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Company Modifications [V2]

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[member="Nyos Val"]

You are currently at Tier 2.

The requirements for Tier 3 are as follows.

Tier II to Tier III
  • Sign a contract with two more factions or organizations. ( two threads)
  • Make an additional three mass-production products. (3 products)
  • Complete three miscellaneous threads. (3 misc threads)
 
Nyos Val said:
[member="Darth Janus"]

Company: InVal Cybernetics
Modifications: Update Product Listing. Change HQ.
Rationale: Company Moved and Updating Information.

New HQ: Cyto Val

Dev threads:
-http://starwarsrp.net/topic/30495-building-a-stronger-foundation-pm-for-invite/
-http://starwarsrp.net/topic/29818-inval-on-a-new-level-pm-for-invite-business-reps/
-http://starwarsrp.net/topic/33019-can-you-dig-it-inval-cybernetics/

Products:
-http://starwarsrp.net/topic/18665-combat-cyber-limbs-ccl-class-m/
-http://starwarsrp.net/topic/31037-m1-cyber-heart-inval/
-http://starwarsrp.net/topic/39533-ax-1a-the-butcher/

Corporation Name: InVal-uable Cybernetics

Headquarters: Cyto Val

Locations: R&D Facility

Operations: Repairing and Manufacturing of Cybernetic Replacement Limbs and Organs

Rationale: Nyos Val, created the company from the ground up, after learning on his own, he developed a set of Cybernetics and wanted to make them available to more people in need.

Tier: Tier 2, Single Warehouse and Distributions Center

Description: InVal-uable Cybernetics was built from the ground up and is the heart of Nyos Val’s life. He himself being a Cyborg made him want to better the world of cybernetics. He developed a set of cybernetic replacements to aid those in combat. The target audience is refugees of hostile systems, who were abused, tortured, maimed and beaten, but also soldiers, officers, and militiamen who’ve lost limbs and organs; or those who were damaged beyond medicinal repair. The goal behind InVal-uable Cybernetics was built upon the idea of being a way for those in need to continue living a normal, successful life with the replacements giving them that chance. Soldiers who bravely fought in battle can return to active duty, or back to civilian life if they so choose without being disabled. Nyos personally works on the floor with his employees and will go on missions to personally aid his teams. He had one ship now in the company name, Given Name: Pheobus. Nyos Val is a 2nd Lt in the Protectorate Army and like Nyos, the company is loyal to the Omega Protectorate. Any and all possible contracts are put through background checks and submitted to Nyos himself. With his extensive combat experience, he has knowledge and connections to determine the true goals of the possible contract holders. No contracts will be made with anyone deemed Hostile by the Protectorate.

Dev threads:
-http://starwarsrp.net/topic/30495-building-a-stronger-foundation-pm-for-invite/
-http://starwarsrp.net/topic/29818-inval-on-a-new-level-pm-for-invite-business-reps/
-http://starwarsrp.net/topic/33019-can-you-dig-it-inval-cybernetics/

Products:
-http://starwarsrp.ne...bs-ccl-class-m/
-http://starwarsrp.net/topic/18665-combat-cyber-limbs-ccl-class-m/
-http://starwarsrp.net/topic/31037-m1-cyber-heart-inval/
-http://starwarsrp.net/topic/39533-ax-1a-the-butcher/
This is what I want now. Please and thank you.
 

Corey's OOC

And where were the spiders
Company: Bright Star E.G.

Modifications Made:
  • Tier Three to Tier Four
  • Move headquarters from Bright Star One to Rio Vivo on Lianna.
  • Open up gambling centers/gaming machines in Arceneau Trade Stations
  • Open a Zoo on Makeb
  • Launch 2 zoo-based cruise liners
  • Open up a store front on the Tion Trade Nexus
  • Add 'Exploration' to the Operations
Rationale:
  • Through deals made with Arceneau Trade Company Bright Star is the casino of choice on the trade stations Thread.
  • Working with the Beast Hunters Guild, Bright Star has created a resort on Makeb, using their own resources as well as the animal expertise of the other company. This also created a few other liners to be used. Threads: One/Initial Deal, and Two/Construction
  • Addition of 'Exploration' through a contract with Silk
  • Additional work includes opening storefronts for a favor for AEL
  • Making a contract with Cestus/Hegemonic for droids
  • Working with MandalTech to expand their VR business
  • Contracting with Whyren's for the casinos
New Submission
Corporation Name: Bright Star Entertainment Group

