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Approved Lore Sanjin Planetary Defence Force

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OUT OF CHARACTER INFORMATION
  • Intent: Flesh out the Sanjin Planetary Defence force
  • Image Credit: Image Credit
  • Permissions: N/A
  • Links: N/A
GENERAL INFORMATION
  • Fleet Name: Sanjin Planetary Defence Force/Sanjin Planetary Defence Fleet
  • Classification: Planetary Defence Fleet
  • Affiliation:
  • Fleet Symbol: Fleet Symbol
  • Description: The Sanjin Planetary Defence Force is the primary defence force of Sanjin, consisting of a fleet and no army as Sanjin is a gas giant making an army useless. Instead infantry and ground war is handled by marines who are a direct part of the navy. The navy had previously fallen into disrepair and corruption but with the recent power change new vessels have been brought in and the planetary defence force retrained. Now the defence fleet is a force to be reckoned with.
SOCIAL INFORMATION
  • Headquarters: Sanjin
  • Ports of Call: Sanjin Setcor
  • Goals: Defend Sanjin and further the interests of the Sanjin Government
  • Reputation: Before its overhaul the fleet was known as nothing more than a melting pot of struggling patriots and common thugs. Now it is a highly professional force with new ships to match its new reputation.
COMPOSITION INFORMATION
  • Fleet Size: Medium
  • Lead Ship: Concord-class Star Defenders [The Militant]
  • Composition:
  • Organization:
    • Naval Fleets
      • Home Fleet - Null Command
        • x2 Concord-class Star Defenders
        • x12 Helve-class Armoured Cruisers
        • x10 Boneshatter-class Frigates
        • x4 Quasar Fire-class Transports
        • x14 Vanguard-Class Corvettes
      • Strike Fleet - Hammer Command
        • x2 Concord-class Star Defenders
        • x10 Helve-class Armoured Cruisers
        • x9 Boneshatter-class Frigates
        • x8 Quasar Fire-class Transports
        • x10 Vanguard-Class Corvettes
      • Expeditionary Fleet - Estoc Command
        • x1 Concord-class Star Defenders
        • x6 Helve-class Armoured Cruisers
        • x8 Boneshatter-class Frigates
        • x4 Quasar Fire-class Transports
        • x8 Vanguard-Class Corvettes
    • Marine Corps
      • 1st Division - Light Expeditionary Force
      • 3rd "Iron" Division - Armoured Infantry Division
      • 6th Division - Intelligence and Unconventional Warfare
      • Special Warfare Group 203
    • National Guard
      • Northern Hemisphere Command
      • Southern Hemisphere Command
MEMBERS
Jasol Dorsian - Commander-in-Chief

HISTORICAL INFORMATION
The defence fleet has for a long time acted as the defenders of Sanjin, dating back to the days of when Sanjin was merely a corporate mining project. With the planet now having its own people and culture the defence force defends it and its government from any threat, and from recent events that includes itself. Before the Optimatiums took power the fleet had degraded to its all time low under Mitt Dodt. It was using ships from the last century and many of its members were common thugs, loyal to corrupt government officials. They extorted independent miners, enforced high tax laws and many other deeds to financially advance the corrupt governor. However not all of its members were governor lackeys and some still served out of honour for their home world. Many of these individuals joined the Optimatium Party and soon they laid out a plan to overthrow the government while not drawing attention to themselves. A silent uprising which started with the 'disappearance of corrupt officials'. Not even the governor was spared and soon the party was in control, forming a new government. With the rise of a pro-military power the defence force saw a massive funding shift. Heavy cruisers and assault frigates replaced the degrading defence force ship. The fleet was reorganised as well into 3 commands, each serving their own purpose. Zero Command serves as the home fleet and is the largest of the fleetThe Defence Force now proudly serves once more, under a new banner.
 
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Zak Dymo

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Jasol Dorsian

I'll be conducting this review for you. This is very good. I have only one request.

Fleeting is governed by a Factory rule, which applies to Codex submissions.
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There are pros and cons to this, with one notable feature being that it assumes everything will fall into one of three categories: A company fleet, a minor faction fleet, or a major faction fleet. In this case, the reference to Sanjin just refers to the Wookieepedia article, so we don't have any of the above implicated by this.

There's an easy fix, from what I can tell. Over to you to say whether or not its a workable solution or not, which is to add the Galactic Alliance to the Affiliation field.

Let me know if there are any questions in light of my review. Otherwise, please tag me when you have completed any edits.
 

Ylla Caeli'runa

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Jasol Dorsian

What's the status on this sub? Would you like more time to complete the changes or is it ready to be moved to live judging?

If I don't hear anything back within a few days, this submission will be archived for inactivity. If you would like it pulled back out of the archives so that it can be worked on - Please make the request in the Submission-Modification Thread.
 
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