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Private Shadows on the Rim




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Valery stepped out of the speeder, her amber eyes narrowing as she took in the massive cave entrance. The flickering torches and the line of parked speeders painted a clear picture of recent activity, but the lack of guards sent a chill down her spine. For pirates who had supposedly been such a persistent threat, their carelessness was far too convenient to overlook.

Her hand rested lightly on the hilt of her lightsaber, her grip steady but not yet activating the weapon. Every nerve in her body was on high alert, the tension in the air thick enough to cut with a blade.

As Marshal Jen checked her tracker, Valery's gaze swept over the surrounding area one more time. She extended her senses into the Force, probing for any hint of hidden dangers. The cave radiated unease — a subtle hum of darkness and anticipation that prickled at the edges of her awareness. It wasn't enough to identify specifics, but it was enough to confirm her suspicions: they were walking into a trap.

Valery glanced at Gil as he ignited his lightsaber, the emerald glow reflecting off the uneven rock walls. His quiet remark earned him a faint smirk, her own lightsaber still unlit at her side. Her gaze flicked briefly to the Marshal, noting the way Jen held her blaster at her side. "Be careful. We don't know what's waiting for us deeper inside, but it's clear we're being led into something. Be ready."

With that, she stepped forward into the cavern, her movements silent and deliberate. The shadows seemed to thicken around them as the light from the entrance faded, the flicker of the torches casting eerie shapes on the walls. Valery kept her senses extended, her every step measured as they ventured further into the depths.

"This place feels wrong," she murmured to Gil, her voice barely above a whisper.








 


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If nothing was wrong, we wouldn’t be here Grandmaster,” Gil said, his voice trying to carry some humor in it as he made his way down the tunnel. Gil lifted the lightsaber up, almost to eye level to provide them with illumination as they descended further, and further, and further into the winding cave network they found themselves in. The sense of unease was beginning to grow stronger and stronger as they descended from one level to the next.

Gil came to a stop after about a kilometer into their search. He knelt down, holding the lightsaber near the ground. “Valery…” Gil said, his voice low. He waited until the other Jedi came over, and gestured at the ground. Dug in to the rock in dozens of different places were marks. They had the shape and indentation of nails clawing at rock, trying to find purchase. Judging from the size of them, they were likely made by juveniles.

What if the pirates weren’t attacking the colony for its resources,” Gil muttered, his eyes hardening, “but for something else. For someone else.

Gil rose to his feet slowly, turning to face Jen. “What exactly did you say happened to the children in the learning center?

The marshal was silent for several moments, her eyes going back and forth between the two Jedi. Finally, she smiled. It lacked any sense of warmth to it, and the sense of malice that suddenly began to flow from her, the mental wall that had been surrounding her slipping. The presence of the Dark Side began to permeate the cavern they were in, a dark taint that made Gil’s skin crawl. He leapt to his feet, bringing his lightsaber around to a Form IV guard position.

Marshal Jen Wielder,” Gil said, taking a step towards her, “you are under arrest for suspicion of aiding and abetting piracy and…

Gil did not get to finish his statement. A deep, rumbling echo shook the cavern, the vibrations throwing Gil off balance for a second before he planted his feet. To either side of Jen, sections of the rock wall fell outward, makeshift doors slamming down and shattering into thousands of pieces. Two shapes emerged from the openings; massive shapes clad in shadows and, from what Gil could see, pulsing red skin. The two creatures began walking towards Gil and Valery, blood dripping from their open, fanged mouths.

One of the creatures was wearing what looked like the rags very similar to what the colonists had been wearing.

What are these things,” Gil said, taking a step back, not to retreat, but to put himself on level ground.

Jen let out a toe curdling laugh, her eyes, once a light green, now tinged with streaks of a sickly yellow. “You did ask what had happened to the children, Jedi Horn. Well, here they are. Some of them anyway. The others turned out a bit better I think.” Jen gestured to the two creatures, flexing her fingers in strange ways that seemed to draw their attention. She then lowered her hand, and pointed a single finger towards Gil and Valery.

Kill them.

The two creatures roared, charging towards the Jedi. Jen, still smiling, turned and sprinted down one of the openings the creatures had made, her laugh echoing behind her.

Best of luck Jedi!


 



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Valery's steps faltered ever so slightly as Gil spoke her first name. It wasn't the formality she was used to from him, and though the situation was dire, the familiarity caught her off guard. A faint warmth flickered in her chest, cutting briefly through the dark unease that permeated the cavern. She gave him a small, appreciative glance but said nothing, refocusing her attention on the scene before them.

As she approached where Gil knelt, her amber eyes fell to the claw marks embedded in the stone. Her brow furrowed, and her stomach twisted as her mind connected the dots. The size, the frantic desperation in the patterns—it wasn't hard to piece together the horrific truth.

