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Invasion Great Balls of Fire | AoC Invasion of CIS-held Rodia and Talay | OOC

Dasmi Lindervale

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Cypher Rage Kiff Brayde Kiff Brayde
That sounds like an excellent idea actually as we have a few people in starfighters if you would like to engage them. Bella Bella Salem Norongachi Salem Norongachi

As well, on a personal note, being fathers day I will be late on getting a reply up today. A dnd session and daughter time are planned for the day. Thank you all not only for your patience but also your cooperation and insight.

As this is my third time attempt at operating a fleet, your help and attention to detail has been not only a great help in learning but a fun time to write with. I do apologize if at any time I seem brusque or aggitated as communication via text sometimes makes it difficult to discern context or tone. Again, thank you for your help ans understanding and lets have fun!
 
Dimitri Lindzinsky

Happy father's day! I hope you have fun with both DnD and your daughter! Don't sweat having to post immediately, I'm totally fine waiting, and personal/family life definitely comes before Chaos.

And no worries, sometimes text is very hard to communicate over and I'll keep that in mind -- that, and I know all too well how fleeting can be stressing at times. I have to say though, you're doing great -- so keep it up! I'm really looking forward to see how our fleet duel plays out :D
 
Kyrinov Kyrinov

Hey there! I just have a few questions/clarifications/suggestions after reading your post in the invasion.

So, basically the confusion lies in this: as my post played out, Kiff jumped behind Dimitri's fleet, which is arranged with Star Destroyers furthest from Kiff and closest to John, then some heavy cruisers and finally a line of corvettes. Kiff jumps right behind these corvettes and goes to town. In my post, Kiff specifically orders to fire on the corvettes, cruisers, Star Destroyers, the whole shebang.

The placement of your battlecruiser would mean it's right in Kiff's line of battle, or perhaps behind it depending on how far you consider 'rear' of the fleet to be. Depending on how you write it, this could basically mean that most of Dimitri's ships are now suddenly blocked from my firing view by your battlecruiser. In addition to that, your post also places your battlecruiser approximately right where my fleet jumped out, which adds the chance of your battlecruiser being potentially rammed or bumped into by my ships (for ease of access, it's five Star Destroyers and one Battlecruiser of my own that constitutes the 'line' there).

The fact is that your placement of the battlecruiser invalidates a lot of the thread canon that has been established between two rounds of posting between Dimitri and me; your placement of the battlecruiser puts my fleet in an extremely awkward position, and introducing this after I have posted did not give me any way whatsoever to react or plan differently. My post and movement were planned on the information given to me by Dimitri, and you putting a battlecruiser in there after-the-fact feels like it is invalidating most of my posting. Not only that, but in-character Kiff does intensive studying and planning of the fleet in question, including mentioning each type of ship that Kiff is engaging (I also do this in the OOC summary at the bottom of my post).

In addition to that, I can't seem to find anywhere in your post where you acknowledge the entrance or engagement of my ships.
 
Hi Nyx N1X3 Nyx N1X3 , can you clarify what jamming is taking place? As I read the post, it looks like non-CIS communications are being restricted to/from the planet at Rodia, and HoloNet access is being blocked planet-wide. So on-planet communications are still fine?

If I have this wrong, can you clarity?

Hello Daiya Daiya

Planetary to Interstellar communication, or vice versa, is being suppressed except for Confederate communications; this includes the holonet.

At the time of Nyx's post, on-planet communication that does not rely on any off-planet means should remain operational.
 

Kyrinov

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Hey, Kiff Brayde Kiff Brayde .

My apologies. I meant to post yesterday and time got away from me as I'm currently going through an emotionally taxing time irl with my family. I did not catch up on reading posts prior to typing up my post and that was my fault. I wrote to respond to my partner and get a post to him in a semi-timely manner.

Regarding edits, would it be a good compromise to move Discordia's vengeance to the edge of the Talay system and have the crew of the cruiser notify Kyrinov of the presence of a new fleet in the system? I do not intend to take part in the fleeting fighting/engagements and I am there as support for the main fleet. It was not and is not my intention to obstruct any actions or undermine any established thread canon/actions in any writer's post.

If the suggested edit clears up the issue, I will be more than happy to make edits to clear up any confusion for fleeters. If you find that another aspect of my post needs editing or the suggested edit would still obstruct the line of fire introduced by your fleet, please contact me again and I'm sure we can work out a compromise that works for both of us as well as our respective sides.

Thank you for bringing these inconsistencies to my attention.
 
Kyrinov Kyrinov

Thank you for that clarification! I think your suggested edit would work, and we can absolutely continue from there. And don't worry about it, as I said earlier real-life absolutely comes before chaos -- I'm sorry that you're going through a rough time and wish you the best. It's fine -- I think this was just a misunderstanding, and with that edit, I think everyone will be able to continue along. Thank you! :D
 

Kyrinov

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Kiff Brayde Kiff Brayde

Sounds great! I'm glad things have been sorted out in a way that works for everyone involved! I'll get right on that edit tomorrow and move their ship to the edge of the system as it's getting late for me. Thank you for the kind words and well wishes, I appreciate it deeply. I look forward to the great stories in this invasion and I hope you have a great time as well!
 

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