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Just kidding. (or am I?) Sup, Chaos. To some of you old folks, I'm a familiar face in the fact that I've been writing on this great site for just over two years now. To the rest of ya, I'm just a young guy who likes to spend his free time making up characters and writing about them on the...

Everyone who is anyone seems to be asking for feedback these days, and I ladies and gentlemen am someone. I have therefore resolved to join the club and ask for feedback on Lucien and indeed any of the other characters in my repertoire. Or indeed me in general. I have my wine ready so let the...

It has been a month since I got to write Nima, and I've been wondering how I am doing. If you have any feedbacks for me I'll gladly take them :D Also I have more plans for more characters yet I am waiting for Nima's chapter to slow down a bit :) So just do it! :D

I've actively tried to get better. I joined this community almost two years ago to cope with moving away for the umpteenth time. Since then I've had a lot of fun, took things too seriously, got upset over things, killed off or destroyed my favorite characters and a myriad of other stuff. I...

I just retconned all of the Sin family, save the NPCs I have made for Romeo. That means his brother no longer is a PC, or existing, though its always up for grabs, and his cousins, and other sister. Doing this put a lot of pressure off my back. Think it was a good idea?

Have at it. Im curious what you guys think of my writing and characters. (Yup, copying Corey, sorry man but i am curious once more.)

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I need to work on Gabes persona it traits and his back ground I have some ideas and I'm not sure if I want to find some family for him I think it would be a good idea but for his background i have some ideas but need some more and help to put it together and to work on my writing and maybe to...

Been around for exactly a year now, went from nobody to somewhat somebody, and now back to probably nobody again. How, as a writer, both in terms of writing a character(or few) and maturity, have I done? I did a feedback thread like this a while back when we first had these added to the site...

So, I've done this before, and I'm doing it again since I've been threading with more people than I used to. If you've ever written with my fine blue doctor, [member='Cobalt'], [member='Cross Ikon'], [member='Darth Raijin'], [member='Watcher Three'], or [member='Hijinks']... Come and get me...

I'm starting to grow a bit tired of chaos, it's not anyone or anybody in particular I mean don't get me wrong there are people that I dislike immensely. But this isn't about people, it's about how to repair my muse. So lately 2 out of 10 threads I've been in have actually been enjoyable and I...

I've been here 1yr 3mnths now and had lots of highs and a few lows along the way but always enjoyed my time here to be creative and enjoy writing new and varied characters with lots of fun and talented people. FYI I write as: Connor Harrison (obviously) / Asterion / Fixx Kearney / Krius Syonis...

Hello all! With a solid five months of active RP on this board under my belt, I feel like it's time to do a bit of a reality check. General thoughts on me as a writer and/or person are welcome and appreciated, but I'm also looking to receive feedback on my characters. Basically whatever comes...

I'd like some feedback on myself for a while. What can I improve besides my activity here?

So basically, I am new to the whole forum role playing side of things and used to having my mechanic body (meaning my actual minecraft movements and actions) were seen so not needed to be said, as well as my thoughts would be counted as metagamable information (where I come from). So, any...

I've roleplayed characters such as Daella Apparine and Darth Apparatus, and I currently write Sabena Shai. A good amount of you know me as Mason. For those that don't know me, a good way to describe Daella and Apparatus (two completed characters) is that they were jerks that betrayed people...

So recently I've been wanting to end Dredge and I just can't bring myself to do it ICly. Just through lack of muse for him, so I'm going to hop on the hand wave express and explain to you all how his story ended. Dredge's physical form died on Myrkr when [member="Preliat Mantis"] killed him...

Ello, So... here is where you comment on how terrible, disgusting, and awful this young role player called "Elvira." is, lol! My original three characters were Elvira Congelo, Carona Totsari, and Nellja. I've resurrected Nellja after coming here a second time. My current active characters are...

Joining the feedback request club :) Any comment, critique, advice, suggestion concerning my writing is welcome. The same goes for my characters, so please write your thoughts on Elizie Adasca and Darth Veles. I'd like to improve my writing as well as my characters, so I need your feedback!