.
In conclusion,
Based on these three points I would like to ask for the submission to be put through the Factory once more so the Writer can make the edits I have required, I can address his concerns based on my judgement of the creature's cloaking abilities, and I can ask further questions about the concerns I had with the submission. Since this is all centered around just the Strengths and Weakness section, everything else in the submission looks good, I believe I can get it done rather quickly, but as it stands, as one of the species judges and the judge that worked on the submission initially, I do not agree with the submission's approval.
Thank you for taking your time to hear my concerns.
I would like to ask for the recently approved species submission the Barkspawn to be taken back from its approved status and put through the Factory once more for the following three reasons,
Most importantly,
There were no edits done to the submission based on what I have requested of the writer to edit and elaborate on, while he did answered my concerns and questions in his reply he did not apply them into the submission itself. I have asked him about that per Skype before my sudden LOA and he said that he will edit the submission soon.
Furthermore,
The questions he had based on the concerns I put up, specifically for the Barkspawn's cloaking ability as I questioned its effectiveness against Non-Force Users during the day out in the open, were not answered neither by me nor the judge that approved the submission.
Moreover,
I had further questions and concerns based on his answers to my initial edit requests, for example when we spoke about the Semi-Corporeal abilities of the Barkspawn it was mentioned that it can be harmed by Force-based attacks in that form and it stayed on the ground at all times while moving instead of floating as the Starweird. Based on that I was going to ask whether this vulnerability extended to weapons imbued with Force such as some swords and if it is moving via walking, running, sprinting, etc. does it mean that the creature's paws could still be damaged by conventional weaponry like caltrops since moving via ground instead of floating means that the Barkspawn has to push itself off of the ground, that suggest at the moment it touches the ground it has at least partial physical form since otherwise it would just phase into the soil instead.
In conclusion,
Based on these three points I would like to ask for the submission to be put through the Factory once more so the Writer can make the edits I have required, I can address his concerns based on my judgement of the creature's cloaking abilities, and I can ask further questions about the concerns I had with the submission. Since this is all centered around just the Strengths and Weakness section, everything else in the submission looks good, I believe I can get it done rather quickly, but as it stands, as one of the species judges and the judge that worked on the submission initially, I do not agree with the submission's approval.
Thank you for taking your time to hear my concerns.