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Approved Planet Sraeljoarsk - The Ink Pond

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Sraeljoarsk - The Ink Pond

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[Source: Grey Planet by mutiny-in-the-air
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OUT OF CHARACTER INFORMATION
  • Intent: To encapsulate several different species I plan on creating an add an additional flavour to the universe and set a staging ground for further stories.
  • ​Image Credit: X
  • Canon: ​N/A
  • Links: N/A
​- Bryn'adûl
- Draeyde
- Vo'uldesh
- Eleamentas

GENERAL INFORMATION
  • Planet Name: Sraeljoarsk
  • Demonym: ​N/A
  • Region: Wild Space
  • System Name: N/A
  • System Features: One sun, six moons, three other planets with no significant life.
  • Coordinates: AJ-43, centre of the top of the hex-line
  • Major Imports: N/A
  • Major Exports: N/A
GEOGRAPHIC INFORMATION
  • Gravity: Three times standard
  • Climate: Arid, Uninhabitable
  • Primary Terrain: Hollowed Rock
  • Atmosphere: ​Type IV - Due to the pollution of poisonous ink in the sky from the Vo'uldesh.
  • Major Locations:
There are no distinguishable landmarks on the planets surface. Almost all life, bar a few species live in the massive caverns within the planet.

THE TUNNELS:
As you can imagine, these tunnels are were most of the life on the planet resides. The tunnels were created over billions of years by now dormant massive rock-worms known as the Eleamentas. The caves inhabit a few other indigenous creates, such as the Draeyde bats, small blind creatures that stalk and eat everything else on the planet.

DRAEYDE BIRTHING GROUNDS GROUNDS:

The Draeyde's are a breed of ferocious predators, lightning fast that dominate the planets underground tunnels, protected by complete darkness, they roam freely. The birthing grounds have spread across a massive area of the tunnels within. They are massive humid areas, filled with puss like fleshy sacks that contain hundreds of their young. The birthing grounds are located in the deepest, darkest and coldest areas of the tunnels.

VO'ULDESH NESTS:

The Vo'uldesh are evolutionary polluters, likely developed from some form of animal that used ink as a form of defence. Now, these animals serve as a symbiotic link to the Draeyde bats. The Vo'uldesh nest around the openings to the tunnels beneath, completely engulfing the openings with poisonous ink that protects the Draeyde within. The bats use the ink, covering themselves in it as they leave, and use it as a temporary shield against the sun whilst they hunt. In return, the bats feed the Vo'uldesh and do not feed on them.

ELEAMENTAS GRAVEYARD:

A massive graveyard of dead ancient Eleamentas, none of the other species dare venture here. Entirely too afraid of awakening a dormant Eleamentas, as it would likely destroy the homes built by other species over thousands of years in a matter of months.
POPULATION

  • Native Species: Draeyde bats, Vo'uldesh, Eleamentas, various other creatures
  • Immigrated Species: N/A
  • Population: Heavily populated
  • Demographics: The Draeyde bats form up roughly eighty percent of the planets population, and the Vo'uldesh nineteen percent.
  • Primary Languages: N/A
  • Culture:
​The only culture to speak of is that of nature itself, the day to day and the circle of life and death. Kill or be killed is the nature of this dark and dull world. The creatures that inhabit it seldom grant mercy, as they are simply animals. They feast upon the weak.

GOVERNMENT & ECONOMY
  • Government: N/A
  • Affiliation: This planet was discovered by the Bryn'adûl, however is currently not under the control of any particular faction.
  • Wealth: N/A
  • Stability:
​None Existent: There is no stability, this planet is uninhabitable for civilians of any kind and notably adverse for adventurers.
  • Freedom & Oppression: The Draeyde bats can definetly be oppressive.
MILITARY & TECHNOLOGY
  • Military: N/A
  • Technology: N/A
HISTORICAL INFORMATION:
Hundreds of thousands of years ago, Sraeljoarsk was ruled by grand creatures known as the Eleamentas. Massive rock like worms that existed underground, eating rock and dirt and all variations of earth. It was once possible that many Eleamentas existed on the planet, likely smaller than the skeletons found in their graveyard. However, as time went on they grew larger and lesser in number. And by proxy, began to slowly die off.

Eventually, the last Eleamentas went into a state of hibernation, deep under the rock of Sraeljoark, near the planets core. This hibernation was extended as the Draeyde bats took over, allowing the pollution of the Vo'uldesh to seep into the tunnels, taking over their feedings ground and turning them into hunting grounds for the Draeyde.

Very recently, due to its proximity to bases of operations under the Bryn'adûl's control, the planet was discovered the scouting party sent there were slaughtered by the Draeyde. Since then, no further attempts at making land touchdown have been made.
 
[member="Jairus Starvald"]

The restrictions on the ability to post subs, means I don't have codex subs for those two species. Though I will, be making both of the subs at some point. And I fixed the other thing.
 
[member="Tathra Khaeus"]

You can have up to 3 submissions per section not per the entire Codex forum. Seeing as you already have on submission in the species section, you can put up these two as well.

This was always a complicated affair in the Codex- what to sub first, planet or species, if they belong to one another.

This is what I told another submitter for their planet:

I have advised people one of two positions: a ) either submit the species first, b ) submit the planet, but leave out the mentions of the species.

If you go with a), I will move this submission to the Pre-Codex. You will have about two weeks (honestly sometimes more, because its not the most active of sections) to finish your species subs before the planet sub will be archived from the Pre-Codex. Once you are done with your species, you can tag either Allyson Locke or Zeradias Mant for it to be brought out.

Alternatively, if you want to go with b ) just tag me once the edits are done.
It is the same situation here, so you can pick which one you prefer here.
 
[member="Tathra Khaeus"]

Excellent.

I will move this into the Pre-Codex for now. You can tag either [member="Allyson Locke"] or [member="Zeradias Mant"], when your species submissions are approved, to bring it back out for review.
 
[member="Tathra Khaeus"]

All the secondary submissions are good, the sub pretty much appears in order. Just one last thing.



Tathra Khaeus said:
Coordinates: AJ-42, dead centre of the hex

The AJ column on the hexmap doesn't have a hex on the 42 row, rather it's a line between AJ-41(Phorskuh II hex) and AJ-43(Via hex), with AK-42 being right beside those hexes and completely empty. Could you clarify please which of these hexes you want the planet to be located in?
 
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