When's this guy gonna stop?

[Darth Carnifex]

Beloved fellow writers, it's that time of the year again.

The time where I post a feedback thread to my one and only character, Darth Vornskr, in a vain attempt to garner likes and engorge my already bloated ego.

Last time I posted a feedback thread was on October 25th, 2015.

And a lot has happened since then!

Vornskr has died (for the second time!) and traversed that ethereal realm known as Chaos before being birthed back into the physical realm, teeth gnashing and eyes overflowing with hate, ready to tear the Republic and the Jedi a new one.

So far he hasn't gotten to do that, but on April 15th he'll get his chance.

Anyways, I want to hear what people think of him, if I should continue down the path I'm going with this character, or if I've finally broken the realm of belief and I need to curve my swerve and shouldn't prepare to quit my day job anytime soon.

Long story short, come at me bruh.

I'll blade you gud.

 

[Ellie Mors]

He's too subservient to his ideals. My only critique.

 

[Darth Carnifex]

He's too subservient to his ideals. My only critique.

I think that's a crucial part of his character.

His steadfast adherence to an ideology that fundamentally drives his entire existence.

[member="Braith Achlys"]

 

[Dune Rhur]

If you're happy with Vornskr as a character, why not keep writing him until such a time as you're not. Three years means you've probably made mistakes but done more right than wrong as a writer to still be going with the character. Either that or you're totally a delusional psychopath.

 

[Eldaah Aderyn]

He needs to do more dastardly deeds, kill more planets, bring the pure evilness back

 

[Darth Tremor]

[member="Darth Vornskr"]

Your character is awesome. Just keep going until you're dissatisfied.

 

[Léon]

I always found him a bit comical, not inherently a bad thing unless it wasnt something you were trying to convey

 

[Valiens Nantaris]

He needs to die.

 

[Darth Carnifex]

I always found him a bit comical, not inherently a bad thing unless it wasnt something you were trying to convey

Blame a Scottish lass named Louise, she was an inspiration for me during my first year on Chaos in 2013, and she found a way to perfectly weave comedy into her writing.

It eventually rubbed off on me and I've been dropping in some comedic doses into my own writing whenever I found an opportunity.

[member="Léon"]

 

[Briar Thorn]

[member="Darth Vornskr"]

I find him to be a fun character and I think the pacing of some comedy into writing is a good thing. Can't be intense all of the time after all and not burn out your interest in them.

My only complaint is he hasn't slapped around any jedi recently.

 

[Jack Mirrikh]

He needs to do more dastardly deeds, kill more planets, bring the pure evilness back

The purpose of the Sith is not to be evil for evil's sake. The purpose of the Sith is that they're true to themselves. You keep rocking the legend, [member="Darth Vornskr"].

 

[Jsc]

I've always been curious how you chose to age Barny Boo? Is there any method to his madness erm... age?

 

[Grrwunhoooll Agaburry]

Vornskr is awesome character but he his Subscription to Life is Op. Nerf Plox

 

[Thurion Heavenshield]

Vornskr has died (for the second time!)

I refuse to believe he's only died twice.

I love me some Kainey! The only truly evil character we have on this site that I can think of, and who actually loves being evil. ^_^

 

[Hailey Sosis]

I think he needs armour and weaponry made out of the blood of his enemies, I think draining say 40,000 should do it.

 

[Jeron Verity]

[member="Darth Vornskr"]


Broskr Darth Vornskr

[member="Harley"]


Broskr has worse in his closet.

 

[Hailey Sosis]

[member="Jeron Verity"] yeah heard about what you get up to

 

[Jeron Verity]

[member="Harley"]

What I get up to? I was talking about Vornskr.

 

[Hailey Sosis]

[member="Jeron Verity"] yes he likes thing hanging in his closets

 

[Connor Harrison]

[member="Darth Vornskr"] I don't believe I've had the pleasure of meeting you out there but you come across as a fun character in the respect that you don't take things TOO seriously, and because of that you seem well respected.

I know, I don't know why I think that either!

Either way, always enjoy seeing what quirky stories you get up to and you seem to be one of the few real Sith "monsters" out there, taken from the EU or something. Which is a good thing.

And I love the "Soon" posts you make. They always make me chuckle. I know, I'm a simple sort.