Second Chance Till Dec 2019

[Allyson Locke]

[member="Coratanni Cartel"]

Second chance granted, please make edits according to what we discussed thank you.

 

[WolfMortum]

[member="Allyson Locke"]

Spoiler

I would like to request a Second Chance Review for the following submission: The Inquisition - Personal Guard of Veiere Arenais.

This Submission was denied under the judge's understanding that Non-Force User's cannot practice with any true capability the use of Lightsabers, in standard nor Pike form; something that I strongly disagree with. I fear that in my challenging our discussion, there seems to have been some misunderstanding of my intent to argue the fact and I've otherwise come off somehow grieving towards the previous Judge. This was in no way my intention but to my understanding, a weapon of any sort can be picked up and with enough time and effort, trained to utilize in practice.

For all necessary details of the previous discussion that took place, please see the linked submission above.

Disregard this Request, sorry Allyson.

 

[Allyson Locke]

[member="Veiere Arenais"]


Granted

 

[Ugoto Chivaro]

http://starwarsrp.net/topic/124922-yasha-mantis-bor-gullet/

I would like the opportunity to change the name of the sub, remove all references to the reason it was denied, and re-submit it for review.

 

[Allyson Locke]

[member="Helix Syndicate"] Granted, I'll move it to the Pre-Codex.

 

[WelshPsych]

http://starwarsrp.net/topic/123639-symbosys/?hl=%2Byuroic+%2Bxeraic#entry1727131

Hey, could I get this moved to pre-codex to get it ready for review again. Now that I am back, would love to give this the chance it deserves

[member="Zeradias Mant"]

 

[Kitty]

I just want this http://starwarsrp.net/topic/129952-nocnafuria/ or this http://starwarsrp.net/topic/130206-nocnafuria/ moved out so I can make the appropriate edits. Can even be the same judge. Not looking for a second chance just to fix what was asked on the first one.

 

[Allyson Locke]

[member="Kitty"]

Second chances never give the same judged, but after reading this over, I'm going to approve it. Please work with the judge that is assigned to it.

 

[Prazutis]

requesting a second chance

http://starwarsrp.net/topic/130607-prudii-kyram-mandalorian-clan-compound


Reasons:

lack of communication on my part, and I believe first judge contradicted himself on asking for one thing then in the next post ask for way much for then he normally wanted. as well was informed I could copy and paste the history of dxun by one judge as long as I gave credit and my current judge said I couldn't

 

[Allyson Locke]

[member="A'den Kyr'am"]

After reviewing the judgement and reviewing what happened in General chat of the discord I'm denying this submission's second chance. The way you acted was out of line. As another note, no you can't just copy paste straight from the Wikipedia and add a couple of lines. You can quote the Wikipedia giving credit and having it properly cited. That is someone else's work and you're not going to be able to claim it as your own. The Codex Judge you asked gave you a good response in regards of the understanding that the ENTIRE submission wasn't going to be the wiki page.

 

[Allyson Locke]

[member="Kaine Australis"]

Please allow a day for review, I need to have one of the RPJs review with me since I was the one that denied it.

 

[Zeradias Mant]

[member="Kaine Australis"]

While I appreciate the willingness to work on this, I'm going to have to uphold the denial and go as far as to deny it on concept. Though conventional cloaking devices have a similar effect, they are not totally immune from detection as is the case with the White Current. Per the Wiki, the Fallanassi method of cloaking via Force Immersion would render the vessel undetectable by any means, both artificial and organic. It is simply not compatible with a roleplay environment.

 

[Junko Ike]

[member="Allyson Locke"]

http://starwarsrp.net/topic/133091-atisian-naval-corp/

I would like a second chance, honestly this is the second time I've needed to approve myself for a marketplace purchase from my own company. Junko is part of the family and works out contracts for the company as recently as with the consortium and as far back as she worked with the first dominion when there was still a republic. Now in terms of the weaknesses and deployment... they are a defense fleet not expeditionary. THey would be limited to a single system that recruits and builds its own ships. They could easily reach mass deployment across a single system but wouldn't have the numbers to go outwards to their colonies. It is stated in the weakness itself that they are limited to their system and close to the flagship.

 

[Allyson Locke]

[member="Junko Ike"]

Missed this, I'll check it out today and get back to you.

 

[Allyson Locke]

[member="Junko Ike"]

I'm super confused by your second chance request. Been trying to figure it out. Please poke me on discord so we can chat about it.

 

[Vulpesen]

Not sure if it's technically a second chance, but I need this taken out of the archives. The agreed upon edits have been made to the submission since it was archives(Possibly before, but I didn't get to it in time). http://starwarsrp.net/topic/131904-vsf-jackals/[member="Arekk"] [member="Allyson Locke"]

 

[Darth Imperia]

http://starwarsrp.net/topic/134405-the-penitent/

[member="Allyson Locke"]

I would like to request a new judge for this submission, based on the fact that the current judge has been vaguely rude re: the content of the submission, overly nitpicky in places, and seems to have not read the submission in its entirety. I am aware that the Codex is currently closed, and I will need to wait, and am perfectly happy with that.

 

[Allyson Locke]

[member="Darth Imperia"]

Granted

 

[Zef Halo]

[member="Allyson Locke"]

http://starwarsrp.net/topic/134766-tantus-gate/

I trolled. Lemme fix this pls. xoxo

 

[Allyson Locke]

[member="Rohak Vizsla"]

Under review