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I've been working on this piece for a bit over a week at this point, and there are a few days when the creativity just isn't striking me. When it does, though, I'm trying to go all out and give it the best effort I can. It just feels like I'm doing a sloppy job, to be blunt. The flow is a bit...

I like RP because it's a way to work on my writing without having to come up with long and elaborate plots like you would with a story (also because it's a bit like a video game, but that's not the point). So what does everyone think? I'm tough, I can take it* - what are my writing strengths and...

Before, and I realize this is counter productive b/c some might just believe it even if it hasn't been stated, I am not using this to get posts. Anywayz, I've had a blast in this community. Bringing in some of my old characters, as well as writing [member="Malos Kas"] has been fun. I liked the...

I don't care if im been viewed as paranoid or what but I'm going to say something now. This is the one chance I'm giving people to be 110% honest, I know I'm not favored by many of you. I know a few of you hate my guts. End of the day I can't please you all. Nor do I want to please everyone. I...

Hi community. Myself and [member="Joon"] have just (or near about, I think my partner in crime is about to post once more into the thread to round it off) completed chapter six in the Rule of Two story. I wanted to get some feedback on what people have thought of the Rule of Two so far, what...

Alright, throw it at me. I would like to see what you guys think of me as a writer. Be it over any of the characters I have, Current, old, or non-existent, I would like to hear the pros and cons of what you think of my characters. As well as myself as a writer. So Let me play one song...

Its been a while since I posted this, but I thought why not? I'm looking more for critique of my actual writing rather than my character. Since returning from my most recent hiatus, Rhuza/Helios has only lived in private threads as I believe I'm getting ready to put him to sleep and gear up an...

Since I feel [member="Dune Rhur"] had a point that most folks either don’t like to critique others because they don’t want to offend them, or don’t know about them enough, here’s the alternative. Tell us what you feel your own strengths and weaknesses are. Tell us where you think you can...

I've been making my own signature for quite some time now for most of my characters. I'm mostly self taught, using only photoshop, google, and half a class of how to use PS to actually do what I do. I've also had some help from a few people more knowledgeable than me who have taught me a thing...

Hello fellow writers and roleplayers! I am still getting to know everyone, and as I am still new around these parts I don't have a lot of content to get feedback on. I would like for those that do read this post to check out some of the species/characters, etc, that I have created so I can get...

So I've been writing for a long time, both in Role-Plays and in other areas, and in the case of Role-Playing it's really easy to determine the subsets that particular writer's tend to fall in to. There are the really serious literate writers, that dedicate everything they have to each post to...

I've been here, on Chaos, for a little over a year and a half now. I'd like to think my competence as a writer has increased since I've joined way back when in 2014, and this isn't the first writer feedback thread I've put up. I think I've put up one before, maybe two tops, so let's make this...

I've been a member of the SW circuit since 2009 now across a dozen websites. But I've recently RP'ed with quite a few new writers to the game too. So it's time for another edition of: Give Jay Feedback. Part 2. New writers edition. And for those of you who have nothing to critique, might I...

1000 days today I have been on SWRP. And I want to know how good I've become. Well, at least, how much I've improved... Because I know that I'm a lousy writer. I know that I leave threads hanging, unintentionally or not. I know that I am terrible at writing more than a few lines. And I know...

NAME: Henry Miriam Chinko FACTION: No definite loyalties. RANK: Semi-famous Author SPECIES: Very-near-human (His great-grandmother was Zeltron, some say) AGE: 41 SEX: Male HEIGHT: 6'0" (roughly 184cm) WEIGHT: 170 lbs (77kg) EYES: Gray-Brown HAIR: Brown SKIN: White FORCE SENSITIVE: No...

Alright so, i've seen a lot of pretty cool characters on this site so far and can i saw 'wow'. You guys are really creative when it comes to character creation. Personal favorites are [member="Fabula Caromed"] - [member="Malik"] - [member="Aria Fel"]l - And [member="Darth Vornskr"] . Sorry if...

So, I try to do these every so often so I get an idea of where our members come from. I'll list out the biggest individual countries and then broad geographic regions for the rest of the world. If you wish to post with additional details such as state, county etc feel free though it's not...

I took creative writing and advanced writing in high school. Always been a writer since I was a kid. I have bursts of activity due to deployment issues and what not. But overall I've been with you folks a long time. You've seen the following characters. RC 212 Vassara Raxis Jack Raxis Althea...

Alright - I won't lie, I was trying to avoid this - but seeing the influx of critiques and feedback requests, well I'm throwing myself out there. I feel I can do more. I just want honest feedback on what I can do to be better than I was or currently am. Nothing special - you all know the...

Yayyyyyy! Here we go... Hi there. I made one of these a while back, specifically for Sera as a character. I got some good feedback back then and decided to make one for myself as a writer while leaving it open for more feedback on the character. My two other characters are relatively unknown...