When Gil turned to confront Marshal Jen, Valery's attention snapped back to the woman, her hand reflexively tightening around the hilt of her lightsaber. The cold malice radiating from Jen was unmistakable, and as the Marshal's barrier slipped, the overwhelming surge of the Dark Side made Valery's skin crawl. Her heart sank as the realization solidified: they had been betrayed.

The rumbling that followed was enough to set Valery's instincts ablaze. She widened her stance for balance, steadying herself as rocks fell and shattered around them. Her amber eyes locked onto the two hulking forms emerging from the cavern walls, their grotesque appearance illuminated by the eerie glow of Gil's lightsaber. Blood dripped from their fanged mouths, and the ragged remnants of clothing made it all too clear who — or what — they once had been.

"What kind of monsters..." she muttered, stepping into a ready stance. Her amber eyes darted to Gil. "We end this."

The first creature lunged, claws swiping at her with raw, feral strength. Valery pivoted sharply, her lightsaber cutting through the air to intercept, severing the claw with a flash of sparks and molten flesh. It howled in pain but staggered back only momentarily before charging again.

"Gil!" she called, sidestepping into position. "I'll take this one — you get the other!"









 


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Gil watched the monsters approach, his eyes narrowing as he assessed what was before him. His senses were sharp, his mind working, and as he reached out with the Force, his mind was flooded emotions. Pain, fear, rage, emotions that struck him like a gundark, but what hurt the most was how young the minds were. The innocence that had been trapped within, shackled to the beasts that their bodies had become. The emotions threatened to overwhelm him, threatened to distract him from the battle at hand, and that was a distraction he could not afford.

He closed off his mind, relying solely on the Force to anticipate the monsters attacks. In doing so, he became more aware of other things. The stench that filled the cave. The constant dripping of water falling from cracks in the rock overhead. The way that Valery moved in graceful and very enticing...

Gil's mouth went dry. That was certainly a distraction he could not afford now, though he found it difficult to tear his eyes away from her.

"Understood Valery," Gil said, gritting his teeth as the creature came at him. He knew what he had to do. The only peace he could offer the poor soul now was an end to its tortured existence. It launched itself at him, a mad dash of blinding rage and enhanced muscles. If a single blow landed Gil would be torn to shreds, or possibly have every bone in his body shattered. He had to stay on the move.

He sidestepped the first strike from the monster, sending a reverse cut with his lightsaber that tore along the tendon of the creatures arm. The limb fell weakly to its side, and it let out a new roar of pain and rage. It struck out with its other arm, but this time Gil was too slow. A claw sharper than a vibrosword cut its way through the cloth of his robe as he darted back, and he felt the distant pain from the wound well up, but adrenaline and his grip on the Force kept the pain in check.

He struck again, slicing up and in a sawing motion and the creatures remaining good arm fell away from its body. The loss of both limbs did not deter the creature, and it threw itself towards Gil. He brought his lightsaber up, and pushed himself backwards enough to miss the worst of the beasts attack The emerald blade skewered the creature, a mortal wound Gil was sure, but the simple, predatory mind of the creature did not seem to notice.

Its teeth continued to snap at Gil, blood and saliva striking against him as he tore his blade out of the creatures body. Before it could rush him again, he brought the blade up and around in a quick, decapitating blow. The monstrous head went flying from the red skin abomination, and after a few moments of spasming muscles, the rest of the body followed it. Gil did not linger on his victory, instead turning to see if Valery needed any assistance with her opponent.
 
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Valery's amber eyes narrowed, focused intently on the creature lunging toward her with feral rage. Clawed hands swiped wildly, sharp enough to carve through stone, but she was already moving, her body a blur as she sidestepped effortlessly.

She ducked beneath another swing, her hand snapping up toward the beast. The Force lashed out like a tidal wave, slamming into the creature's torso and sending it hurtling backward into the cavern wall. The impact shook the ground beneath her boots, a cloud of dust and rubble rising from the force of the collision.

It roared, shaking off the attack, its red, sinewy body twisting as it surged forward again. Valery remained poised, the hum of her lightsaber still absent as she evaded strike after strike. Her movements were sharp, calculated, a deliberate dance designed to wear the creature down. It was powerful, but its rage made it predictable.

She raised her hand once more, gripping the air with an invisible force. The beast froze mid-charge, its body jerking and thrashing as it was lifted off the ground, suspended in the air. Its guttural snarls echoed in the cavern, but Valery's hold didn't falter. She flung it sideways, slamming it into the jagged wall once more, the resounding crack reverberating through the space.

With a flick of her wrist, she released it, letting the creature collapse onto the cavern floor in a heap. It clawed at the ground, attempting to rise, but Valery ignited her lightsaber, the violet blade coming to life with a sharp hiss. With a fluid motion, Valery plunged her blade through its chest, the violet light piercing through flesh and bone. The beast spasmed violently before going limp, its grotesque form crumpling to the ground. Valery exhaled slowly, her blade humming softly as she pulled it free and stepped back.

