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Faction The New Jedi Order - Saber Tourney




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Valery chuckled softly at his reply, her gaze drifting back out across the training arena, where young Jedi were sparring, laughing, and stumbling through their duels.

"I've heard that one before," she said with a faint smirk, her tone warm. There was a familiar edge of memory in her voice, but she didn't dwell on it. Didn't name names. She could have — it would have been so easy to say Dagon's name aloud, to draw that quiet thread of connection between student and teacher. But she didn't.

She knew it would sting more than it helped.

Instead, her gaze lingered on the arena, her voice turning thoughtful.

"Truth is, none of us ever feel completely suited to it at first. But they don't need perfection — they need someone who gets it. Someone who's lived it and understands the Galaxy." Her eyes flicked toward him again, studying him not as the Knight who so often walked the edge of the path, but as the person still trying to figure out what that path really looked like.

She smiled gently.

"I'm not saying you should run off and pick the first kid who looks at you funny," she teased. "But if one comes along that feels right… don't shut the door right away." Valery leaned back slightly, arms still folded.







 

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"You're projecting," Dio spat back. This albino bantha fodder shoulder checked him and was now acting all high and mighty? He should take a look in the mirror—if he was brave enough.

"I'll let my hands do the talkin', then."

Dio shifted his weight into the strike, swatting the green blade like it was just an annoying housefly. After pushing the Echani's blade back, he followed up with a quick mid-section thrust.

 
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CORIN
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Someone who's lived it.

Corin supposed, there was some truth to that. He lived that eternal war with the Sith and the Imperials, forced to rage on with it since being a child. In the far reaches of Wild Space and into the depths of the Unknown Region, along the Slice and into the Null Zone. His experience passed well beyond his years, sleeping beneath stars and braving desert storms, treading snowy wastelands and facing the heat of molten planets. To see himself in the reflection of all his deeds and face this new world, as it was now.

He would never be wholly certain of his usefulness as a teacher. It did not interest him, in part, with the idea of a child being a tagalong to his missions. He operated better alone, another might slow him down. Though, it may just be the challenge he requires.

"I see," said Corin in consideration. "I will... remain open, to the possibility."


 

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Tigris was startled, something she rarely experienced, when Aris caught the blade of her training saber with his bare hand as she performed her maneuver. She realized what she had done a breath after he had done it. Even as her feet skidded as she recovered from her roll to face her opponent again. Aris had earned a point. They were to desist and return to center ring. It's a contest. Feth. Tigris had to remind herself yet again. She was in violation for attempting to strike back.

Tigris' dark gaze fell to the tall teen, then to the hand that had grabbed her blade, and finally to the red spot on her shoulder where his blade had grazed her. A small, apologetic smile touching her lips, eyes lifting up again to Aris. "Yes, of course, sorry." Tigris replied. The younger padawan's calm tone and generous smile reinforcing the fact that they were having a friendly spar.

After the judge admonished Tigris for violating the rules and giving Aris his point, Tigris resumed her fighting stance, unflapped by her faux pas. The challenge she had faced since beginning lightsaber training was resisting her natural instinct to fall into Seyugi martial arts. The practice was so much a part of her, of her instinct and muscle memory, that the distraction of avoiding it was as problematic as her relative inexperience with the saber.

Nevertheless, Tigris was hard to deter. Her blade raised again at the ready, her eyes focused on Aris'. But this time, she didn't wait for the Epicanthix to strike. She juked forward at an angle, crouching remarkably low, and brought her blade into an upward thrust at Aris before darting retreat.

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Location: New Jedi Order Temple, Coruscant
Objective: 1
Tag: Braze Braze

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Ko was rather impressed that Braze chose to match him with the frenzied velocity. Move through the choreographed pattern in a blur. The Kel Dor was also rather surprised with how well the boy seemed to match him. Surprised because while Braze was always experimenting with other more ‘advanced’ styles Ko was studying shi-cho. The elder knight didn’t know if this was because Braze was just that good, or if he himself was just that bad.

