Approved Tech Ronens Lightsaber

[Ronen Jerik]

Source: https://www.pinterest.com/gregormilligan/lightsabers/
Intent: A symbol, and weapon for Ronen Jerik
Development Thread: If necessary
Manufacturer: Someone (character found it)
Model: N/A
Affiliation: Created by Ronen Jerik for The order of theSikver Jedi
Modularity: No.
Production: Created by me UNIQUE
Material: Durasteel, standard components, white crystal
Classification: Saber staff (Two of the above put together)
Size: Two handed
Length:
Hilt: 70
Blade: 150 cm
Weight: .14 kg
Special Features:
Its hilt is made of durasteel, so it is more resistant than mundane materials
Strengths:
Durable - The weight offers a high amount of momentum, allowing for faster strikes when done in succession.
Weaknesses:
Weight - The hilt is fairly heavy, and the blade is long, making it good for form 2, but makes it difficult to use quickly

Description: Ronen found it on his travels on Commenor, when he saw it fall off a one sith package, into a cave, he could feel it calling to him, and found it deep in the caves catacombs, it had a strange feel, but he decided it would serve him well.

 

[Jamie Pyne]

RESEARCH REVIEW
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Star Wars Canon:
Pending initial review
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Starwars Chaos:
Pending initial review
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WITHOUT DEV THREADS
Pending initial review
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WITH DEV THREADS
Pending Initial review
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SUGGESTIONS
Pending Inital review

 

[Jamie Pyne]

Hi [member="Ronen Jerik"]! I will be reviewing this submission.

Affiliation: Found it in an ancient Jedi cave in Commenor

• This field is typically for the person or group that the submission will be affiliated for. Strictly OOC information.

Production: Unknown

• This needs to follow the template.

Material: Phrik,

• Phrik is a restricted material and will require a short 10 post development thread for Unique or Semi-Unique.

Blade: 300 cm

• This is about 3x longer than a standard saber. (This blade is almost 10ft long). Reduce this to something more reasonable please.

 

[Ronen Jerik]

[member="Jamie Pyne"] ive made changes

 

[Jamie Pyne]

[member="Ronen Jerik"]

Affiliation: Found it in an ancient Jedi cave in Commenor

• This is still incorrect. It needs to state a person(s), company, or faction(s). (Example: The E-11 Blaster Rifle was produced for the Galactic Empire and used almost exclusively by Imperial Stormtroopers. Do not put the company unless the product is only for your company's use. Common choices include 'Open market' or the name of a specific faction.)

Production: Created by me

• This needs to follow the template: (The scale is Unique (Only One Character), Semi-Unique (Only A Handful of Characters), Limited (Only A Select Group Of NPCs/PCs), Minor (Any Character, Only Select Groups Of NPCs), Mass-Produced. (Anyone.))

Its hilt is resistant to Saber strikes, so it will not break easily

• You'll need a material that is specifically saber resistant to keep this.

Please also link the image source.

 

[Ronen Jerik]

Hopefully that cuts it


[member="Jamie Pyne"]

 

[Jamie Pyne]

[member="Ronen Jerik"]

Special Features:
Its hilt is made of durasteel, so it is resistant to Saber strikes, so it will not break easily

• This still needs to be corrected. Durasteel is not resistant to saber strikes. If you would like a material that doesn't require development and is minorly resistant, you may use something like Duranium.

 

[Zef Halo]

[member="Ronen Jerik"]

What's the status on this ? I am taking over from Jamie.

 

[Ronen Jerik]

I fixed everything she asked me to now, awaiting approval

 

[Zef Halo]

Special Features: Its hilt is made of durasteel, so it is resistant to Saber strikes, so it will not break easily

This is still there, Jamie already addressed it, so can you edit that. Durasteel, although resilient, is not as resistant to saber strikes .

 

[Ronen Jerik]

done

 

[Zef Halo]

Awesome. Pending Admin Approval. Thanks! [member="Spencer Varanin"]

 

[Allyson Locke]

Approved.