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Company Modifications [V2]

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[member="Særa Ayña Savan"]

Your requirement for Mass produced Items is good. However, there are some discrepancies.


Contracts

  • Business as Usual (The Confederacy of Independent Systems - Major Faction (Old)) --- This only has three posts in it and is incomplete.
  • Coalesce** (The Red Ravens - Minor Faction) How is this a contract in RRDI's benefit? You are spending money on the Red Ravens, not the other way around.
I will need completed threads in regards to contracts. Do you have another two that will serve as contracts for RRDI?


Miscellaneous Threads

The following are not completed roleplay threads. The first only has five posts and the second only had three with very little roleplay. Please submit other completed miscellaneous threads.
 

Saera Willamina Savan

~+--- Skaidra ---+~ Beskarsmith, Alchemist
[member="Danger Arceneau"]
Business as Usual - I think it was archived before I got back to it. I can start another one with him to finish the last seven posts as a grandfathered thing and the other writer agreed to help me with this.

Coalesce - Protection/assistance/whatever else you'd like to call it. They're a gang/PMC. Lysle can vouch. This should remain valid.

SSB Auction - But I have to build three unique submissions for three individual writers, some of which already require development threads. I feel this should count because hard work is going into it and IC it is spreading the company's brand and reputation.
 
[member="Særa Ayña Savan"]

Business as usual will need to be completed for it to count as a completed contract. You may ask an RPJ or an admin to move it out of the archives for you to finish it.

The contract portion is for your company to grow, not contracting out for others. Coalesce would not count for that in that sense as a contract for RDDI. If anything, this would have counted as a contract for companies with the Red Ravens. If anything, this can count as a misc thread instead of a contract.

Auctions by themselves have not counted towards threads unless they themselves have had enough roleplay to equal a 10 post thread focusing on your company. The auctions did not serve in that capacity in roleplaying with only 3 posts, two of which were only one liners and not a complete thread. This is why roleplay was heavily recommended in every starting auction post. I'm sure you can find an auction where you did more roleplaying banter with other characters to complete a misc thread req. *hint Judah's auction*

If you have other threads that can fulfill these requirements, please link them.
 

Popo

I'm Sexy and I Know It
Company: Tenloss Corporation http://starwarsrp.net/topic/18645-tenloss-corporation-canon-company/
Modification Made: Adding a planetary location to Tenloss' listing
Rationale: A new trade station was placed on crystalsong and gave Tenloss the ability to sell, trade, and do business there.

Pertient Development Threads:
http://starwarsrp.net/topic/41225-let-me-play-you-the-crystalsong-of-my-people-corporate-expansion-of-crystalsong-and-location-dev-thread/ - Popo and Tenloss set up a trade station on Crystalsong allowing Tenloss to trade with the locals there and implementing the first step of corporate domination for Crystal song.

New Submission:
Locations: Bajic Sector, The Wheel, Nar Shaddaa, Raxus Prime, Nal Hutta, Kessel, Centares, Belderone, Keskin, Sleheyron, Aduba-3, Astal Sector, Ord Thoden, Lucrenn, Kendamar, Reaper's World, Wodenstam, Lesu, Sperin, Danadine, Crystalsong
 

Nyxie

【夢狐】
TEMPLATE:

Company: Ri'essi Union Manufacturing
Modification Made: Corporate Name, Additional History
Rationale: IC people keep bashing on the company. OOC people keep bashing on the company.

Pertinent Development Threads:
  • n/a

New Submission:
Corporation Name: Arcrystal-Mnaya Corporation

Headquarters: Nàrdanhect, Crystalsong

Locations:
Interstellar Offices in Skytower, Solovarna (location pending)
Manufacturing Complex in XQ3, Crystalsong Orbit
1 sq. km. Weapons Testing Laboratory in Exodus Prime, Sikune

Operations:
Research and Development
Manufacturing
Sub-Capital Shipwright

Rationale: In description.

