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Ok so like… I had one of these before then lost it so uh Anyway, I’ve been writing Romi since 2017…Longest character i’ve ever written. She started off a satellite character to Veiere for a faction and then grew into…something else entirely idek. She's been a WIP, a process i'm liking compared...

Would anybody be interested in a story arc about the CIS confronting its past? I am considering making a character who is a Clone Wars era CIS general who was frozen in carbonite just after the war ended, but is unthawed in the modern day. He then rejoins the CIS, but finds that it has changed...

(Now posted in the correct forum) Hey y'all, I can't remember the last time I did one of those Feedback things, but after my total post count hitting 1263, I think it is time for another one. I'm always looking for ways to improve my writing skill/ improve my characters, so I'd love to hear...

Terminators + 40K Necrons + 40K Orcs + Jack Nicholson's Joker + HK47 = Nuetralizers I am looking for feedback on my Wardroids, The Nuetralizers, because Shredder wouldn't be half as memorable if he didn't have the Foot Clan to throw at the TMNT. How are they as an antagonist. Are they...

Hello fellow RPers! The title says it all. Essentially, we Bryn'adul writers are looking for some feedback. *Have you enjoyed writing with us so far? *What stories would you like to see in the future from us? *Do you have any questions regarding The Bryn'adul? *General feedback, concerns...

OUT OF CHARACTER INFORMATION Intent: A good piece of hardware for when slicers won’t leave you alone Image Source: N/A Canon Link: N/A Permissions: N/A Primary Source: Socketguard PRODUCTION INFORMATION Manufacturer: Upshot Affiliation: Upshot Market Status: Closed-Market Model: Nightshade...

(Bio here, Thread tracker here) This is mostly for people that write with me, But feel free to answer either way! TLDR; Does she give off those smooth gunslinger vibes? If not, Can I improve? ((Further feedback welcome, This is all about improving the roleplay of this character...

OUT OF CHARACTER INFORMATION Intent: Use in Invasions both in offense and defensive purposes Image Credit: Hokunin, Frostbite Role: Hades Corp, Heavy Infantry Strikeforce for Offensive and Defensive Purposes Permissions:N/A Links: H.A.R.M. MKII ARMOR, Biodroids, Armored bodysuits, Elysium...

OUT OF CHARACTER INFORMATION Intent: To be an assistant for my RP Character, minor role for set up and helping RP story Image Credit: X XX Role: Assistant Permissions: N/A Links: DUM-series pit droid PHYSICAL INFORMATION Age: 3 Force Sensitivity: No Model: DUM-series pit droid Appearance...

Heya there, some of you know me OOC as wendigo kid. Before I got onto Chaos I had taken a long hiatus from not only RP, but from writing as a whole, it had been about two to three years before I sat down on the site and started writing Ravraa. To be honest, I've never felt a strong pull in any...

Heyo! Been reminded recently that this exists, and I don't need to sit around and freak out about how I don't know what people think of my writing! Instead I can freak out because I do know what people think about my writing. I've really enjoyed writing Auteme as of late; recent threads with...

The change has been a very much happening for Chaos recently compared to an In Character event outside Site Events, and I dont say that to diminish other's accomplishments, it's just....look at Chaos! All shiny and new! I never thought I would get to see this happen, and boom, dreams do come...

I mistakenly requested a second account for my character with the username "Alyosha Drutin" under a different email address. If the request for this account comes in, please delete it as I will be making a sub instead.

OUT OF CHARACTER INFORMATION Intent: To give characters wanting something sweet to eat but not wanting something as generic as just candy, which for my character Desken and his sweet tooth. ​Image Credit: Canon: No Links: http://starwarsrp.net/topic/148103-desken-arlo/ GENERAL INFORMATION...

Hello all!! This previous invasion on Tanaab was my first real chance to show off xobos to those not only within the CIS but outside of it as well. Mostly I had been just threading with [member="Adron Malvern"] and [member="Shakti Sweet"] while using her, so it was nice to introduce her to a...

It's been a trend for a while. If a major faction isn't well liked by enough other MFs, you get invasions with a "This is the story deal with it" attitude. I don't know how far back it's been, but I have seen it happen three times personally. The Dominion, The Jen'ari, and The UCM. It always...

Removing all progression rules is killing us. Writers are leaving Chaos faster than joining. My theory is because there's not much variety left to write for anymore. Now you either join a Major Faction and clique up; do doms; invasions etc. Or you write one off's or private threads. Gone are...

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