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I was originally planning to do this ages ago at 500 and forgot, then 600 came and I forgot again, 700 seemed like a weird number to me so 800 it is!
I've had an interesting time finding Kaila's voice and admittedly I feel like there's a lot I could or should be doing better, especially combat. Honestly it's a little terrifying to write one of these actually, but it's long overdue and I'd be missing out on the chance to improve otherwise!
So here I am looking for feedback. For the character, for how I write her, how I write in general, whatever you think's worth mentioning really! Especially if you've been writing with me somewhat consistently, you may have additional insight, though all constructive feedback is welcome!
Love yall <3
edit: I was advised to link threads I'm proud of
I've had an interesting time finding Kaila's voice and admittedly I feel like there's a lot I could or should be doing better, especially combat. Honestly it's a little terrifying to write one of these actually, but it's long overdue and I'd be missing out on the chance to improve otherwise!
So here I am looking for feedback. For the character, for how I write her, how I write in general, whatever you think's worth mentioning really! Especially if you've been writing with me somewhat consistently, you may have additional insight, though all constructive feedback is welcome!
Love yall <3
edit: I was advised to link threads I'm proud of
- Woostri Invasion - was really fun to write teamwork and work with the opp
- Zinder - maybe proud isn't the word but i enjoyed writing that side of kaila lol
- Susevfi - kaila's final transformation into sithdom because of quinn's death. honestly everything from that post onward so emotional
- Serpent of Echnos - that last post where she stands on her own against the odds and the first post, i was proud of those
- Duel with Kasir - one of few instances where i got to write kaila's tactical approach to niman with kasir's help <3
- War in the rim - kaila choosing a darth name for herself and letting her fears channel violence was the first time i ever felt proud while writing her lol and i couldn't have asked for a better apprentice to darth transformation, thanks in large to Srina
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