Turning toward Gil, she noted the aftermath of his own battle. Blood stained his robes, and a few new scratches marked his form, but he was standing tall. "You alright?" she asked, her voice steady but carrying a note of concern.







 


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His companion seemed to handle the fight a lot better than Gil had. That was to be expected he supposed, Valery had years of experience on him, though it certainly didn’t show anywhere else. The crumpled heap of the second dead beast a testament to her abilities with both the Force and her lightsaber. There was not a scratch on her either, and Gil felt the wound on his side all the more intensely.

I will be fine,” Gil said, deactivating his lightsaber and reaching into his robes with the other hand. In quick order, he removed a bacta patch from one of the pockets within the robe and applied it over the wound. He felt the healing salve begin to work almost at once, and he took a few quick, deep breaths to control the pain that was flaring across his body. He isolated it, contained it in a mental cage, and pushed it out of the way. He could deal with it later.

Maybe next time I will let you handle both the bad guys. It was a nice show,” Gil said, flashing Valery a brief smile before he set off towards the corridor that Jen had disappeared down. They had gone maybe fifty paces when Jen stepped out from around a bend in the tunnel, a small metal device held in her hand.

Gil sensed the danger a moment before Jen pushed the activation stud of the detonator. Looking up, he saw a series of detonators set in the shadows of the cave ceiling, wires connecting them all to a small arming device. “Watch out!” Gil yelled, throwing his hand out and hurling her forward with the Force, while bringing up a bubble of Force energy in front of him. The bombs exploded, and only the bubble kept Gil alive as he was hurled backwards from the explosion. He struck the cave wall, a groan escaping his lips.

Laughing, Jen turned and ran off down the tunnel once more.

Pulling himself to his feet, Gil took in the new alteration made to the tunnel system. Hundreds of rocks in various sizes cluttered the tunnel, creating a solid wall between Gil and Valery. Grimacing, Gil took a few steps towards it, reaching out with the Force to try and move the rocks. The first rocks began to move, but as Gil flung them out of the way, more rocks fell to take their place.

Sith spit,” Gil cursed, taking a step towards the rock pile. He lifted his hand, activating the communicator though with this much interference, Gil was not sure how much of the transmission would get through. “Valery, I tried to clear the rocks but more just kept falling. It will take too long to move them and Wielder might get away. I will double back and see if I can find another way around, maybe cut her off if I can get ahead of her. Best of luck.

With that, Gil turned and set off down the tunnel they had come from before. When he made it back to the main cavern, he turned and started climbing down towards a series of openings towards the bottom of the cavern. Pausing at the entrance, he extended his senses out, trying to get an idea of which way to go.

The sound of distant footsteps to his left drew his focus, and Gil set off. Several corridors later, a blue light became visible at the end of the tunnel. Gripping his lightsaber, Gil plunged through the opening, and entered what looked like a laboratory of some kind. Half a dozen tanks filled with a bubbling red liquid lined the walls, shadowy shapes held within floating up and down. Terminals and monitoring equipment filled the center of the room in a semi-circle, and standing at the center of it all, was Heron Crawl.

A smile lit Gil’s face as he activated his communicator again. “Valery, this is Gil. I found Crawl.
 



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Valery smirked, "A nice show, huh? Maybe I'll-"

Valery shielded her eyes as the detonators suddenly exploded, the fiery blast sending a wave of heat and debris roaring through the tunnel. The force of Gil's push had thrown her forward, sparing her from the worst of the explosion. Dust and pebbles rained down around her as she rolled to her feet, her lightsaber ignited and her senses on high alert.

Turning back toward where Gil had been, her heart sank at the sight of the rockfall now sealing the tunnel between them. She could faintly hear his voice through the comm, the interference making the message patchy but clear enough to understand. She was glad he was alright.

"Understood," Valery replied, her tone sharp with focus but clearly full of relief. "Be careful, Gil. I'll see if I can catch up."

She clipped her lightsaber to her belt and placed her hands on the wall of rubble, extending her senses through the Force. The rocks were unstable — trying to clear them manually would likely cause more to collapse. She frowned, her amber eyes narrowing as she turned her attention back to the path Jen had taken. She'd have to find another way. Valery took off at a sprint, her boots crunching against the loose gravel as she pushed herself to catch up.

The Dark Side's presence lingered heavily in the air, and Valery's mind raced as she pieced together the situation. Jen's betrayal, the detonators — none of this was coincidence.

Her communicator buzzed again, this time carrying Gil's voice with clearer clarity.

"Valery, this is Gil. I found Crawl."

Her steps faltered for a moment, her gaze narrowing as she processed his words. He had found their missing Jedi Knight? She should have felt even more relieved, but a strange tremor in the Force made her uneasy instead, "Is he alright?" Valery asked, her voice full of doubt as she continued forward again.

She soon reached the end of her tunnel, stopping at a sharp drop-off that overlooked a sprawling cavern network below. Her eyes scanned the area, searching for an alternate path that could bring her to Gil's location.