However, Ko wouldn’t shift in his approach. Perhaps he was being too stubborn, and prideful. He could throw the boy off with an alternate strike and break the sequence he was performing. But he was determined to use the ‘Determination Form’. Risky and tricky blade work he would leave to self describe trakata “experts” who’d sooner throw their life away to earn a cheeky strike than live with a possible stalemate. Ko didn’t care to reinvent the wheel or himself and that was reflected in his direct and unapologetic bladework.

The Kel Dor went after Braze like a landslide of hundreds of dense rocks ready to pummel everything within their path. Both of them have trained and built up their endurance through different paths. For a moment Ko even forgot that he was supposed to be sparing. The drilled movements of the velocity had immersed him in the exercise and trying to win more than an actual duel. If this was a real fight Ko likely would’ve come across as very amateurish and uninspired.

His blade moved with a fast yet steady rhythm. Striking out at diagonal angles for each of the main body target zones. Wanting to best Braze with training that he had dedicated himself to. To face down and overcome Braze while he had the proverbial ‘high ground’ in Form 1. Perhaps goading Braze into this charade was the nasty trap in of itself. A trick without deceit, or an honest lie…
 
Kai'el Brat "Guardian of the Light"


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Braze pressed on, answering Ko blow for blow with rising speed and intensity. Their green blades meeting in a flurry of colorful blurred streaks. Braze didn't share the Kel Dor's raw physicality, and he couldn't win that contest with his smaller frailer form pitted against some one with that much more weight and muscle behind their strikes. Had Braze leaned harder into speed rather than trying to match strength for strength, the outcome might've tilted in his favor.

Instead, it happened in a blink. Braze's footing balked under the blinding assault—not a full stumble, but enough of a missteped shift of weight to throw off his timing. He attempted to recover with a rising parry, but the angle was off by just enough to leave an opening. And Ko didn't hesitate.

The first point of real contact came hard and clean. A well executed and calculated disarm.

Ko's training saber hammered against Braze's at an unforgiving angle, the energized blades flaring where they met. The point of impact hit near the hilt—low enough to bypass the flourish of form and aim straight for function. Braze had advanced too quickly in the rhythm, and Ko had punished his mistake without hesitation.

The blow didn't knock the saber from Braze's hand outright. The finger rings beneath the rapier-style cage kept it caught against his fingers. But the torque of the clash twisted the hilt sideways, locking awkwardly in his grip. A sharp jolt shot through his wrist, and his blade skewed uselessly off-line.

For a moment, he was holding a weapon he couldn't wield.

The center judge's hand went up, Two points to Ko. Earned through discipline and dominance of strength. They reset. Braze returned to center, jaw tight. His earlier momentum had cracked.

Braze's recent training drills had honed his fundamentals tirelessly so, even boardering on obsessive; but form alone didn't win matches. Not when pride whispered to keep pace on familiar terrain.

Not when his style fought itself.

Braze was breathing hard, but it was slowing. Controlled was his breathing well aware of his own physical form. He adjusted his grip, flexing his fingers before sharply cracking his wrist back into place with a grimace. When a medic stepped forward from the edge of the ring, he batted the offer away with a curt shake of the head. He adjusted and took his blade up in to his right hand, switching away from his hurt dominate left hand.

He lifted the blade briefly in a vertical salute preforming a classic Makashi form gesture, just enough to acknowledge Ko without words, before sliding smoothly into his stance.

Then he turned side-on, adopting a Makashi stance that was elegant and poised.

Gone was the forward-driving playful attempts at meeting Ko head on in strength and power of his earlier rhythm. In its place stood something colder with a sharper edge. A stance built not for matching brute force, but for dismantling it.
 
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Location: New Jedi Order Temple, Coruscant
Objective: 1
Tag: Braze Braze

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Ko hadn’t intended to hurt Braze with his Sun Djem attack. Only to knock the weapon from their hand. Not knowing that under the swept hilt the echani had secured their finger with it and locked it in place. The hand of the judge went up and the Kel Dor stepped back. He seems to have won their velocity.

His challenge and metaphorical high ground seemed to pay off. But he couldn’t rely on that to carry him through this game. It appeared too now that Braze would be taking this more seriously. Watching as the younger knight assumed a more classic and clear makashi stance, salute included with the right hand.

