Invasion of Eriadu OOC

[HK-36]

@[member="Lucianus Adair"]
Noah's current state of inactivity has been brought up in Protectorate chat as well, I am not sure if he posted a warning in this thread here but he did let us know ahead of time in Protectorate forums that he was facing computer problems currently,

I don't know if I can participate,my laptop broke and I'm using the libraries computers at the moment

So to you and anyone else RPing with him, if you won't be able to reach him just yet, please be patient.

 

[Captain Larraq]

I'm still waiting on Gavin to post before I can bring the main fleets into system.

 

[Dredge]

Lavender lollipops batman I need to post!!

 

[Lucianus Adair]

I have removed all references to Noah Corek being within the second generator facility, as from a review of his last posts, he was never in there - he may have edited after the fact of my second to last post... I do not know, and that is not the point. At any rate, I am the only one actually in the building now. <_<

 

[Noah Corek]

@[member="Lucianus Adair"]
Well,I just got my laptop back yesterday and I was tying up some loose ends before posting in there. I am actually in the generator room,I've haven't got to posting to you entering yet.

 

[Lucianus Adair]

@[member="Noah Corek"]

Okay, buddy. Pay real close attention. I am pegging this down, and you are not going to go edit and change things. Before you got to the generator, you were here -

Eriadu
Dirtside,Omega Base
Well,he knew it was going to happen eventually,the Fringe was here to take over the planet,it was understandable after what happened at Kyari. But now they were here at Eriadu in force,trying to cut the southern half of the Protectorate off and be greedy with the land,but Noah and the 5,000 soldiers of the Pyre,who had came to Eriadu for standardized training alongside the Eriaduan Defense Force,who many a member had come to trust the Pyre. "Men,I stand before you today not as a leader but as a fellow soldier in the cause. Omegans,I don't have to tell you why you fight the Fringe,but our EDF comrades might need a little reminder. They say they want what's best for you,but do you really believe that? The leaders of the Fringe are mostly made up of Dark Jedi and Sith,not to mention that the Fringe was founded by Ashin Varanin,Former Sith Empress and Spencer Jacobs,her Apprentice. Ask yourselves this,do you really think they care whether or not if you help them? NO! They will take your land and everything they promised you will just be empty promises and false words. So,who will stand with me to drive the invaders back!?" Noah asked of the men of the EDF who were currently assembled,to which they all screamed out in defiance against the Fringe,promising to fight to help the Protectorate.

And then you magically appear at the generator, with no transit from where you were to the generator, not even the slightest mention of intent to go there in your previous post, and no mention that you're in the generator room at all, as seen below -

Eridau,Omega Base,Second Generator
"Colonel,why are we here when the Fringe is attacking the other generator?" Asked a young Corporal as he tinkered with a E-Web that was pointed towards the only entrance to the building that housed the planetary shield generator. "Because Corporal Chrichton,if they attacking the first generator in force,they think that no one is going to be here to protect this one,but little do they know,there is 10 fully armed and armored Pyre commandos to meet them." Noah informed him as he made sure his MKI Bolter had a full clip of buckshot bolts loaded and then checked his OPR-2 Blaster Rifle,his two OPP-2 Blaster Pistols and his two cortosis weave vibroblades. "When you put it like that sir it makes sense." The corporal said. "Good,but now,we wait."

I'm sorry, but this is entirely too sloppy, horribly ambiguous, and I can't really accept that you're in there, man. Of course, your post could possibly stand on ambiguity alone, so if you leave it, that's your choice. I won't like it but I'll deal. Please do better next time.

 

[Aran Finn]

@[member="Noah Corek"] Also if you're in there, we did just cave the roof on your head and your commandos probably took casualties. So I'd make revisions if I were you.

 

[Vaas]

May I be added to the list of fringe allies? @[member="Cira"]

 

[Josh Dragovalor]

The Fringe is not the Republic.

This is less about 'saving' Eriadu and more about vengeance. Most of us care little if your world's civilians burn in the process.

The Fringe is not the Republic.

This is less about 'saving' Eriadu and more about vengeance. Most of us care little if your world's civilians burn in the process.

And we get crap for being bad guys...

 

[Aran Finn]

@[member="Joshua DragonsFlame"] The Fringe is a plurality, we've never claimed to be the good guys, which is why we don't crap for not being the good guys.

We're good, accommodating dudes OOC, which is why everyone loves us.

 

[Lira Dajenn]

I like our maybe evilness.

 

[Cira]

I've been way too busy working the EXPO and auctions to get a good updated list on where people are at >.>

so update ME

 

[Kable Detta]

I'm in an alley right by Omega Base
@[member="Cira"]

 

[Noah Corek]

@[member="Lucianus Adair"] @[member="Alen Na'Varro"]
All right,I'll edit it so I'm going to the generator and I'll get rid of my post of any mention of being at the generator,sound good?

 

[Briika Munin]

I'm in an alley right by Omega Base
@[member="Cira"]

Same… and @[member="Ermac Laith"] is with us.

 

[Darth Kentarch]

I've been way too busy working the EXPO and auctions to get a good updated list on where people are at >.> so update ME

Short Version Update:
Kentarch is the same room as you, and wants to kill you.

 

[Lucianus Adair]

@[member="Noah Corek"] - Sorry, man. I was on my couch devouring episodes of Attack on Titan, so I'm just getting back to you now! Back-editing to make everything make sense sounds good to me, man. And it makes you look better, too. Two thumbs up. Be clear about your intentions IC from here on out, and everything may be golden. You'll have to go back to the post before your most recent one, though, and start there so it doesn't look weird, bro. Just a heads up.

For my part, I will make sure that further posts to the area of the second generator take into account the edits you are planning to make.

 

[Dissero]

The boom...

...it's coming.

 

[Carré Inirial]

Get a move on with said boom, darling...I really don't want anymore shrapnel trophies <_<

 

[Dissero]

But I love a woman with scars....