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Approved Lore Tarrian's Sword

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High Commander of the Lilaste Order
OUT OF CHARACTER INFORMATION
  • Intent: Create lore for a well Known Lilaste Battalion
  • Image Credit: Paid for by me, commisioned by andrios1#6386
  • Permissions: N/A
  • Links: N/A
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GENERAL INFORMATION

  • Army Name: Tarain's Sword
  • Classification: Infantry Based ground battalion
  • Affiliation: Lilaste Order [Priority Loyalty] / UGF [secondary Loyalty] (United Galactic Federation)
  • Army Symbol: A dragons head with orange Accents
  • Description: Tarain's Sword is a highly regarded Lilaste Order battalion known for its unwavering commitment to defending the Order's territories and advancing its goals. This battle-hardened unit has earned its prestigious reputation through significant victories, most notably in the Battle of Ropagi II and M'haeli, where they captured key facilities used by the Dusate Pirates and played a pivotal role in securing ground victories for the Lilaste Order.
SOCIAL INFORMATION

  • Headquarters: Kirima in the Kalinda System
  • Goals: The primary goal of Tarain's Sword is to defend the Lilaste Order's territories from external threats, ensuring the safety and security of the Order's members and its ideals.
  • Reputation: Tarain's Sword boasts a formidable reputation within the Lilaste Order. Their heroic actions in critical battles, such as capturing vital Dusate Pirate facilities during the Battle of Ropagi II and M'haeli, have solidified their status as an elite and dependable force within the Order.
COMPOSITION INFORMATION

  • Army Size: Medium
  • Composition: Tarain's Sword comprises of 576 highly skilled soldiers organized into 64 squads, with each squad comprising nine members.

Standard Squad Structure: Squads of the Lilaste Order are composed of seven specializations with upwards of nine squad members, with equipment designed for specific specialized roles. It is common for some squads to include a force-sensitive team member for an extra advantage.


Squad leader
Primary: LO-17D
Secondary: LO-15D
Sidearm LO-12S
Tertiary: LO-9M
Equipment: LO-56A MKII, LO-56E, A.A.S.H Thermal detonators
Role: Gives the orders, keeps the squad in line, and is responsible to those higher up in the chain of command.

Radio/ Communications officer
Primary: LO-17D
Secondary: LO-15D
Sidearm LO-12S
Tertiary: LO-9M
Equipment:LO-56A MKII, LO-56E, A.A.S.H,Various communications equipment, Thermal detonators
Role: Responsible for keeping in touch with home base, other units, and assets like air support and artillery.

Standard rifleman x3
Primary: LO-17D
Secondary: LO-15D
Sidearm LO-12S
Tertiary: LO-9M
Equipment: LO-56A MKII, LO-56E
Role: your standard rifleman, used as filler to give an extra hand to one position or the next. Also used to fill in any holes the squad might need on special missions or to fill a location where a squad member has been KIA or wounded

Medic
Primary:LO-17D
Secondary: LO-15D
Sidearm LO-12S
Tertiary: LO-9M
Equipment: LO-56A MKII, LO-56E, A.A.S.H, various Medical Supplies Thermal detonators
Role: the squad medic is highly trained in battlefield first aid, and sometimes becomes a flat-out Combat Medic.

Explosives expert/ demolitions
Primary: LO-RPG20
Secondary: LO-15D
Sidearm LO-12S
Tertiary: LO-9M
Equipment: LO-56A MKII, LO-56E, A.A.S.H various Explosives Thermal detonators
Role: tasked with breaching doors and providing close support to the squad, genuinely used to clear close-quarters buildings or to get through walls

Heavy weapons
Primary:LO-26R
Secondary: LO-15D
Sidearm LO-12S
Tertiary: LO-9M
Equipment: LO-56A MKII, LO-56E, A.A.S.H Various weapons repair kits, ammo boxes, Thermal detonators
Role: Responsible for the heavy weapons side, tasked with laying down heavy fire to help aid the squad to fend off enemy reinforcements or lay enough coving fire to assist in a flank

Sniper/scout
Primary: LO-600S
Secondary: LO-17D
Sidearm LO-12S
Tertiary: LO-9M
Equipment: LO-56A MKII, LO-56E, A.A.S.H Thermal detonators, LO-PD1
Role: focusing on precision shooting, providing cover fire from a distance as well as sent ahead of the squad to scout and set up possible crossfire locations

MEMBERS:

  • Commander Julian Tarain
HISTORICAL INFORMATION

Tarain's Sword, under the leadership of Commander Julian Tarain, has a rich and storied history of valor and success within the Lilaste Order. They have consistently demonstrated exceptional discipline, tactical brilliance, and unwavering loyalty to the Lilaste Order's cause.

Their most significant achievements include their pivotal roles in the Battle ofThe capture of the M'aeli system. and the Battle for Ropagi II, where they captured essential facilities used by the Dusate Pirates. These victories secured critical ground for the Lilaste Order and showcased the unwavering dedication and combat prowess of Tarain's Sword.

Distinctive among their features is their armor adorned with distinctive orange accents, signifying their unity and individuality within the Lilaste Order. This battalion symbolizes strength and resilience, ready to confront any threat to the Order's territories and ideals, embodying the Lilaste Order's motto: "For Unity, For Peace, For All."
 
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Hello there! Overall you've got a fairly solid and filled out submission here, always love to see it! There are just a few things that I'll need to see modified a bit before I can approve this for you but they're pretty minor edits overall!

First of all you have a missing section in Out of Character Information, Permissions should be present above Links. Speaking of the image that you've put under links doesn't seem to be working, at least for me, so you may want to look into that as well. For Classification I am somewhat confused, a Battalion is a size classification not an army classification. Based on the information in this submission something more like Infantry or General Purpose Ground forces would be more applicable I think, unless you have a better idea of course.

Affiliation will need links for the Lilaste Order and the UGF, Kirima in Headquarters will need a link if available as well. For Army Size I'm afraid that Average is not an acceptable rating, we scale from Small to Medium to Large to Huge in this category. I do like the Squad Structure you've included but I will say it may be better to flesh such a thing out in an individual Combat Unit Sub rather than an Army one, these ones are more for groupings of units. Lastly, but admittedly not required, some links in Historical Information would be good if applicable. Their enemies and battles if they have a link would go a long way to helping flesh out the capabilities of the army for the average reader.

Overall nothing too big in terms of edits so they should be fairly quick to do!
 
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