Headquarters: Rio Vivo District, Lianna

Locations: Aboard several Queen of the Spacelane Luxury Cruisers purchased by Marek Starchaser, Casino/Office combination buildings on Tatooine and Hypori as well as Lianna and at all Arceneau Trade Stations

Operations: Casino and entertainment facilities, including gambling, fine dining, escort services, virtual gaming, combat simulations, as well as entertainment television and news and courier services, Exploration for mining and space lanes

Rationale: During his time working as the CEO of Haor Chall Engineering, and the Foreman of the Techno Union for the Confederacy, Marek Starchaser procured a decent personal fortune. Along with minor deals made with his involvement in the Tion Hegemony, he was able to take over a small gambling firm from within the Confederacy. Seeing the state of the galaxy, and feeling the need for a little bit of vice and good natured frivolity, Marek Starchaser decided to find a way to allow the galaxy at large to wind down and enjoy themselves. Expanding the operations slowly but surely, Bright Star Entertainment Group is looking forward to expanding among the South Systems in a peaceful and exciting manner.

Truthfully, with the war going on, Marek Starchaser, not being a soldier, nor an engineer was looking for another way to expand himself into the galaxy. Finding little hideaways was always a skill of his when he was growing up, raised by Zeison Sha and mercenary parents, so going through the galaxy, and finding a niche market, somewhere that was relatively untouched by major players, and would not put him in competition with the companies who were actually run by engineers who knew a thing or two about droids and starships was his absolute goal. His hope was that he would be able to find a way to entertain and relax the galaxy, and if it came to it, run a few operations on the side, more for the thrill and less for the pay.

The primary focus would be, of course, to provide a distraction during the war time in the South Systems, and remind the galaxy at large just what was being fought for, what life was all about. Good times.

Tier: Four

Description: Created from Marek Starchaser’s desire for a fun and profitable side project in comparison to his semi-failed mining company, and from the profits of Haor Chall Engineering, Marek moved to rescue a small entertainment company based within the Confederacy of Independent Systems. Moving the gambling segment of this company to several of Haor Chall Engineering Queen of the Space Lanes-class luxury liners, and headquartering it on the Black Star Ackbar cruiser outside of Lianna, the company also began to expand. This expansion opened up to a wide array of offerings, from gambling, to escort services, to virtual gaming, providing an independent entertainment outfit for a variety of young and up-coming artists and performers. Finally, the company does provide luxury and discreet courier services for a variety of clients.

Having taken Bright Star from its small roots of the gambling circuit, Marek sought to expand its scope in a way that could assist his goals, as well as the beings to whom he claims allegiance. As a survivor, Marek worked to expand the operations of this company using his connections and in order to secure its future through several avenues for capital. Credits are being put aside to purchase a larger home base for Bright Star within the Tion Cluster.

Always looking for a variety of storefronts, Bright Star is more than happy to find peaceful bazaars, trading stations, and planets where beings are looking to blow off steam, and spend a bit of money. Having a fleet of the Beright Star, a half dozen Queen of the Space Lane liners, and two major casino/office locations, one on Tatooine and a more formal set up on Lianna, the company is working to expand beyond borders of the warring states, and along trade lines, granting safe and fun havens for all beings of the galaxy.

Additionally, each set up that is run by Bright Star will have an office for Pulsar, which is merely a cover for the more seedy parts of the organization. Customers come to Pulsar expecting a pawn and trade shop, however, that is a front for the people who are looking to connect out of the public eye with couriers, mercenaries and escorts, all of this is behind closed doors and word of this avenue is kept only world of mouth and someone must have sent the client to Pulsar.

The goal of Bright Star is to expand off of planets and out of liners into dedicated stations, working with select businesses and corporations all around the galaxy to provide the best entertainment experience possible.
 
[member="Marek Starchaser"]

Please submit your request for tier advancement by placing your links in the appropriate section.

