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Alrighty,
I figure it's time to get some feedback on how I write and if I've improved since I started here. I won't be able to drag out my earliest RP's as those are buried in the One Sith faction never to be seen again because I left that faction, oops. If you want to see the worst of me then...
lets hear it. tel my dyslexic ass how bad i am.
where i need to work on things.
look i know my spelling grimmer. (it was dropped from the curriculum when i was at school btw.)
I'm no genius prodigy, or excellant writer. But I think I'm pretty damn good. But that being said, I have a grossly inflated opinion of my writing skill, and I'm an opinated prick. I was wondering if there's anything I could personally do as a writer on this site to improve my prose? Is there...
I know, I have been doing many of the game's dirty jobs and it has put a lot on pressure on me OOCly, which can make me ruffle some feathers and make some mistakes, especially in PvP. (I usually stay away from PvP, and I don't usually do much of the classical "Jedi-vs-Sith" plots) While I found...
As many of you have probably noticed by now, I'm kicking RCFC into high gear once again. My goal is to hit Tier 4 by the time the one year anniversary of its founding roles around, so I thought it might be a good idea to get some feedback on the future of the company.
It's equal parts...
Well, first time for everything right? I have been told by my closest friends that I am a pretty good writer, but that was them, and not you loveable people out there in the Chaos, so I want to hear from you, good, bad, the ugly, whatever! Feel free to cuss me out for a previous thread where I...
It's a long time since the last time I posted a feedback thread.
I think I may have improved in certain fields, maybe have gotten worse at something else. I don't know, but you definitely do. So let me know what you think, however brutal or crazy your thoughts are (stay civil, though). :P...
Alright folks, since currently Mara is the character I'm the most invested in and I have quite a lot of plans for her, I figured I'd take the chance to see how I could improve on her.
So, just tell me anything you have to say - my writing skills, character (I just rebooted her bio so please do...
I don't remember when I last posted this, but I will assume it was in the beginning of the year. So, making that assumption, here's the annual bi-annual regular critique of me as a writer. Opinions? Thoughts? Gripes?
So I recently was thinking about my experiences rp'ing here, and started thinking of how I've interacted with people, good and bad. So, I decided to ask for feedback on my characters. If you have had any interaction with the following characters, please come and give your honest opinion of the...
It's that time again CHAOS!
Welcome to JSC's 2016 Feedback Thread Bonanza of Feeb-back and stuff!
The place where you tell JSC what it's gonna take to make CHAOS even MOAR EPIC!
And also, maybe. Talk about plots an stuff!
Time to give ol' Jay all the Feeb-backs...
So when I sign on to Chaos it's with my FB profile which signs me into this, my writer profile. Okay? Great. But, if I want to get writing via one of my Character profiles, the only way I know how to switch is to open up a forum, and select from the drop down box which of my profiles I want to...
So, basically, what do you all think about how I write Katelyn and how she is as a character? I'm curious as to what people think about me as a writer as I'm a rather young writer at the moment and would like to get feedback now to…ya' know, learn what I'm good at, bad at, need to improve on...
So In case you didn't know fatty is currently limited to the use of a keyboard-less tablet, and this is extremely frustrating for me. In effect, I am currently incapable of writing effective IC posts without wanting to tear off my own head.
That has not stopped me from reading or wanting to...
So just because I have a few threads lined up I wanted to know what I could do to improve my writing style? I know that my posts are typically quite short in comparison to a lot of posters here, so if anybody has tips on lengthening posts that would also be much appreciated.
Was never planning to do one of this, but got very bored and slightly drunk and was reading other ones and well, here we are.
I'm not really sure that I interact consistently enough with enough people to merit more than a handful of replies (if that) but whatever. No harm no foul, I suppose...
So I kinda get the feeling sometimes that my writing doesn't really exceed past dark edgy stuff. I've tried other things, but to be fairly honest, the grim dark is where I feel most comfortable. The thought of writing an actual light-sided character has crossed my mind before, but never really...
So Kira is a character that has been an on and off affair for myself since her conception. Yet finally as I move from a witty and unknowing adventurer towards a full blown Jedi Knight in training I wouldn't mind hearing what people have to say?
This is of course open discussion, not only about...