The Roast of Serixibis.

[Serixibis]

In this thread you are all allowed to be mean to me.

I am at best an amateur writer with too many ideas and no idea on how to convey them to you.

Put your collective hands around me and squeeze out the bad.

 

[Zair Xanatos]

Honestly, I think that's a problem with most people having a lot of ideas an not sure which one to do or how to "convey them." I have the same problem myself. I'm not going to roast you but encourage you to keep at it and to never lose your ideas/imagination.

 

[Serixibis]

Oh, I have no intention of stopping any time soon but everything I write (to me, at least!) feels...samey?

I absolutely detest how most of the stuff I come up with reads, but still haven't nailed down how to make it flow better.

 

[Onrai]

You will never bring the Sith species back to power.

[member="Serixibis"]

 

[Jsc]

[member="Serixibis"] - You need at least 1,000,000,000 more posts before we can roast you appropriately. Until then. Git Gud!

 

[Serixibis]

You will never bring the Sith species back to power.

[member="Serixibis"]

We never left, tyvm.

[member="Serixibis"] - You need at least 1,000,000,000 more posts before we can roast you appropriately. Until then. Git Gud!

fuk

 

[Taergal]

[member="Serixibis"]
Honestly you're not bad in my opinion.
About a year ago I was playing a tabletop named Vampire the Masquerade, was playing a Female Tzimisce who was asked by his maker to explain in detail how to turn a someone into a living puppet. So I explained as best I could (Didn't know any proper scientific / Latin terms for the human anatomy back then mind you) and my maker basically told me
"You have by next week to learn proper physiological terminology or I'll Flesh craft you so your T**ts hang where you're earlobes should."

 

[Voices of The Deep]

Get better art newb ur avatar is horrendous.

 

[Serixibis]

Get better art newb ur avatar is horrendous.

I plan on doing so....soon. Ish.

Maybe.

 

[Malok]

Pink Sith Acolyte bar?

Avatar that isn't 150x150?

Somebody help this child.

 

[Serixibis]

Pink Sith Acolyte bar?

Avatar that isn't 150x150?

Somebody help this child.

I'll take a new avatar, sure. But the Pink Sith Acolyte bar is staying right where it is.

 

[Darth Sibilus]

You know I said that I wouldn't be offended if you didn't use my avatar?

I lied.

 

[Serixibis]

You know I said that I wouldn't be offended if you didn't use my avatar?

I lied.

Stay mad, fool

 

[Darth Sibilus]

 

[Joza Perl]

Pink Sith Acolyte bar?

I like it.

 

[Serixibis]

I like it.

I like you.

 

[Xevek Nekonis]

I honestly like your posts, what few of them I've read. You're certainly doing better than me when I started off on the site. All I can think of suggesting is to keep writing and find a natural rhythm. I would say that you just need to be more confident in your writing, but, I'd be a hypocrite if I did so, so, here's hoping you turn out better than me in that regards.

...Also, nice Avatar. I mean, it's not a Zabrak, but, the tattoos are pretty cool.

 

[Serixibis]

Thank you for the feedback! Rhythm and flow is something I really struggle with truth be told.

Sometimes I jump around and it turns into a trainwreck really fast as my tone changes pace mid-paragraph.

"Not a Zabrak", No, better.

 

[Zef Halo]

The roast of who?

 

[Serixibis]

Ouch.