Tier: II

Description:
Two young Mnenchei dynasts had a dream; their dream, to restore the Ri'essi Sector systems to their former glory, but also to bring the galaxy a place of mutual cooperation and creativity. Their dream was realized with the support of the former Monarchy corporation Ri'ess Regal Drive Industries, Lumina Group (a conglomerate of three corporations owned by the same shareholder) and minor outsource contributions by the Crystal Heart Workshop lab. It was thus that the Ri'essi Union was formed.
The Ri'essi Union Manufacturing Corporation, or RUM, was at the heart of the Ri'essi Union; an entity created for the sole purpose of promoting growth and creativity in other budding companies and designers. Its facilities were intentionally located on neutral or corporately-unaligned worlds with no prior disposition to any other faction or organization, still close to the heartland of its founding members. There, orders from within and without the Ri'essi Union are processed and developed for other entities in the hopes of bringing mutual prosperity to all it encounters.
Eventually, due to poor execution of the indictment and persecution of a criminal entity with many ties, and the political and reputable backwash it caused, the corporation RUM suspended all development and was sold off to the Crystalsong Commonwealth. Aless Mnaya, one of the founders and the leader of the Commonwealth's people, was given 51% of the corporation's stock shares, making her the majority shareholder and chairwoman. Under her careful and influential rule, the Ri'essi Union was remodeled from the ground up and Ri'essi Union Manufacturing became the new entity "Arcrystal-Mnaya Corporation."

Subsidiaries: None

Divisions/labels are as follows:
  • Arcrystal Arms
  • Arcrystal Astronautics
  • Arcrystal Manufacturing
  • Arcrystal Labs
 

Nyxie

【夢狐】
[member="Danger Arceneau"]
No. I felt it would be a waste of the Judges' time to disband it and submit another company though, so I thought to just slap new paint on this one's sub.
 
[member="Nyxie"]

Well, you have two options. You can link a thread where this can be mentioned in a current thread you have going on ( Like the one you have with Rave ongoing)

Or you can keep the current locations that you have in your current sub and just do the rename without the headquarter change.
 
Company: Iron Crown Productions
Modification Made: Ownership, restructuring, name change
Rationale: I bought it. Also, nobody buys ships. At least not whole ships.

Pertient Development Threads:

  • [Link] - [Rave buys ICP]
New Submission:
Corporation Name: Iron Crown Enterprises

Headquarters: Annaj (centered around Annaj shipyards)

Locations: Xal 3, Verkuyl, Ssi-Ruuvi Star Cluster (centered around Lwhekk shipyards), O'reen, Serpena, Riflor, 244Core, Dasid Anya, Rakata Infinite Empire (centered around Rakata Beta shipyards), Tion Trade Nexus

Operations: Shipbuilding, Unknown Regions trade facilitation, starship components, spacer equipment, personal weapons, bacta-related equipment, design production rights broker

Rationale: Rave obtained the parastatal ICP through a moderately corrupt privatization deal worked out with the High Council of the Fringe Confederation. Ownership is 30% Fringe Confederation, 5% Jared Ovmar, 5% Anders Sivas, and 60% Rave Merrill/AEI.

Tier: 4

Description: ICE started as a parastatal conglomerate, a state-owned holding and managing company which the Lords of the Fringe used to control their shipyards at Annaj, Rakata Beta, and Lwhekk, the largest and most experienced shipyards in Wild Space or the Unknown Regions. (In the case of Lwhekk, ICE's yards are as comprehensive and capable as any in the galaxy.) Since then, it has constructed virtually every Fringe military vessel, at all scales, and has a near-unity market share in the Unknown Regions starship business. It has dozens of trading partners, a network
unparalleled in the Unknown Regions.

In terms of galactic business, its focus is threefold. First, ICE is a primary gateway to the technologies and trade goods of the Unknown Regions, in both directions. Second, ICE prioritizes the starship components and accessories market, selling to individuals as well as shipbuilding corporations. This market includes after-market starship modifications, before-market components, space suits and associated gear. Third, ICE -- having acquired the blueprints and/or production rights for many, many starships over the course of its existence -- situates itself as a broker and merchant of blueprints and production rights. Actual starship sales are not a primary focus of ICE's galactic business model, though it is considered a strong second-tier manufacturer.

Subsidiaries: Ice owns the Iron Crown Armories brand name. ICE is a subsidiary of Akure Executive Interstellar (Tier 5), and owns, on paper, 1% of the parent company's 5% stake in the Tion Trade Nexus.

 

Nyxie

【夢狐】
[member="Danger Arceneau"]

TEMPLATE:

Company: Ri'essi Union Manufacturing
Modification Made: Corporate Name, Additional History
Rationale: New owner and new face of the company. Heading in new direction.

Pertinent Development Threads:
New Submission:

If said mention is enough:
Corporation Name: Arcrystal-Mnaya Corporation

Headquarters: New Nàrdanhect, Crystalsong

Locations:

Interstellar Offices in Skytower, Solovarna (location pending)
Manufacturing Complex in XQ3, Crystalsong Orbit
1 sq. km. Weapons Testing Laboratory in Exodus Prime, Sikune

Operations:
Research and Development
Manufacturing
Sub-Capital Shipwright

Rationale: In description.

