Approved Starship Marauder-class Mesen'Loras

[Captain Larraq]

[member="Raziel"]

Sounds reasonable. I should be able to get that taken care of between now and next wednesday. I'll tag you again once it's done.

 

[Allyson Locke]

[member="Captain Larraq"] When you're all done PM me or [member="Raziel"] to remove from Archives

 

[Allyson Locke]

Moved to Archives - PM [member="Spencer Jacobs"] for removal / if denied for Second Chance please post and tag Spencer Jacobs for review.

Thank you!

 

[Cira]

[member="Raziel"] Assigned to RPJ Raziel

 

[Captain Larraq]

[member="Raziel"]

How's this stack up so far?

Speed: High
Maneuverability: Very High, but with weaknesses (imagine this thing trying to navigate an asteroid field)
Defense: Average
Offense: High, but short range weapons
Hangar: Average
Hyperdrive: High, but with weaknesses
Production: Limited
Restricted Materials: Laminanium, but takes several hours for minor repairs and several days for major damage (matching the natural healing capabilities of the organism)
Mission: several posts from the POV of NPCs accompanying Naast'ika during an invasion (somewhere between 8-15 iirc)

 

[Raziel]

[member="Captain Larraq"]

The description for this is so long it would be best served after the other elements of the template. Armaments next to the defensive rating would be useful too.

Your ship barely strays into Frigate territory, I'd say the hangar was above average in size. Having reviewed the full submission and on that basis I'll be happy with the following at Limited.

Add another tangible weakness and I might be convinced to push the armaments to Moderate.

TECHNICAL SPECIFICATIONS

• Armament: Average
• Defenses: Average
• Maneuverability Rating:High
• Speed Rating: High

 

[Captain Larraq]

[member="Raziel"]

Knocked the hangar, maneuverability, and armament rating down a bit. Moved speed, maneuverability, armament, and defense rating to their own little area. Quarantined the description in a spoiler for easier reading.

How's it looking now?

 

[Raziel]

Approved.