I'm On A Boat [OOC][OS-Republic Inv. of Manaan]

[The End Narrator]

I had posted Limited Activity until this evening. I have not received any PMs saying anything urgent needs to be addressed regarding posting so...

I'll get my post up tonight?

Anyways.

I've enjoyed reading alot of this Invasion

 

[Miss Blonde]

[member="Ludolf Vaas"]

I think there might be a small problem with your post. I'm not sure how well the other sides are doing in terms of their defense of the generator. But I know the west side has fallen back. But to surround on all sides might be going a little too far and controlling every building since there's still a lot of republic resistance in the city as well. Again I'm not sure, I'd send this in a PM but if any republic people know of any more republic resistance I'd love to know so I can give Ludolf the specs

 

[Darth Carnifex]

#Blackblades4Life

 

[Meeristali Peradun]

[member="Ket Van-Derveld"]

I've looked around because I knew when they sorted out teams for who's going to what part of the city/what door, you'd been tagged with the NORTH team. That is made up something like this.

Happy hunting, mate.

 

[Ludolf Vaas]

[member="Patricia Susan Garter"]

I haven't seen mention of any Republic forces doing anything significant elsewhere (if there was, I missed it).

And we have only started on the task of surrounding the generator.

 

[Kyrana Gould]

[member="Mordecai Zambrano"] | [member="Melakoth Tyrin"]

I don't think you guys have been tagging me properly, since I've not gotten notifications that you've posted. Please ensure that you tag me with the @mention system or even just PM me when you've posted, since I cannot keep up with the fleeting battle without that.

[member="Alicia Drey"] | [member="Darth Arcanix"] | [member="Camellia Swift"]

I think there's also some minor confusion, since the Dorin class corvette is on the other side of the planet, IE it retreated to the opposite side of the planet from the Sith in order to send its message.
Now, I'm not too fussed on this, but the key point is that it's in a different direction from the rest of the Republic fleet, so if a Dark Blade turns to engage it'll be facing away from the oncoming Republic fleet.

So if you'd like to edit, that's cool. If you'd like me to proceed as is, that's fine too. Just making sure we're all on the same page.

I was thinking of doing a (very rough) map of how I see things. Anyone interested in seeing that?

 

[Kaida Taldir]

[member="Friedrich Stahlmann"]


Make a 3D map!

 

[Judas of Vahl]

[member="Friedrich Stahlmann"], [member="Melakoth Tyrin"], [member="Darth Arcanix"]

Duly noted. I'd suggest, then, that the attack intended for the Dorin shifts to the Adamant, if possible.

It was me who gave that order for the concentrated fire attack, so I'll take the blame for that mishap. I've also posted, should be pretty recent.

 

[Kyrana Gould]

[member="Mordecai Zambrano"] | [member="Darth Arcanix"]
Works for me. Though your boarding team is about to try and break in. But sure, it's a good target. I'll reply soon.

 

[Darth Carnifex]

*Zambrano Brothers intensifies.*

 

[Judas of Vahl]

[member="Friedrich Stahlmann"]

Hell, I'll probably just let Melakoth and Arcanix decide what their targets should be. I'll double check with them and get back to ya,

 

[Kyrana Gould]

[member="Mordecai Zambrano"]
OK, I'll wait for your word.

 

[Sarge Potteiger]

I haven't seen mention of any Republic forces doing anything significant elsewhere (if there was, I missed it).

If that's an NPC quip, it's probably because no one feels like throwing them around. I've found only certain types of characters use them, and not every writer feels comfortable writing them.

If that's a snide remark about the state of the Republic in this invasion... well, now I'm sad.

 

[Hailey Sosis]

wrong board

 

[sabrina]

[member="Sarge Potteiger"] I like using npc, I even get by them on occasion

 

[Bellona Vel]

Just to put a notice out to all of you in this thread. I used to be Arkia Zinn, so when you've mentioning you're enemies, know that I've changed.

 

[Cira]

Just to put a notice out to all of you in this thread. I used to be Arkia Zinn, so when you've mentioning you're enemies, know that I've changed.

I'll make sure to replace your name accordingly Bellona!

 

[Ellie Mors]

[member="Sarge Potteiger"]
I feel it gives me an unfair advantage :/

 

[Camellia Swift]

[member="Sarge Potteiger"]

I use NPCs!!!!

; A ;

I just happen to be in space this time.

 

[Lira Dajenn]

[member="Friedrich Stahlmann"] [member="Mordecai Zambrano"]

I'm gonna need ya'll to speed up your fleeting.

I got things to do that require distractions.