Unsure if he was at an advantage or not with Braze using their nondominant hand. Especially if they were going to focus more on using The Contention Form. Ko held his blade in both hands still. In a neutral guard with the blade pointed towards Braze. His body facing the echani square on. Ko was still catching his breath, his chest rising and falling beneath the cover of his dark robes. Deeply inhaling and exhaling through his antiox mask.

He predicted that Braze was going to be more formless and free in their approach now. Like fire and air. Ko held true still to being mindful and structured, water and stone. Their blades meet at their ends. Ready to smack one another away from the center-line. The Kel Dor tightened his lower hand on his weapon’s bulbous pommel and engaged his opponent. Zipping forwards and pulling his blade up some before snapping it forwards quickly to strike at Braze’s forehead…
 
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Braze lunged forward off the starting line, throwing a sharp jab towards Ko's midsection. However, he was too late to block Ko's counterattack. Ko possessed several advantages over Braze; his larger size not only gave him added strength, but his taller stature also provided him a reach that Braze could not match.

The training saber left a singed mark where it struck cleanly atop the Echani's snowy white crown.

Although the tournament rules explicitly stated that combative opponents were to target the torso—whether front or back—the center judge's hand shot up, signaling for a pause. Would a penalty be issued?

Wincing in pain, Braze stepped back to his starting position. Had that been a real saber, it surely would have landed a death blow. Conflicted emotions swirled within him, and he ran a hand through his pale hair, tousling it with a wince. The acrid scent of burnt hair filled the air, mingling with the atmosphere of the arena. A blackened, singed mark marred the spot of impact on his head.

The center judge and the two corner judges conferred briefly while Braze turned away, allowing the medic to treat the burn with a quick application of bacta spray. The half-Echani's pale features flushed a rosy hue from the bridge of his nose to the tips of his ears. Despite the initial shock, his eyes regained their fierce intensity as he turned to face Ko once more. He took a few steadying breaths, deliberately slowing his breathing.

Repositioning himself, Braze adopted a high guard in a Makashi-style pose. Ko had added literal insult to injury, and the shorter fighter was not pleased with the results. Nonetheless, he channeled his frustration into focus. The three judges continued their deliberations, and after a moment, the center judge made the call, awarding Ko two points for the clean attack.

The score now stood at 4-0; all Ko needed was one more point to win.
 
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"You're projecting," Dio spat back. This albino bantha fodder shoulder checked him and was now acting all high and mighty? He should take a look in the mirror—if he was brave enough.

"I'll let my hands do the talkin', then."

Dio shifted his weight into the strike, swatting the green blade like it was just an annoying housefly. After pushing the Echani's blade back, he followed up with a quick mid-section thrust.



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Valor let his blade fall back in a loose flourish, an arching motion that rose just in time to meet Dio's thrust with oddly casual precision. The contact came clean, in an almost effortless motion, as if he were brushing dust from his sleeve.
A coy smirk followed.

"Ah I see...You mistake volume for conviction...."

He stepped to the side, letting Dio's momentum carry him forward. Another subtle pivot, followed by a deflection of the blade, but not a retaliation. It was the kind of control that belittled.

"...And fists for insight."

Not a single counterstrike came. Just the faintest, almost infuriating smile.


 


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Aris steadied his stance as Tigris did, his expression still kind. In truth he was just as keen to throw hands uninhibited, but the rules where there. They were here to win a tournament. Perhaps after, another time, they could spar without any holding back. His grin widened just for a moment as he leveled his blade, once more holding it above his head in an opening. He'd make it work. Force it to work, even.

The duel started anew, and he stepped forward to immediately strike.

Except she was already there. He blinked. For all his strength and speed, experience was what he lacked most of all. He wasn't always going to be the one to strike first. It didn't help he was so damn tall as she went low. There was a pressure to his gut as her saber hit first. His strike halted before it could even reach her as he felt it.

A sigh escaped him. A breath as he nodded his head and relaxed his arms. That was for sure her point.

"..Alright. Okay. One more."

The points stood with one point to Aris for his graze, and now two points for her strike. His grin returned, but now determination filled his eyes. Focus, planning. He'd make this work.

