Approved Tech Training stones.

[Undin Jaii Kryze]

Image Source: http://www.stylishwa...ce-hair-health/
Intent: To provide a new training style/weapon for Sasori customers.
Development Thread: If needed.
Manufacturer: Sasori Designs
Model: N/A
Affiliation: Open Market
Modularity: No
Production: Mass-Produced.
Material: Durasteel.
Classification: Ammunition.
Size: Handheld.
Length: 10-18 cm each.
Weight: 1 kg each.
Ammunition Type: None
Ammunition Capacity: As many as one can throw with their hands/with the Force.
Effective Range: Personal.
Rate of Fire: 1/throw.
Special Features: None.
Strengths: +Allows for a easily throwable weapon to aid Padawans in blocking training. +Can be used as a weapon.
Weaknesses: -Easibly cutable. -If shot with a blaster, it may throw off its trajectory. -If bited, it may break teeth.
Description: These weapons made out of durasteel will help in Padawan blocking training, by being fired at them while they try to block them. It can also be used as a throwable weapon that can make some pretty hefty damage on an unarmored enemy, as it would be like trowing a brick at their heads, only that this brick is made out of durasteel.
Primary Source: (Please link the source of another writer's submission that you are modifying for your use; only necessary for "Chaos Canon" submissions)

 

[Jamie Pyne]

RESEARCH REVIEW
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Star Wars Canon:
Pending initial review
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Starwars Chaos:
Pending initial review
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WITHOUT DEV THREADS
Pending initial review
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WITH DEV THREADS
Pending Initial review
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SUGGESTIONS
Pending Inital review

 

[Jamie Pyne]

Awesome. Pending Admin Approval. Thanks! [member="Spencer Varanin"]

 

[Ellie Mors]

[member="Undin Jaii Kryze"]

7. All submissions need to conform to the general idea of Star Wars. No Gundam Wings, no Transformers.

These are potatoes made of steel that are.. thrown? Regardless, this isn't Star Wars.

Change the name, change the classification, anything, so it is related to Star Wars.

 

[Undin Jaii Kryze]

[member="Darth Vitium"]
Edited.

 

[Ellie Mors]

Effective Range: Depends on the strenght of the thrower.

This needs to be an actual range.

Rate of Fire: Depends on the way it is throwed, for example if used with Force, it could one could launch many making it a pump action, or one could just throw them using their hands, making it a semi-automatic.

This is not what pump action and semi-automatic mean. Those are both terms used in firearms, semi-automatic meaning that pulling the trigger puts another chamber in the round automatically and only requires another pull of the trigger to fire and pump action.. is well, when you pull a handgrip back and forth to get rid of spent ammunition and chamber a new round.

This does neither of these.

-Cannot be eaten.

This is not a weakness.

 

[Undin Jaii Kryze]

[member="Darth Vitium"]

Edited.

 

[Ellie Mors]

Effective Range: Battlefield.

Battlefield would be the equivalent of firing artillery or another weapon that could reach completely from one side of the battlefield to the next (like firing a sniper at someone several hundred meters away).

Please be more realistic with your effective range. Personal is more reasonable.

 

[Undin Jaii Kryze]

[member="Darth Vitium"]
Edited.

 

[Ellie Mors]

Approved.