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I preempted this by a few hours, I must confess, but it is but the date on the clock which matters, no? Officially it's another year gone by, and round about six months since my last request for critique, and I'd like to think I've changed a bit since then. Both in terms of characters, and how...

And a lot more to go- I love you all.

How the heck has it been so long? Anyway, any sort of feedback, critique, whatever, would be appreciated :D Either on me personally, or the characters I have/have had <3

Two years have passed since the creation of this character. She's gone through a lot, reached places I didn't expect or even originally want her to reach but that's the beauty of organic writing - we never know where we'll end up! I'd like to see what the general community thinks of my progress...

Okay so long story short I’ve taken part in a proper big battle and two doms during my time here They’ve either gone awful or subpar. And I think it’s me but I don’t know what. I know the whole buddy idea, but what about everything else, like the writing?

I've got a question for people. I've stepped...away from threading as much as I used to, resigning to stay away from Doms and invasions and faction threads sticking with telling my characters' stories through Codex and Factory submissions. But I want to thread some more and I want to ask what...

Ok...my first one of these... How am I doing so far with @Maple Harte and [member="Nine Lives"]? What am I deficient at? Are my posts enjoyable? Too lengthy? Boring? Do they need more detail? Am I taking too long inbetween posts? Any feedback from other writers, especially those who have been...

Hey guys, I'm a little lost as to what to do with Tathra at the moment. I'd really appreciate, some critisism from my fellow writers. Some ideas as to where to go with the character and perhaps what to focus on to improve my writing and the character. Thanks.

Please give me some criticism on both me, and my character(s)! I will greatly appreciate all, from positive to negative, anything to help me better myself. Thank you. Picture taken on my first day of being a Factory Judge, for the ID card.

Please. I enjoy it.

Hi, I'm Libby, and I'm a Chaos Junkie. I don't think I've done one of these since the Writers Feedback area became a thing. Barring the past couple of weeks of insomnia/decreased posting, I've actually been back at Chaos pretty steadily for a while now. Figured I should post up one of these...

Well then. I've been here three years today. It's genuinely surprising, I rarely last three years anywhere so I'm kinda proud I made it three years here. Absolutely love you guys to bits and am looking forward to three more years of exciting fun stories! I'm hoping Chaos continues to grow...

Hello Chaos ! Come this November I would have been around here for a full three years. I found myself thinking earlier how I got started out on here way back when I first created my Zorathi Brothers (Karrus & Zarack), then moved to Veiere Arenais after they failed to take off. I've made a lot...

It's been a good 6 months since the last time I asked for feedback, and I think enough time has passed for an evaluation on both my character [member="Darth Carnifex"] and myself as a writer. Especially because so many new faces have joined the site. So have at it, fam.

I do this every so often, last time being after my return in August, and I've decided today is as good a time as any for another one of these threads. Roast me if you'd like, or give me any feedback/criticism/etc on any of my current characters or my performance as a writer.

Looking for a writer to help me populate the planet Nalrobi with animals, and maybe interesting plants. Its a planet covered in rainforests, jungles, deserts, the works, but with no codex listed wildlife. If you wanna really flex your creative muscles and go wild this is for you.

Posting up a feedback thread is something I’ve never gotten around to doing, despite being here for some time, and have always been curious about what would be said in regards to my writing. I suppose you could say that I’m likening this experience to that of a sick man, not wanting to visit the...

This is a rare thing for me. Over the years of ever-changing hobbies and forms of expression, I've found I'm quick to get used to communities, and therefore, quick to get bored with them. And yet here I am, still present on Chaos (though more so on discord) long enough for a year to go by. Whoop...

Today marks five years of SWRP for me. I joined this website at the onset of the strange, aimless summer before I started college and am now posting this feedback thread towards the tail end of the strange, aimless spring after graduating college. Isn't that crazy? I think it's crazy. I am...

Just what it says on the tin! How's my roleplay? What needs work? IC, OOC, my characters, storylines, ideas, grammar? I wanna hear it all! I want to know what you guys like, what's been working, and what I can work on to become better. (Me? Competitive? Nah...) I would really love to hear...