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Approved Species The Draelvasier
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Tathra Khaeus
Hello, I'll be reviewing your submission shortly. In the meantime, please update the submission to reflect the 4.0 template, which you can find here. Tag me once this is ready 
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The Blood Hound
Tathra Khaeus
This submission is beautifully written, and I absolutely love Bryn lore. However, there are a few things that must be edited:
- You are still missing the Permissions portion in the Out of Character Information; you can write n/a in it, but it still needs to appear as part of the template.
- Image Credit – the hyperlinks are not working.
- In Links, Tathra Khaeus links to the wrong place.
- Under General Information, please hyperlink Draemidus Prime.
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The Blood Hound
Tathra Khaeus
Thank you very much! Approved!
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Don't forget a list of changes and tag us when you're ready.
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Srina Talon
- Ready for live judgement.- Updated ages and age lengths for Draelvasier races and added additional information on growth and physical/mental development for individual races.
- Updated Force Deficiency weakness to include age relevant force sensitivity degeneracy.
- Added Limb Regen strength for Sraelvun.
- Added halfway brethren strength for Sraelvun. [Risen-Srael]
- Added new paragraph for Sraelvun behaviours regarding Risen-Srael & effects of Cannibalism.
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John Locke
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John Locke
Updates made.
Completely visually overhauled, every single section has been rewritten and updated as well.
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