The Roast of Serixibis.

[Marina DeVoe]

This thread got my curiosity, so I had to peek in and read it.

My only two credits is to keep IC even in friendly discussions and planning. I've often even used posting games as an avenue to try new character ideas on the many boards that I wrote on. Often enough, just friendly IC batter can result in better story writing, or as you put it, better story flow.
Think of it as a means of practice writing. I put as much effort in posting games as I do in RPs...just not as long. But the idea is the same. Prof your post and see to it that it relays what you are trying to say.

 

[Varik Ice]

As someone else who's still (relatively) new to the board, I think you're doing a very good job so far. I can't speak as some of the longer vets can, but I enjoy your writing style and Serixibis as a character, so good job! Nothing but positives from me, really.

 

[Serixibis]

Thank you for the kind words! I'm still doing a bit of reading about prose and the like, hopefully i'll be able to find my niche soonish and be comfortable with describing things as I see them.

This is a bible of style, you should all check it out.