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Approved Tech XR-09 Naga Troop Carrier

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Intent: To create a assault troop carrier tank for the CIS and to fufill the contract that Baktoid has with the Confederacy
Development Thread: Will do one if required
Manufacturer: Saiba Group
Model: XR-09
Affiliation: CIS ( but also sold on general market)
Modularity: Can allow for droid or manned use
Production: Mass-Produced
Material: . Quadranium steel plates with a titanium hull
Description: This light assault tank is meant to allow soldiers or droids insert themselves into fortifications quickly. Its fast speed means it has less room for people than it would like to admit. It can only fit a small platoon and it is not comfortable in any means. It has medium armor and is more centered towards droids then men but will carry a mix of both or one or the other. It is fast and small and and is a first in the new generation of Baktoid Tanks.

After the takeover and subsequent release of assets under Ty’rel, Saiba retained the designs and production rights of high priority technology for a fair sum of money.

Role: Troop Transport
Height:3.2
Length:8
Width: 3
Weight: 29.1 tons
Propulsion: tracks 2 SSct power generators
Top Speed: 90km/h
Armaments: 1 Repeating Blaster 2 anti-personnel blaster cannon and 2 concussion missile launchers
Ammo: 6 Homing concussion missiles
Crew: Droid Brain
Passenger Capacity: 20 humans or 35 B1's or similar droids
Misc. Equipment: Two thrusting/vibrating rods that essentially are battering rams so that the front door can open straight into enemy fortifications.
 
Alright allie lets hit this up, I see a couple issues, but I think we can work through them so I'll list 'em out for you.

1. Being a tank I would like to know how the tank travels, and without a picture I don't know if thats wheels, treads, hover etc could you just add a line to the description letting any users know?

2. A troop carrier isn't a tank its an assault vehicle you got it perfect in the title but the guns an assault vehicle are not nearly that of tank. However thats mostly just me nit picking as I used to drive a tank I believe

3. You state light vehicle, fast speed, but medium armor... I'd like to see the armor go down to medium to match the speed and type you were looking for

4. Your SSCT looks to only require one power generator which would save room allowing you to have a platoon squished in there with the gunner, and driver.

5. With it's light nature I believe blaster cannons with missile launchers are a bit much, I'd cut one out please

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The two generators are to allow it to move as fast, with medium armor. I lowered the blaster cannons to what they should of been to begin with after some research. I didn't realize there were so many levels of blaster cannons. um your number 3 confuses me btw. If you don't think this will work than I shall submit to more changes.
 
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