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Sigh What can I say? I'm serious as to how Connel is turning out in other's eyes? Anything good about him? Anything I should work on?

Hey all! I haven't necessarily been around for too horribly long, but I have had pretty wonderful interactions with a lot of people thus far and I would absolutely love thoughts! What do you think of the character? Are there things about her that could use improvement? What things do you like...

This is the first time I've posted a feedback thread since 2020, and seeing all the recent ones crop up got me wanting to post one of my own. This'll be for feedback and constructive criticism for the character of Carnifex, his personal group the Kainate, and the stories written concerning both.

I love these things. Always have, always will, yada yada if you've read these from me before you know the drill. I make them usually at least once a month but I've been slacking more recently. Saw a couple thrown up, so, here we go. How's my writing? How are my characters? What can I improve...

It's that time again! Jonyna has gone through a significant journey since I've started her on Chaos, and an even longer journey since I started her on my TTRPG game. I've always made her to be a bit of a counterculture character, not sticking to the tradtional way of being a jedi, or even a...

Just under 300 posts as Persephone as a PC rather than NPC. She's gone from a street urchin from the Lower City of Taris to young heiress in the Dashiell family. Starting to lose her uneducated speech patterns and explore the 'verse at large and make new connections along the way. Of course, as...

He's been all over the place (in my opinion), but I'm liking how he is turning out. What do you guys/girls think? Everything has lead to where he is now.

I just realized I hit 1000 posts, and since my last feedback was back in May, I wanted to throw this in for some input. So, many neat things have occurred with Zaiya since that last feedback, and I wanted to get some ideas, musings, and the like on what would make my writing better and what may...

I'm currently at 383 Posts and 30 Threads with Balun Dashiell. At this time, he has left the New Jedi Order, signed up with the Tingel Arm Coalition, and become an Aquilian Ranger of the Outer Rim. He is a Rogue Jedi who has already managed to help a Sith Apprentice turn to the light, and he...

Part of me was thinking I would only ever put this up once I beat the 1000 post mark, but given the lull in activity on my end and a fair bit of thinking, I've decided to put this up now. As most of you probably know, I made Jenn a fair while ago, played her as an uncompromising Old Ways Mando...

I'm always big on these threads. My perspective is mine and mine alone, which means there's things I write in one way that will always be read in other ways I can't think of myself. These threads are great for shining a light on those things. So hit me. What do you think of Aris, his story, how...

Hello all! So, after having to spend about a month off with the semester wrapping up, as well as the laboratory possibly working toward a new contract, things finally settled down enough for me to be able to write again. So naturally, instead of taking it easy and easing my way back in, I...

First off, thanks for the hard work that obviously went into this to make it easier to sort subs and find things for roleplay. Suggestions: To allow URL links like this in the fields. To help people find any information they need from what is submitted more easily. Please make clearer what the...

Because I haven't written this guy that much and want to keep a personal record of my struggles with developing him, I'm going to provide my own feedback/list of issues to address. Then y'all can add yours in the replies, if you want. I Can’t Figure Out How to Write a Seer Without Metagaming...

Hello everyone! I've been rping Zaiya, my Lovalla 14-year old character, for a little over two and a half months. I originally created her back in August of 2020, but unfortunately, wasn't able to get her to stick to really get her going. Thankfully, this time around, I had a great start-up...

I have reached 50 posts on Falentra, previously known as Nouqai Veil. Nouqai was created for the sole purpose of rping in this thread as I wanted in on the action. It was really not my intent to have her become my main charrie, but that happened. I have time skipped her quite a bit from 14-18...

Hello! Its hard to believe that 3 Years have gone bye since I joined the Chaos Roleplay Community, although granted I do have a reputation for deleting characters on a whim : 3 Recently my focus has been on making the Trade Federation of Planets into a real powerhouse within the galactic...

I am huge on feedback. When it comes to writing, I only see things the way I happen to see them. It's hard to see angles of how I write that others might simply because it doesn't occur to me. That's why I make these kinds of threads, get new perspective and generally improve my writing further...

Hi there everyone. I finally made a milestone with my oc, Minerva Fhirdiad writing up to around 500 posts. While I do have a few characters she is probably been my most favorite character to roleplay here. With that in mind I would like your honest opinions about her as a character. Such as her...

I feel like there's been a fair few of these feedback threads lately. And now it just so happens that Ko has reached their 500th post milestone. So I'm looking for feedback on my padawan here. He's been my first an only genuine attempt at writing a Jedi PC, and I would say that for me it has...