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Interacting with: Iris Arani Iris Arani ... maybe Corin Trenor Corin Trenor and Valery Noble Valery Noble

Zaiya rocked back on her heels, her skin still a warm rosy golden hue but with the faintest ripple of pink flashing across her stripes before settling back into a steady ochre. Okay, yeah, she was nervous about the idea of actually signing up for a tournament ...but challenge brings growth, right? If she wanted to get better, to prove she could hold her own, she couldn't keep sitting on the sidelines.

"Okay. I'll join the next one, promise!" she said, even if her stomach twisted a little at the thought. No backing out now.

As for Silas...

"Oh, I don't know. I've never met him," Zaiya admitted, shifting her weight slightly. "You're the one who mentioned him. Why, is he your friend or another Jedi Master?"

She expected a simple answer, maybe something about him being a skilled duelist or some wise Jedi Knight she should be paying attention to. However, the tinest flutter rose along her skin making her aware of someone observing them. Zaiya glanced around before she noticed once again the Grandmaster and the man standing beside her.

"Do you know him?"

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Tigris' training blade found its mark. Again, the score came more from her martial art ability than from saber skills. After she made contact, she straightened to her feet, looked to Aris and gave him a nod, returning his smile with a small one of her own. She had made a good score, having finally shaking her instincts and embracing the tournament concept.

Tigris resumed her fighting stance once again, her features becoming sober again. Aris still wore his grin, but his young gaze revealed purpose. He was not going to let her get a strike like that on him again, Tigris was sure of it.

The tall teen held his saber high again. Tigris didn't like being on the defense, and thought she could catch him off guard again with a sudden attack. Lunging forward, she again crouched, this time to the opposite side, trying an upper cut swing. She was incredibly agile, but employing a saber with maneuvers designed for the unarmed failed her that time. The strike was awkward and ill aimed, forcing it to halt the strike and try to move before Aris could leverage her error.


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"Silas is a friend, yeah. Just happened to hear a conversation about him and wanted his name to be mentioned, that's all." Iris shrugged her shoulders. There wasn't much of a reason to talk about Silas in her mind. He was a good Knight, busy with his own things. Though maybe she should've. Her gaze shifted to Valery and Corin as her expression tightened just a bit. It was an exceedingly rare thing to see emotion on Iris's face, but she couldn't hide it. Confusion.

"I did. I don't know anymore."

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“Oh okay
,”Zaiya replied once Iris made it clear regarding Silas. However, the empath couldn’t avoid sensing the subtle shift within the Force when her Master caught the sight of Corin Trenor Corin Trenor .

Her brows rose in query and then scrunched in confusion.

“What do you mean you don’t know him anymore?”


How did one stop?

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Focus.

Aris took a breath as he readied his stance again, blade held high overhead. The excited grin on his face faded completely as he narrowed his eyes. Focus. Strength mattered none if he couldn't direct it. Tigris wasn't the type to place on the defensive either, so he couldn't count on just overwhelming her guard. She'd weave about, strike when he'd already tried.

He needed to be clever.

His gaze followed her. He listened. Her heartbeat, the tensing of her muscles. She moved first, fully intending to take him by surprise again. A similar move, but he could see it. The shift, the strike that was coming. He turned to the side to let it pass by as his blade shifted. Her strike wasn't quite right. It was an opening, and one he was fully planning to use.

Aris stepped once, into her path as he dodged her strike. Then brought his saber down full force as she was trying to regain her footing.

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"I used to sleep with him when we were younger, then we both went our separate ways and stopped talking completely." Was the blunt truth Iris didn't sugar coat. It wasn't a matter of sugar coating though. She spoke it aloud, made it real for herself. Corin was here, after all this time being away. Neither had reached out towards the other.

Were they ever anything?

Iris let out a sigh before looking back to Zaiya. She didn't want to think on Corin any longer, not here anyway. "Lets focus on you for now. You've been keeping up with your drills at least, right?"

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Location: New Jedi Order Temple, Coruscant
Objective: 1
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“I apologize Braze, that wasn’t quite in the rules was it?” Ko expressed. He also knew better than to dare threaten Braze’s snowy locks. If Ko could grow hair he’d likely be just as protective. Yet the judges still awarded the point, meaning it was now sudden death for Braze.