"Hold tight, Gil," she murmured under her breath, already moving again. "I'm on my way."







 


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Crawl turned to look at Gil as he ran into the room. His hair was slicked back as it always was, more streaks of gray in its glossy black than Gil remembered from their last meeting. Crawl was wearing a simple black shirt and pants, open at the heat displaying a scarred and withered form. Crawl was not a young man anymore, but he stood looking at Gil undaunted, he back straight and shoulders pulled back. An unwavering gaze that Gil had known for many years.

Gil,” Crawl said, his eyes narrowing for a moment before nodding, as if to himself, “it is good to see you.

Gil was silent for a moment, looking Crawl up and down, before letting his gaze look around the room once more. Too many things were not adding up. “It is good to see you as well,” Gil said, clipping his lightsaber to his belt and taking a few steps into the room. “The Order has not heard from you in some time, we were beginning to grow worried. There is something going on here Heron, something dark. I am sure you sensed it too. Just look at this place,” Gil said, and gestured around the room.

Crawl turned his gaze to follow the motion. The other Jedi nodded his head, his mouth deepening into a frown. “Yes, the Dark Side permeates this place deeply. It is part of the reason that led me here. Even from a distance I could sense it. What I found here…you would not believe it, Gil.

We’ve seen it too,” Gil said, “we were attacked by monsters here. It was an ambush set up by Jen Wielder, the marshal of the colony here. She’s trying to cover her tracks here.

Crawl let out a clicking sound with his tongue, shaking his head. “I knew you would not understand.” Crawl took a few steps across the room, reaching up and resting a hand on one of the glass containers. “Those monsters as you call them were not the thing I found here. No, they are merely a by product of the learning process. As for Wielder…she has done her job well enough. She is strong in the Force, but an unworthy apprentice. I will have to remove her when this is done.

Crawl turned to look at Gil, a smile replacing the frown as he gazed at Gil’s confused expression. “Do not look so surprised, young Horn. It’s like our master always said, you must embrace the Force. I have simply found a new path to embrace. Soon enough, everything will be as it should, and my creations will be perfected.

Your creations…” Gil said, the color draining from his face as he took a step backwards. “Ohongh taught us to hold all lie sacred. To change it, to mutilate it…it is a disgrace to her legacy.

Her legacy is a lie,” Crawl said, the venom in his words shocking Gil. “There are things she never told you, things she kept hidden from the rest of the Order. Her legacy is built on a dark truth that I am going to reveal, and once I do, every trace of her legacy will be erased.

Crawl reached down to his side, I clipping the lightsaber from his hip, and igniting the vermillion blue blade. “I am glad it was you who came, Gil Horn. To truly end our masters legacy, I must destroy not only her memory, but all those that remember her. It is fitting that her last Padawan be the first to fall.

In a blur of motion, Heron Crawl launched himself towards Gil. Gil activated his own lightsaber, bringing the blade up to parry the first strike. Then, he was fighting to stay alive.
 



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Valery continued moving quickly through the cavern, her senses stretched out through the Force as she searched for a way to reach Gil. The oppressive weight of the Dark Side pressed down on her, and with every step, her unease deepened. She reached for her comm again, hoping to hear an update from her fellow Jedi.

"Gil?" she called, her tone sharp with concern. "What's your status? Have you secured Crawl?"

Only silence answered her.

Her brow furrowed, and she slowed her pace, turning her senses inward to try and pinpoint his presence through the Force. Before she could focus, a sudden spike of danger coursed through her — a flash of warning in her mind.

Her instincts took over. Valery whirled around just in time, her violet lightsaber igniting with a sharp hiss. She raised it, deflecting a blaster bolt that streaked toward her from the shadows. The bolt ricocheted harmlessly into the rocky wall, sparks showering the ground at her feet.

From the darkness behind her, figures emerged. The pirates.

"Of course," Valery muttered under her breath, her amber eyes narrowing. She shifted into a defensive stance, her blade casting an ominous glow across the cavern walls. The pirates weren't just opportunists — their presence here, in a place so steeped in the Dark Side, suggested a far more sinister purpose.

Blaster fire erupted, bolts streaking toward her in quick succession. Valery moved with precision, her blade weaving through the air to intercept each shot. The hum and crackle of her lightsaber filled the cavern as she advanced toward the closest pirate. With a fluid motion, she slashed upward, disarming her attacker — literally — before spinning to block another incoming shot.

The pirates closed in, their numbers forcing her to keep moving. Her steps were measured, her strikes precise, but the sheer number of enemies kept her on high alert. She could sense their desperation and greed in the Force, their fear as they realized they had underestimated her.

She would not be taken down.







 


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Gil expected there to be more talking.

In all the stories he had been told and read, the betrayer often had so much to say during the climactic battle. The clash of good and evil, the combating ideals and goals that had to be expressed not just in action, but in word. The villain would take every chance they could to turn the hero to the path of evil, or the hero made one last desperate attempt to bring the fallen back to the light. Those were the stories everyone knew, the stories people loved to tell.

