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Approved NPC Teilin Mokrie

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OUT OF CHARACTER INFORMATION
  • Intent: Charging around the galaxy as a Sith marauder who doesn't speak Basic is a good way to limit your options. Thus...
  • Image Credit: "Mallory" by Andrea Di Natale, found at https://www.artstation.com/artwork/OZ0z8
  • Role: She's Mission Control, the Elder's primary intermediary and facilitator so far as Gryylarc is concerned. She also serves as a translator.
  • Permissions: N/A
  • Links: Gryylarc

PHYSICAL INFORMATION
  • Age: 34
  • Force Sensitivity: Apprentice
  • Species: Umbaran (maybe a bit of human thrown in, as she has hair and plenty of it)
  • Appearance: Ashy skin, ashy dreadlocks with ornaments woven in, heavy scarring on the left side of her face, cybernetic left arm past the shoulder.

SOCIAL INFORMATION
  • Name: Teilin Mokrie
  • Loyalties: Answers to a shadowy alien known as the Elder.
  • Wealth: Well paid midlevel staffer.
  • Notable Possessions: Cybernetic arm (enhanced strength, concealed blaster).
  • Skills: The same general skillset as your average mercenary, plus the basic powers of a Sith acolyte. Knows fluent Shyriiwook.
  • Personality: Constantly in some degree of pain and generally not happy about that. Derives great satisfaction from anything that helps her de-stress. Explosions, for example.

COMBAT INFORMATION
  • Weapon of Choice: Military blaster rifle, grenade launcher, Hapan Gun of Command.
  • Combat Function: Ranged support for Gryylarc's battering-ram/tank style.

STRENGTHS
  • Can see outside the normal visible spectrum (Umbaran).
  • Some skill with the dark side of the Force.
  • Capable fighter in most circumstances.
  • Good pilot.
  • Prosthetic arm includes concealed blaster.

WEAKNESSES
  • Trauma and extreme exertion are especially dangerous since she has Artusian crystals in her body. Will definitely try to stay at range when she can.
  • Sensitive eyes (Umbaran), extra-vulnerable to flashbangs.
  • Requires regular alchemical treatments to keep the crystals from killing her.

HISTORICAL INFORMATION

A mining explosion on Artus Prime embedded crystal shards in Teilin's body, shredded her left arm irreparably, and killed her Wookiee partner. In the aftermath she found herself connected to the Force, but weakly. She'd paid a steep price for that ability. And if the Elder hadn't found her, the crystals buried in her muscle and bone would have killed her in weeks or less. Now a Sith acolyte, and likely to remain that way for a long time, Teilin relies on frequent alchemical treatments to keep the crystals from shredding her muscles, organs, or blood vessels. The Elder has begun to teach her the powers of Darth Sion, which is the only way she'll be able to live to a normal lifespan.
 
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If we can just get a link in species, that'd be great.

This sub mentions 'advances cybernetic arm' but no comment on what, if anything, it does beyond being just an arm. If it's 'just an arm' that's a totally acceptable answer, but if it does anything in particular that needs to be in here. If it's just one or two things, we're good to go, but if it's extensive it may need a factory sub.
 

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Requested amendments made, ready for judging when the Codex reopens.
 
Gryylarc

  • In Out of Character Information, you are missing the Permissions field.
  • In Physical Information, under Force Sensitivity, you need to choose between Force Dead, Non-Force User, Untrained Force Sensitive, Apprentice/Padawan, Knight, Master.
    I know you've written 'Acolye', but in this case for uniformity, it should be 'Apprentice'.
  • In Social Information:
Loyalties: Answers to a shadowy alien known as the Elder.
Is this Elder an NPC? A PC? Is there a character sheet or submission to link to?

Notable Possessions: Advanced cybernetic arm (enhanced strength, concealed blaster).
For the arm, are the things you mentioned (enhanced strength, concealed blaster) the only things to mention about the cybernetic arm? Is it a generic blaster or something else? If those are the only two things, why is it 'advanced'? If possible, please link to either a canon example or a Factory submission that explains the arm.


Please tag me back once the edits are done :)
 
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