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I meant to do this earlier on, but it got away from me. I've been writing Briana now for...well, this will be the third year in just a couple of months. She's easily become my main and preferred character, replacing her mother whom I'd written off and on for years, and I'd like to know how I've...

its a small milestone as ive only started rping on here in dec. i haven't had my writing critiqued much. I am open to constructive criticism, comments and feedback on writing, character, plot, lore and whatever more. also this is definitely not a bit of publicity for our storyline cuz why not :3...

Heyo, so I finally made it to 500 posts, in full honesty probably should have reached this milestone much earlier... ...But hey better later than never, amiright? So to all the people who have written with Malum, and even to the people who haven't and either want too or just simply have read...

5k is a big number. There was a point where Kahlil's posts compared to the posts of the other characters on this writer account were neck and neck, but he's long left that in the dust. 5k really just drives that home. So, it's feedback time for him. He's by far my most consistent now...

Hello everyone! So after like 2 or 3 years of writing this one character without any LOAs I am knocking on the door of 2,400 posts! Given that I've seen people do feedbacks after like 500 posts I figure it's finally time that I do so as well! Normally I am, rather infamously, not really open to...

Jonyna's been through a roller-coaster since getting unfrozen. How y'all feel about her?

I finally reached 500 posts as Hilal! It was amazing this happened since I've originally made Hilal as someone who was a typical Mandalorian Warrior who takes on bounties and who loves to fight. She was even older and had a different avatar. However, looking her over, I wanted to take Hilal in...

It's been a while since I last made one of these. I used to have a habit of tossing out at least one a month, just because I like getting feedback. And y'know, being told how great and awesome I am. Both are good. So yeah. Let me know what you like, what you don't, what you think I can improve...

Yeah, I know that 100 posts isn’t really a whole lot, relatively speaking. But for me that feels like a bit of an achievement for Ko since they’re my first attempt at playing a Jedi and stuck with it and has opened up more avenues for story telling on the site that I wasn’t used to. I figured...

Hey gang. I decided to do a rebooted version of the feedback thread for my Mando. What your opinions how she been doing so far as a character?

Arcturus has been through a bunch of development as of late, he's finally coming into his own, and that always makes me eager to see how I'm doing. I'm always down for some constructive criticism and genuine feedback, so have at ye! Thoughts on him as a character? Where he's headed? What can I...

Hello, This is my attempt at becoming a better writer. I had a problem with my previous character to get a real story or center my characters. I was not really good at writing anything more then a background character that bounced around the galaxy. I lost interest and could not find my...

I have always been afraid of doing one of these. Now, coming up on eight (?) years of writing her, I am curious what people actually think. Is there anything I should be doing differently? Has anything had an impact? Thank you for your feedback.

^ Here's a lineup of some of the art I used for Inanna over the years. Was a pain to find the files, but hey, it's kinda cool to see the visual progression of the character/the different guises she's assumed. Inanna Hoole/Yomin/soon to be Harth was my first female character on Chaos. She's so...

Usually I do these like, once a month because I love getting pats on the back and constructive criticism. Been slacking on that, which is my own fault. But hey, now I hit 3k so why not start it up again! First time I've done that since [redacted] did like six years ago, which should say a lot...

Haven't been around as long as most people, but I'm struggling to find some direction for Cailen and thought I'd come here! So, have at it! Feedback, criticism, or advice on how to develop a Padawan (outside of duels and battle) would be greatly appreciated!

Give me your best shot! Mainly I am talking the character. I know my writing sucks I am probably my biggest critique on that. I have struggled a great many years to get to the point of writing somewhat decently. Given my background it was hard considering I was nearly illerate for a good part...

Being that it's been a little over a year since I started writing Briana, the daughter of my oldest RP character, Teyla (with consideration of the brief hiatus I took from the character), I thought I would put one of these out there and see what people think of her as she inches closer to...

These are always some of my favorite threads to post up, mostly because there's always things I don't think about or see when I write my characters that can be changed to help make em better. And I like making my characters better. This time though it's gonna be specifically about Iris here. 2k...

Hello gang, hope everyone is doing well. For this occasion I was hoping for some feedback on my Mandalorian character, Minerva Fhirdiad. Specifically, how does she come across as a character personality-wise? I'm hoping some different points of view would give insight if anyone is interested in...