The battle between Gil and Crawl was silent.

Lightsaber clashed against lightsaber, the blades of light moving so fast they seemed to blur in the air as the two former comrades battled. Gil had looked up to Heron Crawl like an older brother, and he had thought Crawl had seen a similar bond within Gil. Perhaps that had been the case at one point. A brotherhood that had saved both their lives half a dozen times in their shared journey’s across the galaxy.

Now, Gil only saw hatred in the fallen Jedi’s eyes. They fought across the length and breadth of the laboratory, sparks flying from their blades as they sought to gain an advantage over the other. Crawl was a master of Form VII, an aggressive style that kept him pushing Gil back. Rage fueled each blow as it descended against Gil’s Form IV defense. Gil had never been able to beat Crawl in their practice duels in the past, but Gil could sense something was different this time. Gil could see and feel Crawl growing tired. The fallen Jedi was old, older than Gil had realized until that moment.

Gil flipped over a bank of terminals, tucking into a roll to avoid a series of quick slashes from Crawl as he came up. He had a chance to win this if he could hold out long enough. Crawl could sense it too. The man’s entire attack had focused on trying to overwhelm Gil and end the duel quickly. The seemingly endless stamina Crawl had once displayed was gone.

Just as Gil was preparing to go on his own attack, a new threat emerged. His senses screamed at him, and he spun on the spot just as the snap hiss of another lightsaber was ignited. Jen Wielder, armed with a blue lightsaber of her own emerged from a corridor leading into the laboratory. Gil deflected her first blow easily enough, but doing so pushed him dangerously close to Crawl. The advantage he had hoped to claw out of himself vanished as he engaged both Dark Jedi in a retreating duel.

The sound of blaster fire began to echo into the laboratory as the duel continued, and a flash of realization struck through the combat miasma that gripped him. Valery. The pirates must have found her. Blocking another strike from Crawl, Gil shot his hand out, sending a burst of Force energy out that hurled Jen backwards as she tried to capitalize on the opening. She flew into one of the floating tanks, shattering it and soaking the floor in the gurgling red liquid. She struggled to stand as Gil pressed his attack against Crawl, moving towards the exit he thought the blaster fire was coming from.

Gil had to get out of this duel. If he could regroup with the Grandmaster, the Sword of the Jedi, then they would be able to win the day. Kicking out, Gil went Crawl stumbling backwards. He then turned and leapt over the bank of terminals again. He landed and found Jen in his path, a snarl stuck to her face as she launched herself at Gil. She was a clumsy fighter, but what she lacked in skill she made up for in raw talent and speed. Their blades locked half a dozen times as Gil tried to disengage until, finally, they locked together, and a battle of strength began between them.

Where did you get that blade,” Gil demanded, his voice strained from the effort and tired from the duel.

You aren’t the first Jedi to come snooping around here,” Jen said, her cruel smile plastered in red as she disengaged from the lightsaber lock. A wave of Dark Side energy began to form behind Gil, and he began to turn to face Crawl. Jen moved forward to stop him, locking blades once more as they spun in place, Gil now facing Crawl across the room. The Dark Jedi had discarded his lightsaber, and his hands worked around a growing orb of dark, pulsating energy. As Gil watched, the orb grew larger and larger, before Crawl flexed his fingers and the orb flashed first into a super like shape, and then vanished from sight altogether. Crawl brought his hand back, and hurled the energy.

Jen was directly in the path of the Darkshear. Her chest vanished in a spray of visceral matter that painted the walls all around them, but that was not the final target. The Darkshear continued its path, through the Dark Jedi’s body and struck Gil’s exposed right arm just below the elbow. Agony flared through Gil. It was a pain that he had never felt before; not just physical, but almost spiritual in nature as the Dark Side energy from the attack flooded into his body from the wound.

Gil’s lightsaber and arm fell to he ground next to the still spasming body of Jen. The blade deactivated, and the only sound left in the room where Gil’s screams of agony as his body, and his soul, were torn apart.
 
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Blaster fire roared through the cavern, echoing in deafening waves as Valery danced through the chaos. Her violet blade moved like a living thing, weaving an intricate web of defense and offense. Bolts ricocheted off her lightsaber, slamming into walls and sending sparks flying. She lunged forward, her lightsaber a blur as it cleaved through a pirate's weapon before cutting him down with a precise strike.

Another pirate charged from the side, brandishing a vibroblade. Valery pivoted on her heel, sidestepping the clumsy swing with a grace that seemed effortless. Her blade snapped upward, slicing through the weapon, then whirled back down to drop her attacker with a clean strike to the chest. Without pause, she leapt into the air, somersaulting over another group of assailants as she landed behind them and cut through their ranks with a single, sweeping motion.

