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Hello everyone! What a milestone, we've hit 500 posts with Azurine. It came a little slower than I might have liked, but at the same time it's been quite a journey! So, now I believe it's time for some feedback on how things have been going. What do you like? What do you dislike? Are there...

Hellooooo Chaos, It seems wild to me that it has already been nearly two years of writing with y'all. I've had so much fun and have met so many cool characters along the way! Between my two Sith Order characters (Madrona A'Mia & Naamino Zuukamano ) I have now reached 500 posts. Per tradition...

I was originally planning to do this ages ago at 500 and forgot, then 600 came and I forgot again, 700 seemed like a weird number to me so 800 it is! I've had an interesting time finding Kaila's voice and admittedly I feel like there's a lot I could or should be doing better, especially combat...

I just noticed I passed the 2,500 mark. Jonyna has been through a rollercoaster over the last 6 years of writing her. Started off as a level one not-even-a-padawan, to now a jedi master as part of the council. While I understand most won't understand the journey she's been on, I'd love to...

Doing this with Lily as well. Nearly 800 posts in with Lily and have been loving her journey as a Padawan. Her recent troubles with inadequacy slightly based on some real life feelings I always have, which has been fun and somewhat therapeutic to express in this character. I am also excited to...

It only took roughly twelve years for this account to reach 2,000 posts. A few reasons for that, mainly because Makai was a PC at age six (before the NPC rule) and taking some time away from the character here and there. I didn't think I was going to get to this point with Makai. I hit a patch...

Well, here it is! Nefaron has officially gotten to 100 posts and is now my most successful character on Chaos. I have created (and subsequently deleted) several characters before who never got to this level of investment, so this is definitely a sign that something is going right. That being...

I don't think I can remember doing one of these, ever. Maybe I have, maybe not, not sure. But I wanted to focus more on the current characters I've been writing, what to improve on, what to do better, and what I could expand on. I don't intend to ever do a "critique of Alan", because holy shit...

I hadn't thought much about doing this, but after my little re-arranging of a few characters I am curious. Connel has been through aLOT in a relatively short amount of time. Has it been worth it? Is there anything that you didn't like? Anything fall flat? Anything you geek out at? Am I...

It's still early but with how new I am to the format and medium I'd like to invite feedback on how I have been writing Aadihr. There has certainly been ups and downs with my personal satisfaction of my own posts up to this point; I'd like to invite external feedback (actionable feedback...

Wow. I never thought that I would ever write a Force User. Less so one tied to the same themes as Serina Calis. And what a journey it has been. For reference, I started writing on Chaos almost 2 months ago, I am not an avid writer and apart from Chaos I don’t write at all. So consider me...

I haven't posted one of these yet. Primarily because I've been too busy, but also because I've tended to be a little scared to do it. Still, I'd like people's opinions and critiques on Caelan as a character. What do you like about him? What do you hate about him? What do I need to work on as his...

Sigh What can I say? I'm serious as to how Connel is turning out in other's eyes? Anything good about him? Anything I should work on?

Hey all! I haven't necessarily been around for too horribly long, but I have had pretty wonderful interactions with a lot of people thus far and I would absolutely love thoughts! What do you think of the character? Are there things about her that could use improvement? What things do you like...

This is the first time I've posted a feedback thread since 2020, and seeing all the recent ones crop up got me wanting to post one of my own. This'll be for feedback and constructive criticism for the character of Carnifex, his personal group the Kainate, and the stories written concerning both.

I love these things. Always have, always will, yada yada if you've read these from me before you know the drill. I make them usually at least once a month but I've been slacking more recently. Saw a couple thrown up, so, here we go. How's my writing? How are my characters? What can I improve...

It's that time again! Jonyna has gone through a significant journey since I've started her on Chaos, and an even longer journey since I started her on my TTRPG game. I've always made her to be a bit of a counterculture character, not sticking to the tradtional way of being a jedi, or even a...

Just under 300 posts as Persephone as a PC rather than NPC. She's gone from a street urchin from the Lower City of Taris to young heiress in the Dashiell family. Starting to lose her uneducated speech patterns and explore the 'verse at large and make new connections along the way. Of course, as...

He's been all over the place (in my opinion), but I'm liking how he is turning out. What do you guys/girls think? Everything has lead to where he is now.

I just realized I hit 1000 posts, and since my last feedback was back in May, I wanted to throw this in for some input. So, many neat things have occurred with Zaiya since that last feedback, and I wanted to get some ideas, musings, and the like on what would make my writing better and what may...