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Ronan Xilo

Darth Ronan

"If ever a face meant death, if looks could kill,
NAME: Ronan Xilo
FACTION: Sith Empire.
RANK: Sith Lord.
SPECIES: Half Neti / Half Human
AGE: [Unknown]
SEX: Male
HEIGHT: 6'6
Weight: 80kg
EYES: Most likely black or a Dark Gray.
HAIR: Black
SKIN: Light tan.
FORCE SENSITIVE: Yes
Personalty:
Ronan lives up to his nickname and acts in the best interests of the Empire as a whole. He attempts to kill Jedi on site, and has shown a strong distaste toward Mandalorian, which only increased after the public executions. He is fanatic, about his work, and about his allegiance to the Empire. He is a natural leader, and thrives in combat situations when commanding troops, or simply when he is battling alone.
He does not dislike those that are power hungry, but he dislikes that the Jedi try to hide their dark aspirations. Thus, he is dedicated solely to the Empire, and embraces his darkness. Like many other Sith, he welcomes the dark side, and takes pride in what he is.
Although he is a hunter, he only kills when necessary. Ronan sees no reason to harm innocents. Of course, no Jedi or Mandalorian is innocent to him, but simple people are not on his list of targets.
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Stregeths and Weakness's
+Knows when to withdrawal from a fight.
+Can partially shape-shift his appearance due to the Neti percent of him.
+Can live up to 5,000 years due to him being a Neti.
+Ronan is an avid practitioner of Form IV, since it requires that users rely on a mix of speed, strength, and focus, which are his strong fields. He tends to find more aggressive, powerful techniques to be more effective, and so is more attracted to such forms. He has mastered Form VII He is very skilled in it and has defeated many opponents with it.
+Strong Connection to the force.
​+ Ronan is very agile and has a lot of strength behind his hits.
-He tend's to kill people if they fail to uphold what they promised
-Not good with people -Not a good pilot
- Still being trained in being a pilot
- Has problem's staying calm in situations.
- Doesn't know how to use a blaster
- Tends to stay away from hand to hand combat due to him not excelling far within it. Usually in a fight he might produce one good hand to hand combat move and then he'd repeat it- which could be easily seen through.
- Is a bad actor.
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Lightsaber Form Skill list
Juyo
Mastered
Vaapad
Mastered
Ataru
Mastered
Djem So
Adept
Shii-Cho
Okay with.
Makashi
Adept
Soresu
Adept
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Force Powers
Telekinesis: Expert
Jump: Mastered
Persuasian: Adept
Alter Enviornment: Good
Sense: Decent
Lightening: Mastery
Choke: Decent
Force Maelstorm: Okay
Force Concealment: Decent
Mind Probe: Near Expert
Force Rage: Decent
Force Fear: Very Adept
Tutaminis: Decent
Detoxify Poison: Decent
Mind Control: Mastered
Deadly Site: Decent
Sever Force: Okay
Force Drain: Okay

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Ronan is a somewhat tall man, built decently for combat, with good stamina. He tends to wear dark, flowing robes. Although he normally wears a mask, and covers his body constantly, Ronan is sometimes forced to show his face. He has black medium length hair and black eyes, that contrast against his pale skin, making him look more sinister. His face's features are sharp, with a prominent jawline and cheekbones, and a slim, smooth nose. Frown lines can sometimes be seen depending on the lighting, and his face sometimes looks to be solidified in a constant scowl.
Biography:
"Show me a spark, and I will give you an inferno."
Indoctrinated from youth, Ronan was born to a military family serving for the Republic. He was born on Bastion on a military base, and was simply met with tolerance, rather than familial love. His father was a soldier tasked with guarding the encampment, and so was rarely seen by his son, and his mother was a paramedic. She was constantly dispatched to various places around the planet. When he was 5, his parents shipped him off to a Jedi academy and washed their hands of him.
He showed Larged Force sensitivity, More than the average Youngling, and was put in Jedi training with other students. However, he did not display the warm-hearted compassion others did. Even as a child, Ronan was cold and distant. Many dreaded that he would one day lash out, although he never did. He disliked unnecessary violence, and viewed it as weak to harm others without reason. If he needed to, he found reason however.
He trained for 16 years in all sorts of fields, from hand-to-hand combat to dueling. Ronan showed a preference for stealth in his missions, and was reprimanded by his instructors for this. The other students kept their distance, since he was an upsetting person to be around. Still, he never became angry, and this may be one of the reasons other dreaded being around him. No one knew when he would explode.
At the age of 21, he departed from the Academy, independently. He declined acceptance into the Jedi army, and simply chose to leave. He wandered the galaxy alone for a year, but soon found himself in the companionship of another man just like him: trained by the Jedi, yet independent. His friend, Jyl, was equally reluctant to form a friendship at first, but after a few months, they got rather close.
They visited remote locations, and trained together. It was hard for either to point out a planet where they'd been without the other. 3 years into their friendship, Jyl got into an altercation with a Jedi, and killed him. Ronan did not know it, but his friend was on the path to the dark side. And he was taking Ronan with him.
Their outings grew more violent as time went on. They started brawls in cantinas, beat up smugglers and drunkards for their money, and caused whatever chaos they needed to get what they wanted. Eventually, their past caught up with them, and they were cornered by another Jedi, the master of the Padawan Jyl had killed.
Together, they killed him. The two men expected it to be over, but the situation was just beginning. Assuming they were safe,
they rested in an abandoned warehouse, only to be awakened at the crack of dawn to the sound of a lightsaber switching on.
"Heaven has no rage like love to hatred turned."
A jedi had been tasked with executing Ronan and Jyl for crimes against the Republic. Jyl was captured, and Ronan forced to flee. He got away, with the image of his friend's beheading to keep him company.
A warrant for arrest and bounty were placed on Ronan's head. Wherever he went, he was turned away. Eventually, he traveled back to Bastion to explore his past. He was hunted by the troops at the military encampment, and eventually ran into his father, who he was forced to kill. Ronan left the planet, and joined the Sith.
He made a vow to avenge all who have fallen because of the Republic, and started spending time hunting Jedi and anti-Empire Mandalorians.
Ship: Sith Infiltrator
Family: Darth Maglus - Ancestor
Bounties Collected: N/A
 