The air was thick with smoke and the acrid smell of burned ozone. Her heart pounded in her chest as she focused, her connection to the Force amplifying her every movement. These pirates, desperate and disorganized, were no match for her skill, but their numbers forced her to remain sharp and relentless. One wrong step could spell disaster.

As the last pirate fell, Valery paused, her breaths steady but measured as she glanced around for more threats. The cavern had fallen eerily silent, the faint hum of her lightsaber the only sound. She was ready to move forward when it hit her.

A scream — piercing, agonized — cut through the Force like a blade. Valery's amber eyes widened, her connection to the Force flooding with Gil's pain. It wasn't just physical; it was deeper, darker, something far more insidious. The overwhelming anguish made her stomach twist.

"Gil," she whispered, her voice laced with dread.

There was no time to waste. Her body moved before her mind could fully process, the urgency of the moment driving her forward. She surged through the remaining pirates like a blur, her lightsaber carving through their defenses with merciless precision. A burst of the Force sent the last two attackers flying into the cavern walls, leaving her path clear.

Valery extinguished her blade and sprinted toward the sound of the scream, her senses now honed in on the dark, oppressive energy radiating from deeper within the cavern. Her boots pounded against the ground, each step fueled by an unrelenting determination.

She had to reach him before it was too late.







 


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Gil knew he was dying. The pain lacing through every fiber of his being, radiating from that initial wound was debilitating as he tried to regain his senses. He had stopped screaming, though that was more to a lack of air than anything else. Grimacing, Gil tried to push himself up with his good arm, but collapsed a moment later. His body was giving out on him, the Dark Side energy battling its way through him like an unrelenting tidal wave.

I was not sure that was going to work,” Crawl said from across the room, a sickly, wet cough bubbling its way up the Dark Jedi’s throat as he walked around the terminals. “I learned about that technique from a Sith some years ago. He did not tell me it would be so costly to use though. It would have been hard to, I suppose. He was the last Sith I killed before I realized what my true calling was.” More coughs, though Gil could see Crawl beginning to straighten up.

Gil narrowed his eyes at Crawl, his pain mixing with hatred as he glared at the man who had betrayed him, had betrayed their master. Words laced with venom died on Gil’s lips unspoken as he fell back once more, his head resting on a small protrusion of rock.

Crawl stepped over Jen’s body, his boots soaked in her blood as he glanced down at her. “She was a useful tool as well, but she did not have the potential to meet the demands of what is yet to come. It all worked out so nicely. Now, there is only one loose end to tie up.” With a contemptuous snap of his boot, Crawl ended what little life Jen had left in her body. Crawl took a few more steps towards Gil, igniting his lightsaber once more.

Give Master Ohongh my regards,” Crawl said, a mad, intense hatred and eagerness dancing in his eyes. Dark Side energy, still pooling in the room from the Darkshear began to congregate around Crawl’s uplifted hand. As Gil watched, the blade began to slowly change its color, the brilliant blue fading away as a deep, blood red crimson crept its way up the length of the blade like an infection. Crawl’s eyes to began to change, brightening in color until they had taken on an ugly, yellow color.

Gil could do nothing but watch as the crimson blade began its descent.
 



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Valery surged into the room, her presence an explosion of light and power in the darkness that had consumed the cavern. Her amber eyes burned with intensity as she took in the scene in a single, heart-stopping moment — Crawl, his crimson blade descending toward Gil, whose form lay broken and unmoving on the cold stone floor.

The violet blade of her lightsaber ignited with a furious hiss, a brilliant arc of energy intercepting Crawl's strike just before it could connect with its intended target. The clash of crimson and violet filled the air with a sharp crack, sparks showering the ground as Valery held the strike at bay. The raw force of their collision sent vibrations through the room, shaking loose bits of dust and debris from the cavern ceiling.

Crawl's twisted grin faltered as he was forced back a step. His yellowed eyes met Valery's fiery gaze, and for a fleeting moment, uncertainty flickered across his features.

Valery didn't hesitate. Drawing upon the Force with unparalleled precision, she thrust her free hand forward. An invisible wave of power erupted from her palm, slamming into Crawl with the force of a charging rancor. He was hurled backward, crashing into a bank of terminals with a shattering cacophony. Monitors flickered and died as Crawl tumbled to the ground, his lightsaber sputtering against the stone before he staggered to his feet.

"You've already lost," Valery said, her voice low and edged with steel. Her blade remained raised, the violet light casting an ethereal glow across her determined expression. "Leave now while you still have the chance, or this will be the end of you."

Her presence in the Force radiated unshakable resolve, a beacon of light cutting through the oppressive darkness that clung to the cavern. She spared a quick glance at Gil, her heart aching at the sight of his battered form. He was alive — barely — but he needed her. And she couldn't let Crawl or the lingering Dark Side energy take another life.

"You want power?" she continued, her voice cutting through the silence like a blade. "It won't be found here, and it won't be found in this fight. Walk away. This is your only chance."






