Zavii
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Death... it wasn't quite what she had expected. When the young woman blacked out, the great Song that was the Force had faded away and she found respite from her bodily pain in what was supposed to be perfect, endless oblivion. After an age that lasted but and instant, however, she began to perceived something at the edge of her apparently restored senses. A voice. It was a woman's voice, clipped and fearful. This had to be some kind of hallucination. She... who was she? There had been a name, but it wasn't there anymore. Not that it mattered, the name was gone, along with the one who'd held it. Now she was just dreaming into the end.
Before, though, she had read somewhere that in most species, brains near death would release a chemical that would cause hallucinations. That was the only way to explain the lack of a Song behind the voice. It was just imagination; A bioelectric glitch in the cells.
"I'm here with you, don't worry."
"Why would I worry? It's over now." She spoke, but her voice sounded far away, like a whisper at the other end of a corridor. Still no Song, still no feeling, but cold. Cold and wet, like lying in thin mud, and tightness. Tightness in her midriff, like a stomachache. There wasn't supposed to be discomfort, there wasn't supposed to be pain once she'd died. There wasn't any body left to hurt, was there? She thought back to when she'd first learnt of pain. A little girl had found a bug; a curious creature with a beautiful bright body and wings that worked so fast they couldn't be seen. A finger had gotten too close to the bug and it stung, leaving a bump and sharp stinging. Her parents cooed and hugged and kissed and after a little bandage and a sweet treat the pain had been forgotten. "We're here now, Sophii, don't worry."
Then, all at once, everything came back. Eyelids flew open and lungs sucked air like a hole in a ship's hull. The gasp was loud, and strong enough to make her body lurch as she regained consciousness. The movement tore her wound as muscles pulled themselves apart just enough to elicit a sharp cry. She tried to curl up but moaned loudly since it only hurt worse. There was someone there, a face she knew but it was hard to think. She gripped the woman's hands and sobbed "Mum? I'm sorry, mum, I didn't mean it! I couldn't stop it! I... I couldn't..."
Before, though, she had read somewhere that in most species, brains near death would release a chemical that would cause hallucinations. That was the only way to explain the lack of a Song behind the voice. It was just imagination; A bioelectric glitch in the cells.
"I'm here with you, don't worry."
"Why would I worry? It's over now." She spoke, but her voice sounded far away, like a whisper at the other end of a corridor. Still no Song, still no feeling, but cold. Cold and wet, like lying in thin mud, and tightness. Tightness in her midriff, like a stomachache. There wasn't supposed to be discomfort, there wasn't supposed to be pain once she'd died. There wasn't any body left to hurt, was there? She thought back to when she'd first learnt of pain. A little girl had found a bug; a curious creature with a beautiful bright body and wings that worked so fast they couldn't be seen. A finger had gotten too close to the bug and it stung, leaving a bump and sharp stinging. Her parents cooed and hugged and kissed and after a little bandage and a sweet treat the pain had been forgotten. "We're here now, Sophii, don't worry."
Then, all at once, everything came back. Eyelids flew open and lungs sucked air like a hole in a ship's hull. The gasp was loud, and strong enough to make her body lurch as she regained consciousness. The movement tore her wound as muscles pulled themselves apart just enough to elicit a sharp cry. She tried to curl up but moaned loudly since it only hurt worse. There was someone there, a face she knew but it was hard to think. She gripped the woman's hands and sobbed "Mum? I'm sorry, mum, I didn't mean it! I couldn't stop it! I... I couldn't..."