2/5. The font's cool, as is most of the tone. However, the image could be better framed (particularly with respect to the Rule of Thirds), and you should probably pick one of the two phrases. Both are good independently, but together, the message is confused, if not paradoxical.
The brightest light casts the darkest shadow, so a burning out star would cast a pretty dark shadow, until it dies and there's only darkness, unless you count the new star born out of the dying old one, that would be way bright, but still cast shadows, and...
Are you the star, the darkness, or the dragon? Is the juxtaposition of the messages foreshadowing your character's ambivalence to the light and dark sides of the Force?