 


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Gil had seen the crimson blade descending towards him, and a moment seemed to stretch into eternity. He saw the blade cutting through the air, wind parting before it as it plummeted towards him. It was a symbol of hatred and rage, the tool of a man broken and wanting nothing more than to destroy that which he blamed for his own failures. Menacing and unrelenting, the blade would be Gil's death.

Or so it seemed.

Just before the blade struck, the snap hiss of another lightsaber echoed in the room and the familiar sight of the violet blade of Valery Noble stopped the Dark Jedi's attack. All at once time began rushing back in, and the agony cascading through Gil's body demanded all his attention. He could not move, and had lost all feeling in his legs and remaining arm. His chest hurt with each breath he took, and a deep, unrelenting cold seemed to be creeping its way across his body.

Across the room, Crawl looked between the two Jedi, his gaze dripping with scorn, and a touch of fear at the sight of the Sword of the Jedi. He knew she had come to the world, but had hoped he would not have to face her directly. Tired and weakened already, he knew he did not stand much of a chance against the Grandmaster of the New Jedi Order.

"Mercy," Crawl said, deactivating his lightsaber and clipping it to his side. "Mercy is the greatest flaw of the Jedi. It is the forgiveness of transgressions that should never be forgotten. A weakness that I will purge."

Crawl shot his hand to the side, and a series of command were activated on one of the few remaining consoles. Almost at once, the entire cave system began to rock from distant explosions as charges set at regular intervals began to detonate. One of those charges went off in the laboratory, throwing rock and destroyed equipment in all directions. It also opened an exit pathway for Crawl, and with a final glaring look at both Valery and Gil, he vanished through the opening.

Gil reached out with his left arm, grabbing at Valery's leg. "Val..ery, you must go. Save..." the last words were cut off as Gil slumped backwards, his eyes rolling up in his head as the cave system began to collapse all around them.
 



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Valery's body moved before her mind could fully process what was happening. The first tremors shook the cavern, followed by the deafening roar of detonations echoing through the tunnels. Rocks and debris rained down, filling the air with dust and chaos. Instinctively, she extended her free hand, channeling the Force to create a shimmering barrier of energy around herself and Gil. The cascading stones and shrapnel struck the shield harmlessly, the impacts reverberating through her connection to the Force but leaving them unscathed.

Her amber eyes burned with determination as she glanced down at Gil, barely clinging to consciousness. When his trembling hand grabbed her leg, his weakened voice pleading for her to leave him, Valery shook her head fiercely. "No," she said, her voice unyielding and steady despite the chaos around them. "I'm not leaving you behind."

As his body began to slump, Valery caught him before he could fall. Her arms slipped beneath his battered form, lifting him into a secure bridal carry. He felt unnervingly light, his limp form a stark reminder of how close he was to the edge. "Hold on, Gil," she whispered, her voice softening with a note of desperation. "I've got you."

The Force surged within her as she pressed forward, the barrier shimmering and shifting with her every step. She moved with precision and speed, navigating through the collapsing cavern with the instincts of a seasoned warrior and the focus of a Jedi Master. Each breath came hard and fast, her muscles burning with effort, but she didn't stop.

The dim, suffocating confines of the cavern finally gave way to open air, the cool breeze of the surface brushing against her sweat-slicked skin. Valery pushed herself toward the safety of their waiting ship, her heart pounding in her chest as she felt Gil's faint life force flicker in her senses.

It was a race against time.







 


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Gil was in a world of shadows. He struggled to keep his eyes open, the corners of his vision darkening further with each passing second, but he resisted to call to sleep. The world around him was in constant motion as he tried to orient himself, though the shadow over his mind kept him from forming too many thoughts. The pain was still there, an unending cacophony that threatened to drown out what little was left of Gil's mind, but he strained against it still.

He sensed a danger to his side and glanced up just in time to see a pirate emerge from a neighboring tunnel. He too was making a mad dash for the exit, but as he saw the Jedi, he leveled a blaster and opened fire. Instinctively Gil called to the Force to stop the attack. It was weak, but he could still just barely grasp the edge of his abilities. He redirected two falling rocks, one into the path of the blaster bolt, while the second struck the pirate in the head.

The man stumbled backwards, and was crushed a moment later by a falling boulder.

His head rolled back against Valery's chest, eyes looking up at the ceiling, unable to focus. A halo of light seemed to be surrounding her as she rushed through the cave system, illuminating and highlighting her features. A smile spread across Gil's face, content with the final sight. The darkness began to rush into his mind, and what little control he had left fled. His eyes closed, and his head lolled back, dangling over her arm.

Then, he was gone.
 



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Valery pushed forward with relentless determination, her senses hyper-focused on the collapsing cavern around her. Each step was a struggle, her muscles straining under the weight of Gil's battered body and the effort of maintaining her protective Force barrier. She could feel his life slipping further with each passing second, a flickering candle threatening to go out entirely.