I wouldn't really call those weaknesses, only one of them really counts, and is isn't really a good one at that, just saying.

[member="Ronan Xilo"]
 

Darth Ronan

"If ever a face meant death, if looks could kill,
Well It's my character is it not? It's still in development, Thank's for your concern though, I am still heavily working on this character and trying to RP with him.

[member="gdsryrox"]
 

Darth Ronan

"If ever a face meant death, if looks could kill,
Yeah I know, I'm testing this in Notepad and from a different site I use to RP on which the Text is all black on there. Thank's for telling me [member="Eddie"]
 
[member="Darth Ronan"] Really recommend you take a bit more of a look at the weaknesses. Not that I'm perfect or anything, but I don't think many of those would affect you much in a common RP situation.
 
[member="Darth Ronan"]

I agree with [member="Darth Aegis"] on this one. Those weaknesses are by and large more of personality quirks and not actual weaknesses, especially when you compare them to his strengths. A good weakness is something physical like being blind or psychological like shutting completely down if he sees red blinky lights. Both of those are a little much but still better examples of a weakness than what you currently have.
 

Chance Bonaventure

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[member="Darth Ronan"] [member="Tristram Senan"] [member="Darth Aegis"]

Third-ed. Your weaknesses on this character are mostly irrelevant to any form of combat RP, and are easily dismissible if you don't want to recognize them. Already, just from one thread and combat scenario, I feel you've vastly overstepped what some Force powers are capable of...

I'd seriously reconsider some actual weaknesses that are combat specific and aren't contradictory:

+Ronan is an avid practitioner of Form IV, since it requires that users rely on a mix of speed, strength, and focus, which are his strong fields. He tends to find more aggressive, powerful techniques to be more effective, and so is more attracted to such forms. He has mastered Form VII He is very skilled in it and has defeated many opponents with it.

- Tends to stay away from hand to hand combat due to him not excelling far within it. Usually in a fight he might produce one good hand to hand combat move and then he'd repeat it- which could be easily seen through

For example - which is it? Is he really skilled, or not?

Please understand, this isn't to get at you, or attack you; this is purely to assist you in giving some realism to your character, which is currently skewed toward being too powerful.
 

Darth Ronan

"If ever a face meant death, if looks could kill,
Sidon Eshe said:
[member="Darth Ronan"] [member="Tristram Senan"] [member="Darth Aegis"]

Third-ed. Your weaknesses on this character are mostly irrelevant to any form of combat RP, and are easily dismissible if you don't want to recognize them. Already, just from one thread and combat scenario, I feel you've vastly overstepped what some Force powers are capable of...

I'd seriously reconsider some actual weaknesses that are combat specific and aren't contradictory:

+Ronan is an avid practitioner of Form IV, since it requires that users rely on a mix of speed, strength, and focus, which are his strong fields. He tends to find more aggressive, powerful techniques to be more effective, and so is more attracted to such forms. He has mastered Form VII He is very skilled in it and has defeated many opponents with it.

- Tends to stay away from hand to hand combat due to him not excelling far within it. Usually in a fight he might produce one good hand to hand combat move and then he'd repeat it- which could be easily seen through

For example - which is it? Is he really skilled, or not?

Please understand, this isn't to get at you, or attack you; this is purely to assist you in giving some realism to your character, which is currently skewed toward being too powerful.

What i Mean about that is he tends to repeat one same attack if he gets in a hand to hand combat type battle and such, Which means he doesn't usually use anything else- Basically he doesn't practice hand-to-hand combat nor does he excel at it
 
Shouldn't have to explain that to us, it should be stated in the character bio. If you get called out for it and then come up with some explanation later, it seems like you're just coming up with something to get out of trouble with it.
 

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