Hello Joza.
Ok - I won't go on TOO much and I'll keep it snappy.
- Real. Wonderful amount of humanity to her behind the facade of her Zeltron sass. Like a flower; when it blooms, there's beauty on the inside as powerful as what's outside and that's what's exciting to try and discover when interacting with her because there's lots more to her than just what we see and oogle.
- Complex. She's a challenge. Sure she has a name for herself, but it's great as a writer to try and connect with her on a level she's obviously not used to, and that's good for all parties involved making you think a little more about the story, the development and the long-lasting effects rather than just "quick and easy" threads.
- Damaged. Good and bad; good for the drama and complexity it gives her and defines her path, and bad because at times I worry she's been damaged TOO much at times it's restricting her. I may be wrong, and maybe that's the tragedy of her; she's broken beyond repair?
- Confused. I hope she finds a path going forward. Again, this is probably part of your plan, but I have see Joza tip to the Dark with lots of dark friends and liasons with Sith. I've also seen her tip to the Light with lightside allies, and even those in between. It can be wary when it's unclear where Joza stands in the greater scheme of things and if you think she's one thing...boom...she'll flit to be the other. As I say, it's not a criticism, it may be part of her overall mystery
(as said above) but if not, I'd love to see her focused in one direction at a time rather than many directions at many times that includes her sleeping with all men and women to get somewhere.
At the end of the day; a memorable, wonderfully-written and fiesty character you know just what you'll get if you write with her....and lots of surprises also that you didn't expect.
