Commenor Subs - Pre Factory

[WolfMortum]

​

​

​

Just putting down somewhere we can contribute to our home-world, from House Arenais.​

​

Everyone's free to use this space!​

​

APPROVED​

Submission has been reviewed and approved by site Judges.​

​

​

UNDER REVIEW​

Submission is under Review and awaiting Approval.​

READY TO SUBMIT​

Submission Draft is complete, not yet posted to Factory/Codex boards.​

 

[WolfMortum]

Resolute Station:
Commenor Intelligence Agency.

~~~~~~~

OUT OF CHARACTER INFORMATION

• Intent: Due to Commenor's recent liberation from the Sith Empire, House Arenais, the Royal Family of the former Systems Alliance Capital has endeavored to strengthen the world's research and military strength. This Submission is to give depth to the Intelligence and Sensory Array for which Commenor can keep watch over all in-bound and out-bound movement to and from the sector.
• ​Image Credit: Click here (Pinterest link, could not find source).
• Canon: Not Applicable.
• Links: Commenor, Ruchuk Sector, Chasin City, CSA Faction Assets.

SETTING INFORMATION

• Military Base Name: Resolute Station.
• Classification: Communications, Intelligence and Sensory Array.
• Location: Commenor.
• Affiliation: Commenor (Faction), House Arenais, Commenor Intelligence Agency.
• Population: Research and development Personnel, Communications Officers and "Commenor Intelligence Agency" Branch.
• Accessibility:

Secured on all sides by a Permacrete Barricade/Wall to keep out ground forces and unwanted personnel, security access points can be found north, east, south and west of the central facility for military and government approved personnel to come and go. The Station is a restricted area to all non-military personnel and trespassers will be arrested on sight, those who resist will be dealt with extreme prejudice.

Resolute Station is accessible by the air, to a number of external landing pads and two main hangar's for all approved transports and vessels. Once again, any vessels flying over military air-space under non-military transponder codes will receive a warning, and seen to be non-compliant, will be shot down.

As far as surrounding terrain is concerned, Resolute Station is situated in-land, north-east of Chasin City (The Capital). There are no mapped settlements within five miles in every direction of the facility and has been established with the intention of keeping it's location and purpose confidential.

• Description:

​To those not familiar with the installation, the towering facility surrounded by 40 foot permacrete wall, ought to give an obvious impression of importance and no subtle account for it's government presence, sentry towers lining the top of the perimeter to ensure proper awareness of the exterior grounds. Standing out from it's green-land terrain, the gray stone and reflection of sunlight coming from the transparisteel windows, steel panels and general construction, will certainly be eye catching.

With the coming and going of Military Vessels, both Air and Ground based convoys, there's a clear sense of caution on approach, and most civilian personnel will have the intelligence to get clear of the area before they're questioned. For those that want to risk it however, Chasin City Security's just a call away and until they arrive, the facility has it's own incarceration center for temporary prisoners.

POINTS OF INTEREST

• Research and Development Center.

​Requiring certified clearance to access this level of the Resolute Station, R&D is as it sounds, a place of research and the construction of potentially beneficial and new technologies. The works here range from Weapons Development and testing, to biological research and contained sciences.

• Transit Control & Monitoring Station.

The Monitoring Station for all in-bound and out-bound traffic coming to and from Commenor. This station is tapped into the Governments numerous spaceports in all major Cities, in order to identify any suspicious activity and possible threats to Commenor's security.

• Orbital Sensory Array.

Long range scanning of Commenor's surrounding Orbit and sector are the focus of this level within the Resolute Station, their objective is to anticipate any potentially hostile forces before they reach striking distance of the Trade World, and to alert the Government and Military, in order to give a greater chance for preparations in it's defense.

• Military Barracks and Personnel Quarters (Secondary Facility).

​Resident housing for all Military and Science Personnel is offered in the second, smaller facility. For many, this consists of permanent living while others may find temporary residence during authorized visits and government inspection.

• Primary Landing Zone.

​Within the perimeter grounds are a series of Landing Pads for all necessary transit too and from the station. Engineering and Maintenance Crews work on sight for all repair needs and consistent care of craft supplying the Facility with resources in both personnel and supplies.

• Emergency Bunker (Underground Facility).

​Modeled after the Underground bunker used by the Royal Palace within Chasin City, only not nearly as extravagant nor as large, this emergency facility has been included with the memory of Munto City in mind. In order to protect their works as well as their lives, Resolute Station's security and defense can be operated and overseen from this secondary facility if war ever reaches Commenor, specifically their classified location.

