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There have been many-a pirate around, not that it's a bad thing. Smugglers and pirates and that lot come and go all the time, even though imo personality makes the character rather than going off the label.
I had to do a little digging to find your CP, but it was a good read and her personality was consistent with her background. Orphans I see a lot, but I thought you still managed to make her unique. 4/10 for you.
5/10 there's some interesting stuff, like his actual species and force ability that set him apart, but there's also some cliche stuff in his storyline, especially for SW, like joining the dark side.
The character starts off a little too good for my tastes, not that I can really say anything about starting off too good though *glares at Adenn's original bio*
I do like the whole thing though, a really nice looking character.
7/10, strengths and weaknesses seem overused, though that is because they make for a balanced character. Lol, not an insult, one of my other characters have pretty much the same thing.
Personality seems pretty run of the mill but playing an intergalactic rock star is rather unique in star wars. Without a biography I can't really say much more.