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Heyo! Been reminded recently that this exists, and I don't need to sit around and freak out about how I don't know what people think of my writing! Instead I can freak out because I do know what people think about my writing. I've really enjoyed writing Auteme as of late; recent threads with...

The change has been a very much happening for Chaos recently compared to an In Character event outside Site Events, and I dont say that to diminish other's accomplishments, it's just....look at Chaos! All shiny and new! I never thought I would get to see this happen, and boom, dreams do come...

I mistakenly requested a second account for my character with the username "Alyosha Drutin" under a different email address. If the request for this account comes in, please delete it as I will be making a sub instead.

OUT OF CHARACTER INFORMATION Intent: To give characters wanting something sweet to eat but not wanting something as generic as just candy, which for my character Desken and his sweet tooth. ​Image Credit: Canon: No Links: http://starwarsrp.net/topic/148103-desken-arlo/ GENERAL INFORMATION...

Hello all!! This previous invasion on Tanaab was my first real chance to show off xobos to those not only within the CIS but outside of it as well. Mostly I had been just threading with [member="Adron Malvern"] and [member="Shakti Sweet"] while using her, so it was nice to introduce her to a...

It's been a trend for a while. If a major faction isn't well liked by enough other MFs, you get invasions with a "This is the story deal with it" attitude. I don't know how far back it's been, but I have seen it happen three times personally. The Dominion, The Jen'ari, and The UCM. It always...

Removing all progression rules is killing us. Writers are leaving Chaos faster than joining. My theory is because there's not much variety left to write for anymore. Now you either join a Major Faction and clique up; do doms; invasions etc. Or you write one off's or private threads. Gone are...

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Welp, I think I'm doing one of these. So basically I'm getting bored, lying in bed, and trying to think about my writing and how to improve -- as much as I love the *endless* praise by my bestie [member="Krystal Estain"] I don't feel like I'm getting enough feedback from multiple sources. So...

Ludex-Class walker incinerating a hostile fortification with its' plasma flamethrower Source (x) "Welcome back Pilot, bridge cooling reactivated. Ludex A.I transferring control to Pilot." -Genetrix de Infernus [OUT OF CHARACTER INFORMATION] Intent: Create another Walker in the same series of...

Before His Face Was Ruined: Haven't been here long but I thought I'd get some feedback anyway. Orex Mauda.. I like to think of him as an exaggerated reflection of myself. He's an Anakin, but much more cruel. His very soul is torn apart beyond repair due to childhood trauma's (Detailed in...

So after roughly two years of writing as Yuroic, yes there was a couple short breaks during that, he has made Master rank! This is great and loved developing Yuroic as a character during this, seeing him change throughout the two years. Figure since he has reached Master Rank I'd see what...

So, I usually try not to ask for a review on a character until after I've gotten at least a hundred posts with that character down. But given the surprisingly high number of likes this character has gotten since her debut (Which caught me completely by surprise, tbh) I have decided to open up a...

So, been roleplaying as this character for a while now, and I'd like to know how I am doing with her, whether she's a compelling character, what could use improving, are her scenes written well, etc.

So, I've reached 3k posts after nearly two years of writing this character. Personally, I feel as if he's grown a lot, just as I have. But I also wanna know what you guys think of him. Things I need to improve, flesh out more, ideas for what I could do with him next, or even if you just like...

It's been a good 6 months since the last time I asked for feedback, and I think enough time has passed for an evaluation on both my character [member="Darth Carnifex"] and myself as a writer. Especially because so many new faces have joined the site. So have at it, fam.

Good day all. As you are all aware we are constantly looking to fine tune the way rules, and especially Invasions work here at SWRP. Just over a year and a half ago a significant change was made to invasions and how they were judged. Rather than judging based on duels or NPCs they were instead...

It's not finished, I know. But I'm just curious as to what people think of my bio so far, if it's too much, too little, what I should add/remove...that type of stuff. If you know Garrus from ME, that's who I'm trying to 'recreate.' Let me know if the humor I put in, yeah I'm bad at humor, but...

So another char. It's been very long since I tried my hand at a Sith. I'm trying to write Ari as less of a marauder and more a cold, Calculating Sith. Much like a cross between Palpatine and Dooku. With a little Darth Plageuis in the mix. How am I doing?