SECURITY: High.

You must provide your security assets in list format and must provide your base a Security Rating (choose from: None, Low, Medium, High, Maximum). What defenses does this Military Base have, including internal and perimeter defenses? Please link relevant tech/equipment to the SW wiki article or Factory-approved submission.]

• Deflector Shield Generators.
• Sorenn-Syrush Industries Guardian EX Mark I.
• Icarus-Class Anti-aircraft platform.
• Cabur-class Sentry Droid.
• The Mirdirmorut Defence Package.
• Security Guards.
• 191st Clone-Trooper Infantry.
• Holo/Security Camera's.
• Security Alert System.
• Emergency Response Team.

HISTORICAL INFORMATION

Following the recently devastating occupation campaign and subsequent battles fought over Commenor, the Government and ruling Monarchy has seen plenty justification to look into further security around all traffic coming to and leaving from the trade world. During the Siege of Commenor, the Naval Fleet of the Sith Empire descended upon them with far too little warning, and with this new security in place, The Royal Family, House Arenais has financially backed the project in the hopes of not being caught off guard like that ever again.

Fortunately, Commenor still has many political relationships in tact during its time as the Systems Alliance, where numerous worlds fell under Commenor's banner. It's through these connections that House Arenais has been able to employ the best of minds to help facilitate and provide further research into future projects and endeavors meant for the betterment of the people.

Overseen in it's construction by the King and Queen, Veiere Arenais & Lady Kay Arenais, records of the facilities whereabouts and general existence have been kept classified in order to help maintain security. Resolute Station is the first of Commenor's new security intelligence initiative, named after the fallen CSA Resolute, lost during the battle for Commenor's liberation.

 

[WolfMortum]

Basic Tech Template

OUT OF CHARACTER INFORMATION

• Intent: To create and give depth to a construction line of Satellites positioned about the Commenor System, in order to detect suspicious activity (Hostile fleets) and alert the world's military ahead of the possible threat, giving a larger window for battle preparation and the evacuation of non-military personnel from likely high priority targets such as the Capital, Chasin City.
• Image Source: Click here.
• Canon Link:

​- Commenor: The Faction.
- Commenor: Wookieepedia.
- Commenor Intelligence Agency.
- House Arenais: Commenor Royal Family.

• Primary Source: Not Applicable.

PRODUCTION INFORMATION

• Manufacturer: Commenor Intelligence Agency, House Arenais.
• Affiliation: Commenor.
• Model: CIA Echoe Series Satellite.
• Modularity: No.
• 
  Production: Minor.
  
• Material: Durasteel, Technical components.

SPECIAL FEATURES

• Long Range Sensors/Frequency Scanners.
• Remote Controlled Reconnaissance Feed.
• Communications Relay.

Strengths:

• (Provide, in list format, a minimum of 1 strength of this submission.)

Weaknesses:

• (Provide, in list format, a minimum of 1 weaknesses of this submission.)

DESCRIPTION
(Describe some of the histories behind the submission. Give us some idea of how it might perform its function, what it excels against and what some limitations of it are. This is where you talk about your idea, flesh it out over at least a good-sized paragraph, and address some of the ways it might be used or abused. For especially powerful or ambitious submissions, a very thorough description is recommended.)
Commenor system

 

[WolfMortum]

Resolute Graveyard - Twin Canyons.

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

OUT OF CHARACTER INFORMATION

• Intent: To give reference and location details to the fallen CSA Resolute, the Rebel Flagship shot down in the battle over Commenor during which the world was liberated from the Sith Empire.
• ​Image Credit: Click here & here.
• Canon: N/A.
• Links:

- CSA Resolute.
- Chasin City, Commenor.
- Commenor Survives: Rebel Rising.
- Stage One - Freedom for the Common Man: Battle over Commenor.

SETTING INFORMATION

• Landmark Name: Resolute Graveyard - Twin Canyons.
• Classification: Desert, War Torn.
• Location: Commenor.
• Affiliation: Commenor (Faction).
• Size: Massive (1800m long, 1000m wide).
• Population: No Inhabitants.
• Demographics: N/A.
• Accessibility:

The wreckage of the CSA Resolute crashed hard into the Twin Canyons to the north of Chasin City. The Desert barren land is vast and open, thus reaching the broken and beaten hull of the former vessel is a simple matter of walking across fairly flat land. Inside however, the wreckage has been deemed unstable and all public access has been denied by the Government of Commenor for the safety of it's citizens. This however does not stop those fearless salvagers from taking risks into their own hands.

• Description:

​The fallen Star Destroyer that once led and represented the resistance for Commenor's freedom, now has become a wreckage buried on all sides by the sands of the Twin Canyons, a vast desert landscape surrounded by mountainous ridges that circle the desert depression within the barren terrain.

