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Approved Tech Ring of Tempest

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Manufacturer: Cameron Tyris
Type: N/A
Market Status: Closed Market
Production: Unique
Weight: Light
Size: Small
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Credit: SeaArtAI
SPECIAL FEATURES
  • Bound to Cameron: The ring has been altered by the Force so only Cameron can utilize it.
STRENGTHS
  • Water Control: The ring can allow the user to manipulate water within their line of sight, though not any inside a person.
  • Wind Manipulation: The ring can allow the user to manipulate air, but not any inside a person.
  • Electricity Manipulation: The ring can allow the user to cast Alter Environment's Electrokinesis.
  • Weather Control: The ring can control the weather. This allows the user to generate heavy rain, thunderstorms, and hail.
WEAKNESSES
  • Force Disruptions: Things that disrupt the Force such as Ylasmari, Voidstone or similar would render this a normal ring.
  • One with the Dark: As the Darkside of the Force was used to create the ring, weapons imbued with Force Light or similar would be effective against the ring, and weakne it.
  • When wearing the ring, one can't use lightside force powers.
  • Acid: The ring's weak to acid.
  • Focus: Controlling the abilities of the ring requires a lot of focus.
DESCRIPTION

Sith Alchemy was used by Cameron in the creation of a set of rings to give him a concealable weapon that he could always have with him. Cortosis was then purchased on the black market by Cameron to utilize in the creation of the second of the rings. Once this was done, many gemstones were looked at and studied. Eventually a blue Khyber crystal was chosen and cut into the proper shape by Cameron to use in the creation of the ring. Once the physical components were done, the hard part came. Sith Alchemy was used to infuse the ring with a powerful connection to the dark side of the force, allowing it to manipulate wind, and water.
 


Out Of Character Info


Intent: To create another of Cameron's Rings.
Image Source(s): https://www.seaart.ai/
Permissions: N/A

Technical Information


Affiliation: Cameron Tyris
Model: N/A
Modular: No
Material: Alchemized Cortosis, Sith Alchemy, Blue Khyber Crystal.
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Cameron Tyris Cameron Tyris Hi, I'll be reviewing this.

So, as a pretty prominent Weatherbender writer, I'd like to ask a few questions about the capabilities of this ring.

You say it can control the weather, what's the extent of that? Are we talking light rain? Thunderstorms? Hurricanes?

Secondly, Force Lightning is different from Alter Environment which is more general electrokinesis.

You mention constructs. What does that entail? We talking Green Lantern Constructs, something else?

This subs needs some expansion, is all I ask.
 
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Cameron Tyris Cameron Tyris Thank you for the clarification. I ask you add that information to the sub itself, as a reader is not gonna sift through these replies.

AS for the constructs, while in theory I have no issue with them, I would like to ask for some sort of canon source, as I'm not familiar with any sort of thing in Star Wars, and we're very strict about not letting people invent new force powers.
 
Fiery Energy shows that fire can be generated. With telekinesis, or Pyrokinesis, or similar Force Techniques such could likely be manipulated into various shapes, IE blasts of flame, or with the other elements, blasts. It isn't a stretch to say that they could be made into constructs, as well.

I have also found Adiabatic Shield.



But if you'd like that removed, I will. I'll just have to find another way to achieve that, if you don't want it present.

Rara Gowisi Rara Gowisi
 
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Cameron Tyris Cameron Tyris

Fiery energy has never been shown to create solid objects, so I'm gonna shoot that down.

As for the shield, directly from the wiki
While this shield did not protect the user from blaster fire or impact with solid objects
This pretty clearly states that the shield is not a solid shield, but simply a wall of air preventing fumes and the like from penetrating an area.

I'd prefer you to remove it, as there's little canon basis for it, and I recommend you find another route for this kind of ability.

This ring is overall already powerful, and constructs start to veer into crossover territory.
 
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