Tier III to Tier IV
  • Sign a contract with three more player-run organizations, one of which must be a major faction OR a Tier V+ company.

  • Make an additional three mass-produced products..

  • Complete four miscellaneous threads.

  • Successfully complete a project of sizable proportions.
 
Company: Heofon Industries
Modification Made: Updating from Tier 1 to Tier 2
Rationale: Barkt has been working on expanding his business. Figured it was about time to bring it up a tier.

Pertient Development Threads:

Sign a contract with at least one faction or organization.

Complete two miscellaneous threads.

Make at least three minor-production products.
New Submission:
Corporation Name: Heofon Industries
Headquarters: Bothuwai
Locations: None yet
Operations: Shipbuilding
Rationale: Barkt founded Heofon Industries using the money left to him by his father, and has been using the engineers from Prototype lab Q after the Spynet was disbanded as well as the Bothuwai shipyards (or a section he bought) to build some starfighters. The starship plans of his father, both from the past and those never implemented, are being built.

After some time and effort, Heofon Industries has grown to include the whole of Bothuwai's shipyards, and Barkt, a capable designer in his own right, has begun to expand his work into freighters, although the CEO still loves producing and designing starfighters. And while they could begin building larger ships, at least for the moment, they have no need or reason to.
Tier: 2
 
[member="Barkt Melan"]

[background=#232323]Please submit your request for tier advancement by placing your links in the appropriate section.[/background]

Tier I to Tier II
  • Sign a contract with at least one faction or organization.
  • Make at least three minor-production products.
  • Complete two miscellaneous threads.
 
[member="Barkt Melan"]

Looking over the threads you posted, two of them were dropped and incomplete while "The Fall" only has two posts from you with very little IC push about the company and how this resolved.

Would you happen to have another completed miscellaneous thread for Heofon with at least 10 posts total?
 

Malachi Blake

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Company: Whyrens
Modification Made: Request for Tier III
Rationale: Expanding company and promotion in tier III

Pertient Development Threads:


Tier II to Tier III

Sign a contract with two more factions or organizations.
  1. Southern Systems Business Bazaar Expo [ open to all ] - Whyren's whiskey and liquors was used for the first SSB Expo and Auctions.
  2. Semi Annual Southern Systems Business Bazaar Expo! [ Open to all ] - Whyren's whiskey and liquors was used for the second SSB Expo and Auctions.
  3. Take me home - Contract with BrightStar Entertainment to provide them liquor in all of their casinos.
  4. Lemmie See the Whiskey - Contract with Boloball League
Make an additional three mass-production products.
  1. Whyren's Homemade Mead Kit
  2. Whyren's Homemade Ale Kit
  3. Whyren's Pot Stills
  4. Spark-Bee Hive
Complete three miscellaneous threads.

  1. Take me home -Contract with BrightStar Entertainment to provide them liquor in all of their casinos.
  2. Lemmie See the Whiskey - Contract with Boloball League.
  3. Working 9 to 5. [pm for invite] - Whyren's liquors is used for the Tionese Hegemony Gala


New Submission:

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Corporation Name: Whyren's Distillery
Headquarters: Corellia
Locations:
Production: Corellia, Talus and Tralus.
Distribution: Anywhere Arceneau Trade Company distributes, BrightStar Entertainment, Boloball League.
Operations:
  • Expansive barley farmlands throughout the Corellian System
  • This is a distillery, producing and manufacturing and various varieties of Corellian whiskey, to include Whyren's Corellian whiskey, Aurodium Reserve, and Whyren's Reserve.
  • Has expanding into Corellian ales, Meads, and wines.
Rationale: Family owned business appropriated through the preservation of traditional Corellian whiskey recipes.
Tier: III

Description:
Coming from a Corellian family with deep roots in the Whiskey business for generations, the Gulag virus had at one time, been the seemingly cause of the loss of the traditional Whyren's whiskey recipes. Through many of the Whyren and Blake family had perished in the wake of the virus, that well known stubborn nature managed to personificate itself in sheer stubbornness and willpower to live on, providing a means for Chloe Blake's ancestors to preserve the recipes that many a Corellian and off worlders love.

