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How cliché is the character above you

Well There wasn't much of a bio to work with. I would say of the bio there was a little much of a cliche element there. The droid getting emotions because a technician forgot to upgrade it is a little similar to many droids in movies and elsewhere. Normally a droid is given emotions in one of three ways: Its memory isn't wiped for some reason or another (normally someone forgets), it may be forced into a traumatic event which makes it respond through emotions, or it is active so long without being taken are of properly.

I would give the character a rating of 6/10. No offense intended. (I used the top bio, because it wasn't clear as to which one was the character's bio.)
 
Hrm.

Not too bad. Only things that stand out as cliche or trope-y are the knowledge of an ancient language and extreme beauty from birth. Unhappy marriage as a result of a marriage-treaty. That's rather common, but I suppose it's a realistic expectation for one in a feudal society.

Oh, accents in name. (Not that I can say anything, given the apostrophe.)

I don't like scales. But not too cliche in my opinion!
 
The fact that you are a Force sensitive, rich child, gone rogue merc is a little cliche. Rich person gone rogue tends to happen a lot and Force sensitives being mercs also.

Aside from that I liked how you worded it. The circumstances were very unique in my mind.

4/10
 

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