The once glorious vessel is now but a broken down shell of what it used to be, however it can still offer salvagers a chance for profit as the materials consist of Reinforced Quadanium Steel, Titanium and durasteel. What view ports that haven't been blown out, may still harbor fair quality transparisteel for recycling.

The exterior of the vessel was heavily armed and the armaments still look rather fierce. Fortunately for the locals, what wasn't destroyed in the initial battle and subsequent crash, was later salvaged and removed from the wreckage by Government employed personnel, to ensure that any potentially damning information, as well as volatile technology, could not be used against Commenor in the future.

POINTS OF INTEREST

• Exterior Debris Field

Surrounding the Resolute's broken form, are pieces that were torn off in it's descent, ranging from the outer hull to the shield generators themselves. Many Star-fighters litter the area too, having either been pulled out from the vessels hangars, or otherwise being torn apart during the bid to defend and escort any survivors to safety.

• Military Grade Barracks.

The temporary housing of all military personnel that once roamed the stars aboard the Resolute, now a dark and lifeless level where the mess hall and training rooms hold only the memories of the lost. Many a man and woman served valiantly here, working to defend and fight for Commenor's freedom. It's unknown how many survivors made it back to Commenor alive.

• Escape Pods.

The Escape Pods of the CSA Resolute litter the surrounding sands, having been ejected prior to the King's evacuation alongside Admiral Vikras Ansion aboard The Commenori Pheonix. Many of these Pods were intercepted by Sith Fighters and reduced to scrap, some still showing signs of the poor souls plight within, while others have been emptied and already picked apart by scavengers.

• Research and Development decks.

Science, Engineering, Medical; the R&D Level was once a glowing presence of pristine technology; now void of even simple lighting. Those that can make their way as high as these levels, may come across an odd find or two, however all classified technologies and resources have already been recovered. While all necessities were taken by the recovery crews following the fight for Commenor, there are surely a couple goodies still laying about for the skilled salvager.

• Star-fighter Bays and Primary Hangars.

A mess with plenty of smaller wreckage's of it's own kind, the Hangars once housed the numerous fighters and ground walker assault vehicles meant for deployment in heavy combat. However, when the Resolute went down and the gravity and atmospheric systems went down, those fighters still docked, along with any vehicles, were uplifted and thrown about the place before the Goliath struck solid earth. What remains is mostly still usable, though how to remove them is now someone else's problem.

• Command Center & Bridge.

Reaching the head of the Destroyer is a feat of it's own given that all systems have been devoid of power since the crash. Though still quite the sight to behold, the bridge itself has had it's viewing platform blown out, leaving the open wind blowing in where there was once transparisteel screen's to keep you from falling to your death as would very likely be the case now for the fool-hardy. While any tech-savy person might be able to make use of the many devastated consoles and work stations, there's simply no saving this level with the power cells having been recovered, those that hadn't already blown a fuse and set half the bridge crew on fire...

• 
  Personnel Quarters.
  

From Soldier Quarters to Passenger and Crew Quarters, these are the living area's for all who spent more than a day's venture aboard the Resolute. The Ship was capable of long-term flight, needing refueling and restocking only once every five years, thus the personnel quarters are rather extensive and in the evacuation, many personal belongings were left behind in the rush to save themselves. What you might find here could range from anything like letters to family, to things like personal/signature weapons, armor and the like. Given that these Quarters were many, and far less important than government and military resources, this level wasn't given much priority during the vessels recovery operation.

HISTORICAL INFORMATION

The CSA Resolute was a larger variant of the Victory II Class Star Destroyer, manufactured by Commenor itself under commission of it's King, Veiere Arenais. Thanks to a long and beneficial business relationship with the Galactic Empire, Commenor was given extensive resources for both it's ground forces as well as it's Navy. During the days of the Commenor Systems Alliance, where Gyndine nearby had been under Commenori Governance, many of their fleet had been constructed in co-operation of the two world's for the safety of the CSA Territories. The CSA Resolute is one such testament to Imperial Firepower and Naval Superiority, despite their ideals being extremely different from what Commenor sought to represent.

The Vessel was to act as one of the signature war ships of the Commenori fleet, before the Sith Empire's invasion. Instead, it became the symbol of House Arenais defiance and refusal to give Commenor over to the Dark Lord of the Sith, in the end being shot down by the Saturn under the command of Vanessa Vantai.

​