It is tradition and iconic symbols like Whyren's that are a testimony to Corellian nature, that classic 'Never tell me the odds' mentality. With a few credits and enough golden fields of barley from the family farms, the Blake family preservered, bringing back to the galaxy a little bit of Corellian hospitality in each and every bottle. From each seed that is sown, to every grain harvest, to careful and traditional distillery methods and finally, aged in Corellian oak, Whyren's provides an unmatchable taste and complexity no other whiskey can match.

By the turn of 840 ABY, it was the largest producer in the Corellian Sector, producing 1,000,000,000 gallons annually. Corellian whiskey is a prime ingredient in traditional ryshcate, along with Vweilu nuts. The whiskey has a woody, spicy flavor that was similar to the scent of Caamasi.

Corellian whiskey was primarily popular among Corellians themselves. Despite its popularity with them, most Corellians not actually living on Corellia itself tended to reserve the drink for special occasions, due to its rarity and prohibitive expense elsewhere in the galaxy.

One particularly favored brand produced by the Blake family is Whyren's Reserve (also spelled Whyrren's Reserve). It is a rare, expensive Corellian whiskey, second to none. It had an amber color and a crisp, woody taste. It was a favorite of the black market trade. Wedge Antilles was fond of the drink. And it was once estimated that a case of extremely rare Whyren's Reserve batch number NN182 was equivalent to, if not more valuable than, the cost of the Millennium Falcon.

The Blake family currently owns and operates all production and manufacturing of traditional Corellian whiskies, with proprietary rights to Whyren's reserve. While there are many offworld distilleries that try to imitate Whyren's, none can come close to the original. Today, Whyren's is the Corellian Sector's largest single-distillery whiskey.

So much has come about in expansion with the Southern Systems Business Bazaar and new contract opportunities, that Whyren's is becoming once more the premier go to distillery and brewery of the growing Galactic Core and beyond.

Products
  • Farmlands across Corellia, Talus and Tralus
  • Whyren's 12 Year Old Special
  • Whyren's Aurodium Reserve (the only expression of Whyren's that uses virgin Apokan Silveroak).
  • Whyren's Reserve (Whyren's oldest and rarest whiskey components).
  • Whyren's Corellian Ales - Microbrewery
  • Whyren's Corellian Meads -- Sparkbee and local Corellian clover bee
  • Whyren's Corellian Wines
  • Ale and Mead Homebrew Kits.
 
Company: Praesitlyn Trade Company
Modification Made:
  • Name
  • Operations
  • Minor Descriptor Edits
Rationale:

During my recent LOAs (due to vacation, convention and more recently in the past few days, being sick) I've looked at the companies and found it over-saturated with multiple 'war' based companies all in the business of producing arms, armor, vehicles, etc etc, with very few core medical companies.

Pertient Development Threads:

N/a

New Submission:

Corporation Name: Praesitlyn Pharmaceuticals


Headquarters:
  • Praesitlyn

Locations:
  • Queyta

Operations:
  • Development of Medical Technologies i.e. (Medical Droids, Pharmaceuticals, etc etc)

Rationale:

Praesitlyn Trade Company was founded and is owned by Maya Vixen, on her homeworld which the company is named after. Maya Vixen spent most of her youth and teenage years moving from colony to colony in the Outer Rim Territories, working in various mining operations. On her last colonial venture, after the discovery of a lucrative Alum Ore vein, Maya sold her stake in the Colony for a heft sum; the resulting payment provides the start up capital for the Praesitlyn Trade Company.

Tier: 1

Description:


Praesitlyn Pharmaceuticals is a start up company that was founded by Maya Vixen, whom also owns the company. Due to it currently being a small operation, it only employs a limited number of employees, including doctors, nurses and scientist. Currently it produces limited numbers of cheap and affordable Pharmaceuticals which it distributes to the populace of Praesitlyn and makes available to those in need on neighboring worlds.

While Maya herself may find it difficult to connect with people and keep herself distant, the company itself maintains that in order for them to do their best, they must provide the best for their employees. Thus Praesitlyn Pharmaceuticals is focused on providing the best working environment for their employees in order to see matching productivity and loyalty among their staff.
 
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