Tier: II

Description:
Two young Mnenchei dynasts had a dream; their dream, to restore the Ri'essi Sector systems to their former glory, but also to bring the galaxy a place of mutual cooperation and creativity. Their dream was realized with the support of the former Monarchy corporation Ri'ess Regal Drive Industries, Lumina Group (a conglomerate of three corporations owned by the same shareholder) and minor outsource contributions by the Crystal Heart Workshop lab. It was thus that the Ri'essi Union was formed.
The Ri'essi Union Manufacturing Corporation, or RUM, was at the heart of the Ri'essi Union; an entity created for the sole purpose of promoting growth and creativity in other budding companies and designers. Its facilities were intentionally located on neutral or corporately-unaligned worlds with no prior disposition to any other faction or organization, still close to the heartland of its founding members. There, orders from within and without the Ri'essi Union are processed and developed for other entities in the hopes of bringing mutual prosperity to all it encounters.
Eventually, due to poor execution of the indictment and persecution of a criminal entity with many ties, and the political and reputable backwash it caused, the corporation RUM suspended all development and was sold off to the Crystalsong Commonwealth. Aless Mnaya, one of the founders and the leader of the Commonwealth's people, was given 51% of the corporation's stock shares, making her the majority shareholder and chairwoman. Under her careful and influential rule, the Ri'essi Union was remodeled from the ground up and Ri'essi Union Manufacturing became the new entity "Arcrystal-Mnaya Corporation."

Subsidiaries: None

Divisions/labels are as follows:
  • [Arcrystal Arms] -- Weapons and Armor
  • [Arcrystal Astronautics] -- Starships and Freight
  • [Arcrystal Manufacturing] -- Vehicles, Equipment and Droids
  • [Arcrystal Labs] -- Sciences and Research

If said mention is not enough:
Corporation Name: Arcrystal-Mnaya Corporation

Headquarters: Interstellar Headquarters in Skytower, Solovarna (location pending)

Locations:

Manufacturing Complex in XQ3, Crystalsong Orbit
1 sq. km. Weapons Testing Laboratory in Exodus Prime, Sikune

Operations:
Research and Development
Manufacturing
Sub-Capital Shipwright

Rationale: In description.

Tier: II

Description:
Two young Mnenchei dynasts had a dream; their dream, to restore the Ri'essi Sector systems to their former glory, but also to bring the galaxy a place of mutual cooperation and creativity. Their dream was realized with the support of the former Monarchy corporation Ri'ess Regal Drive Industries, Lumina Group (a conglomerate of three corporations owned by the same shareholder) and minor outsource contributions by the Crystal Heart Workshop lab. It was thus that the Ri'essi Union was formed.
The Ri'essi Union Manufacturing Corporation, or RUM, was at the heart of the Ri'essi Union; an entity created for the sole purpose of promoting growth and creativity in other budding companies and designers. Its facilities were intentionally located on neutral or corporately-unaligned worlds with no prior disposition to any other faction or organization, still close to the heartland of its founding members. There, orders from within and without the Ri'essi Union are processed and developed for other entities in the hopes of bringing mutual prosperity to all it encounters.
Eventually, due to poor execution of the indictment and persecution of a criminal entity with many ties, and the political and reputable backwash it caused, the corporation RUM suspended all development and was sold off to the Crystalsong Commonwealth. Aless Mnaya, one of the founders and the leader of the Commonwealth's people, was given 51% of the corporation's stock shares, making her the majority shareholder and chairwoman. Under her careful and influential rule, the Ri'essi Union was remodeled from the ground up and Ri'essi Union Manufacturing became the new entity "Arcrystal-Mnaya Corporation."

Subsidiaries: None

Divisions/labels are as follows:
  • [Arcrystal Arms] -- Weapons and Armor
  • [Arcrystal Astronautics] -- Starships and Freight
  • [Arcrystal Manufacturing] -- Vehicles, Equipment and Droids
  • [Arcrystal Labs] -- Sciences and Research
 

Popo

I'm Sexy and I Know It
Company: Tenloss Corporation
Modification Made: Adding Corellia to the list of planets.
Rationale: I forgot to do so after the thread petered out a while back. Just now remembered.

Pertient Development Threads:
Kinda snuck into this one on Corellia

New Submission:



Locations: Locations: Bajic Sector, The Wheel, Nar Shaddaa, Raxus Prime, Nal Hutta, Kessel, Centares, Belderone, Keskin, Sleheyron, Aduba-3, Astal Sector, Ord Thoden, Lucrenn, Kendamar, Reaper's World, Wodenstam, Lesu, Sperin, Danadine, Crystalsong, Corellia

[member="Jared Ovmar"]

Think you skipped me, bro lol
 
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