The moment the pirate emerged, blaster raised, her instincts flared, but before she could react, Gil's faint connection to the Force came alive. The redirected rocks blocked the blaster fire and sent the pirate to his end, but the strain on Gil was evident. His head fell back against her chest, his fading strength unable to keep him conscious any longer.

"Stay with me, Gil," Valery urged, her voice trembling as she pressed on.

Finally, the jagged mouth of the cavern came into view, sunlight breaking through the suffocating dust and darkness. Valery surged toward it, the cool air washing over her as she emerged onto the surface. The faint hum of her ship's engines filled her ears, and within moments, she had reached the ramp, carrying Gil inside.


The medbay was quiet except for the soft beeping of monitors and the faint hum of the ship's systems. Gil lay on the medical bed, his face pale but his breathing steady. Valery sat in a nearby chair, exhaustion etched into every line of her body, but her amber eyes never wavered from him. She hadn't left his side since stabilizing him, her connection to the Force amplifying every subtle sign of his recovery.

When Gil stirred, his eyelids fluttering open, Valery sat up straight, relief washing over her like a tidal wave. Her smile was soft but radiant, and for a moment, she said nothing, simply letting the weight of her relief settle.

"Welcome back," she finally said, her voice warm and steady. "You gave me quite a scare back there."

She leaned forward, resting her elbows on her knees, her expression a mix of concern and reassurance. "How are you feeling?" Her gaze searched his face, ready to help in any way he needed. For now, just seeing him awake was enough to lift the weight that had pressed on her since their escape.







 


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The world came back to Gil in pieces. For a while, he was certain he was dead. His mind was still, and he felt as if he was floating in a pool of nothingness, unable to feel, see or do anything. The only relief he felt was the lack of pain, and for a time he was content with it. Then, a light began to shine through the bleakness. It was blinding in its intensity, but as it grew stronger, Gil began to feel things again.

It took some time, but eventually, he was able to claw his way back from the edge and open his eyes. The light he realized was coming from overhead illuminators, their crystal clear glare shading the stark white walls of the medbay in an almost translucent glow. He blinked a few times, trying to gather his bearing when Valery spoke up.

Warmth spread over Gil as he glanced at the Grandmaster, a welcome relief from the clinical cold the medbay bed gave off beneath him. "I feel like I just lost a cage match with a Rancor, but I guess I will live." A sigh escaped Gil's lips as he tried to push himself up, only to nearly topple over as he placed some of his weight on his right arm. The arm that was gone. He stared down at the wrapped limb, his eyes momentarily tearing up as the realization of everything that had happened, the loss and betrayal of a man he had considered a brother struck him all at once.

"I couldn't stop him..." Gil said, his voice wavering. He glanced up at Valery, his eyes hardening. "Did you get him? We have to make sure he doesn't hurt anyone else," Gil said, trying to rise from the bed and swinging his legs over the side to stand up. The motion sent him spiraling, and he began to lose his balance, but saved himself at the last moment with his one remaining hand.

"We have to go after him."
 



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Valery rose from her chair the moment Gil began to stir, stepping closer with quiet, measured movements. Her gaze softened as he blinked against the stark light of the medbay, his voice breaking the stillness. She crouched slightly to meet his eye level, offering a reassuring smile that was as steady as her presence.

"You survived something most wouldn't, Gil," she said gently, her voice a warm balm against the chill of the medbay. "You're here because of your strength, your will to keep fighting. That means more than any single battle."

As he struggled to push himself upright and the realization of his injuries settled over him, Valery placed a steadying hand on his good shoulder, grounding him. She let him take a moment, understanding the storm of emotions coursing through him without needing the Force to see it. Loss, pain, guilt — they were feelings she knew intimately, and they carved lines across his face now.

When his resolve flared and he spoke of Crawl, Valery's expression hardened, not in anger, but in shared determination. She stepped closer, her hand remaining firm, a silent anchor. "No, I didn't stop him," she admitted, though her tone carried no hint of defeat. "But that doesn't mean we've lost. He's out there, and he will answer for what he's done. To you, to the people he's hurt, to everyone."

As he swung his legs over the side of the bed, trying to rise, Valery moved swiftly, her arms bracing him before he could collapse. Her grip was firm but careful, her amber eyes locking onto his with quiet insistence. "But you won't go after him like this. Not now." She guided him back to the bed, her hand never leaving his shoulder until he was seated again. Her expression softened as she crouched once more, meeting his gaze at eye level.

Her voice lowered, carrying the weight of her promise. "When you're ready, when you've recovered, we'll go after him together. We won't stop until he's stopped for good."

Valery let a small smile touch her lips, a glimmer of warmth breaking through the solemnity of the moment. "But for now, you need to rest. Trust me, you've earned it."

She stood slowly, her hand lingering briefly on his shoulder before releasing him, her presence as steady and unwavering as the light in the room. As she stepped back, the warmth in her eyes remained, a quiet assurance that, despite everything, neither of them would face this fight alone.







 

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