Now the Kel Dor was expecting considerable retaliation. First he hurt their hand, now their hair and was on the cusp of a victory and he predicted that Braze may not want to give it. However he could appreciate that Braze was keeping their frustrations and embarrassment in check. Ko found that commendable given how much of a hot headed teen the echani can be.

A thought surfaced in his mind. It wasn’t like him to taunt his opponents but he felt it was somewhat appropriate. Straightening his posture and readying his weapon once more, Ko spoke again. “You’ve been entertaining Juyo too haven’t you. Care to give me a live demonstration?” He asked, as if trying to temp Braze to discard Makashi, their favored style, the combat form favored by their own master. To instead use a style often seen as unbecoming of a Jedi that failed to develop the discipline to properly use it. Throw away what was familiar for something new and exciting. Ko was interested to see how Braze would answer his question. Answering this little test that had no right or wrong answers.
 
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As the center judge signaled for them to engage once more, Braze remained motionless, his gaze fixed ahead. Ko mirrored his stillness, both of them poised in the tension of anticipation.

"Even if it isn't in the rules... you did well," Braze conceded, though he recognized that this wasn't the time for either commendation or criticism. Ko had asked for a sparring match, not idle chatter.

To succumb to emotions and distractions would only lead Braze into deeper trouble. Ko knew precisely how to exploit the vulnerabilities that lay beneath the surface of the young warrior.

In an effort to disguise his intentions, Braze adopted a facade of Makashi, smooth and elegant while secretly preparing himself for the defensive maneuvers of Soresu, the safest form to embrace in this 'sudden death' scenario.

The judges observed with apparent neutrality, albeit with a hint of curiosity as to why both combatants had paused to engage in what seemed to be a brief conversation.

Braze listened intently as Ko taunted him, deliberately striking a nerve with a bold challenge spoken with soft words of calm, that caused heated feelings to simmer just below the surface. The young warrior was all too aware of Ko's attempt at Dun Moch. The psychological warfare designed to unsettle opponents was all too familiar to the half Echani.

Settling into his stance, Braze contemplated Ko's taunt, shifting his weight gracefully and taking a deliberate step back, then another, and yet a third. As he flourished his blade, it appeared as if he was conceding ground, though it was a calculated move. He inhaled deeply, filling his lungs with air to awaken every muscle in his body. To breath life and energy in to every fiber of his form for what was to come next.

Juyo, the advanced form of lightsaber combat, was traditionally reserved to be taught only to a small group of hand picked students. Reserved and restricted to those of high-level masters of other forms; a pursuit that even a Padawan like Braze had been, should not have been practicing.

However, he had only just stated to glimpse the intricacies of Juyo through the teachings of Teresa Zambrano | Darth Pellax Teresa Zambrano | Darth Pellax , who had imparted profound wisdom during their brief initial encounters. He had also engaged in fleeting 'lessons' alongside his studies of the formidable Darth Carnifex Darth Carnifex , where the raw intensity of the dark side became a vivid backdrop to his learning.

He had savored the moments spent learning from the beautiful displays of Thalia Senn Thalia Senn in their sparr together. His brief spar with Thalia Senn Thalia Senn had been an exquisite treasure, her fluid movements and expert technique leaving an awestruck, indelible mark on his budding understanding of the art.

Additionally, he had absorbed invaluable insights from observing the fierce engagements of both Aether of the Iron Order Aether of the Iron Order and Dillon Kai'el Dillon Kai'el on the battlefield.

To openly challenge Braze in a public lightsaber tournament for the Jedi Order—especially so soon after his knighthood—was more than playful bravado; it was a gauntlet thrown down with audacious confidence. For someone like Braze to harbor knowledge of Juyo, let alone practice it in secret, was one thing.

But to stage a live exhibition? To showcase this advanced form amidst the scrutiny of their peers, was an entirely different matter. It was a fearless dare, one that carried with it the weight of potential failure. Should Braze accept the challenge, he knew there would be no turning back; every spectator would bear witness to the outcome, etching the moment into their memories, and perhaps into the fabric of his reputation as well.

