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How cliché is the character above you

6/10.

The Queen of Cups in ninja wraps. If she were a Jedi, she'd be a healer. Seen it.

That said, with a more "calm, kind, reserved" (read: "introverted") personality, what we're seeing isn't exactly the important part, huh? What makes or breaks the character in terms of originality would be her descriptions of individual environments and what she remembers in people.
Was for Alaki^

As for Cross --

Military in occupation, but not in appearance. Brains, experimenting on biological, mechanical, and apparently military systems. Gets drunk, presumably on duty, but suffers no consequence of drinking. Maintains an unhealthy physique for military service. His one weakness? Can't use big guns, (but he's a cowboy with smaller ones). Has been alive forever.

9/10. Mary Sue or Anime Vampire.
 
Either I'm looking at an outdated profile or it needs to be updated.

Regardless tho', relatively young soldier with a temper and leadership issues that will die for someone in his unit. 6/10, all things considered.
 
[member="Preliat Mantis"]

Get on it mate. Also, [member="Chess Tixlia"], 8/10, but I am biased as hell against teenagers / jail bait / whatever the term is nowadays.
 
[member="Preliat Mantis"]
More like 10/10 for being a direct export of John Constantine. C'mon, dude, if you're not going to do a qualitative analysis, this game totally sucks.

[member="Alexander Nester"]
5/10. Standard Soldier, composed free of gimmicks and with Everyman qualities so that he can be changed as the story changes him. Can go either way at this point, and is a pretty ideal initial setup for Roleplaying.
 
That...actually wasn't the point.

But anyway, 6/10. It's not often people recognize that they're deliberately playing a thug (usually, instead, trying to justify their behavior by portraying them as a victim of circumstances). Would've gained more originality points if he had been a straight-up bully. But yeah, a bit of a textbook Mandalorian, but the lack of frills make it hard to call him a cliche'.

At least, not without reading further.
 
[member="Trenchcoat Man"]

6/10

You're waaaaaay less cliche pirate/smuggler than your account's name would suggest :p

Love reading your posts (though there are so few :( )
 
I'm a sucker for this kind of stuff, so lets give it another whirl.

As for you, [member="Cross Ikon"], too little information to go by, but from what is there, 7-8/10. Points added on for being an admiral at a rather young age, but I've seen worse. The rest, I'll agree with that [member="Trenchcoat Man"] wrote.
 

Nyxie

【夢狐】
I don't really know much since I only skimmed, but 6/10 big, bad experiment-type thing gone wrong, interpretation of Jekyll/Hyde or Hulk complex, standard application of Sithspawn/Alchemy to explain deficits or mutations perpetuating said physiology and/or behavior.
 

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