"As... you... wish,"

Braze whispered softly, almost under his breath, before launching forward with a sudden explosion of speed and ferocity. The jagged bursts of a furious flurry erupted from his small form as he unleashed a series of brutal attacks that came sharp and relentless, infused with all the aggressive power of Form V, yet executed with an intensity that felt almost otherworldly.​

Braze embraced Juyo fully, excitement and passion coloring his every move. The acrobatic fury crashed down on Ko like a fulcrum in motion, each strike laced with Ataru-like maneuvering, coupled with Makashi-style precision as he used the full weight of his body to press the elder down, climbing higher only to come down harder.

He came with such force, such violent resolve, that Ko was pushed to the very edge of the ring, where a hard decision awaited him: give Braze the ground… or buckle beneath the ferocious assault.

Braze was no longer shackled, and a slave to form. He had abandoned Makashi 's finesse—just as Ko had baited him to—but his Juyo strikes were not wild. They came with confidence. With absolute commitment. Each blow thundered against Ko's blade with unrelenting force. And despite the swirling tempest of emotion behind those attacks, Braze was the calm at the center of it all.

He was enthralled, completely consumed by the rhythm of their duel. Every clashing impact of their weapons thrilled him, spurring him forward, driving him to strike faster, harder, more recklessly than the last.

As he forced Ko into the far corner of the ring, Braze executed a brutal disarm. His momentum carried into a harsh elbow driven into Ko's solar plexus, followed by a ruthless downward slash. He spun, blade sweeping back in a horizontal arc—!

—but it never came.

He stopped. Panting. The metaphorical reins wrenched tight in his mind as he maintained control of himself... He held there, breath heaving, then eased from his stance and stepped back.

The silence that followed Braze's restraint was short-lived.

As the cacophony of clashing blades and heavy breaths settled, the judges watched with an intense focus that spoke volumes about their barely concealed surprise and scrutiny at what they witnessed. That hadn't been a display of technique; it was a striking illustration of potential that defied his age and experience, and possibly tradition.

From the edge of the ring, one of the judges, a tall Ithorian draped in deep green, raised a hand. Two fingers extended. A sharp motion that decisive. The signal: two points.

After a particularly fierce exchange, Braze had indeed managed to disarm Ko with a swift and calculated maneuver.

A murmur rippled through the observing Knights and Masters. Braze's disarm had been clean, and his follow-through; blunt as it had struck true across Ko's torso. But regulations were clear: no more than two points could be awarded per exchange, regardless of its intensity. And worse...

Another judge, a grizzled Togruta with stern red markings, stepped forward with a raised palm in a halting motion. Her voice cut through the tension like tempered glass.

"Knight Kai'el. You are warned. Excessive force following a decisive maneuver will not be tolerated—regardless of restraint shown after."
A penalty for the reckless escalation.

Braze stood still, catching his breath, jaw tight. The restraint had come too late. Not in the first swing, but in the moment after. Timing mattered.

Behind the judges, there was more than just protocol in their eyes. It was scrutiny coupled with a sense of unease. Perhaps even the faintest shade of awe.

A fifteen-year-old, newly knighted, had not only wielded Juyo, the Form of ferocity, but had done so with fluidity and control that rivaled seasoned warriors. That style was rare for a reason. Dangerous for a reason. And Braze had danced through it like he'd been born within the storm.

One of the younger Knights in the audience whispered something. Another silenced them with a firm glance. But they had all seen it.

Had Braze not been so composed, it could've ended very differently, and that was exactly the point.

The match was set to be resumed, but the air had shifted. Not just because of the score… but because of what Braze revealed.

The judges exchanged glances, their expressions revealing a subtle tension. They understood the impact of their ruling, especially given the circumstances. But now, Braze found himself at a disadvantage, and as the realization settled in, a ripple of murmurs swept through the crowd around their ring.

Recognizing Braze's burgeoning skill, the judges had noted the significant risk of allowing emotions to cloud judgment. With this in mind, one of the judges raised a cautionary finger. "You must remember the importance of control, young knight. This is a tournament governed by rules; emotions must not dictate your actions here."

Braze's heart sank at the penalty, and a warning for excessive force.

 

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