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OUT OF CHARACTER INFORMATION Intent: A good piece of hardware for when slicers won’t leave you alone Image Source: N/A Canon Link: N/A Permissions: N/A Primary Source: Socketguard PRODUCTION INFORMATION Manufacturer: Upshot Affiliation: Upshot Market Status: Closed-Market Model: Nightshade...

(Bio here, Thread tracker here) This is mostly for people that write with me, But feel free to answer either way! TLDR; Does she give off those smooth gunslinger vibes? If not, Can I improve? ((Further feedback welcome, This is all about improving the roleplay of this character...

OUT OF CHARACTER INFORMATION Intent: Use in Invasions both in offense and defensive purposes Image Credit: Hokunin, Frostbite Role: Hades Corp, Heavy Infantry Strikeforce for Offensive and Defensive Purposes Permissions:N/A Links: H.A.R.M. MKII ARMOR, Biodroids, Armored bodysuits, Elysium...

OUT OF CHARACTER INFORMATION Intent: To be an assistant for my RP Character, minor role for set up and helping RP story Image Credit: X XX Role: Assistant Permissions: N/A Links: DUM-series pit droid PHYSICAL INFORMATION Age: 3 Force Sensitivity: No Model: DUM-series pit droid Appearance...

Heya there, some of you know me OOC as wendigo kid. Before I got onto Chaos I had taken a long hiatus from not only RP, but from writing as a whole, it had been about two to three years before I sat down on the site and started writing Ravraa. To be honest, I've never felt a strong pull in any...

Heyo! Been reminded recently that this exists, and I don't need to sit around and freak out about how I don't know what people think of my writing! Instead I can freak out because I do know what people think about my writing. I've really enjoyed writing Auteme as of late; recent threads with...

The change has been a very much happening for Chaos recently compared to an In Character event outside Site Events, and I dont say that to diminish other's accomplishments, it's just....look at Chaos! All shiny and new! I never thought I would get to see this happen, and boom, dreams do come...

I mistakenly requested a second account for my character with the username "Alyosha Drutin" under a different email address. If the request for this account comes in, please delete it as I will be making a sub instead.

OUT OF CHARACTER INFORMATION Intent: To give characters wanting something sweet to eat but not wanting something as generic as just candy, which for my character Desken and his sweet tooth. ​Image Credit: Canon: No Links: http://starwarsrp.net/topic/148103-desken-arlo/ GENERAL INFORMATION...

Hello all!! This previous invasion on Tanaab was my first real chance to show off xobos to those not only within the CIS but outside of it as well. Mostly I had been just threading with [member="Adron Malvern"] and [member="Shakti Sweet"] while using her, so it was nice to introduce her to a...

It's been a trend for a while. If a major faction isn't well liked by enough other MFs, you get invasions with a "This is the story deal with it" attitude. I don't know how far back it's been, but I have seen it happen three times personally. The Dominion, The Jen'ari, and The UCM. It always...

Removing all progression rules is killing us. Writers are leaving Chaos faster than joining. My theory is because there's not much variety left to write for anymore. Now you either join a Major Faction and clique up; do doms; invasions etc. Or you write one off's or private threads. Gone are...

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Welp, I think I'm doing one of these. So basically I'm getting bored, lying in bed, and trying to think about my writing and how to improve -- as much as I love the *endless* praise by my bestie [member="Krystal Estain"] I don't feel like I'm getting enough feedback from multiple sources. So...

Ludex-Class walker incinerating a hostile fortification with its' plasma flamethrower Source (x) "Welcome back Pilot, bridge cooling reactivated. Ludex A.I transferring control to Pilot." -Genetrix de Infernus [OUT OF CHARACTER INFORMATION] Intent: Create another Walker in the same series of...

Before His Face Was Ruined: Haven't been here long but I thought I'd get some feedback anyway. Orex Mauda.. I like to think of him as an exaggerated reflection of myself. He's an Anakin, but much more cruel. His very soul is torn apart beyond repair due to childhood trauma's (Detailed in...

So after roughly two years of writing as Yuroic, yes there was a couple short breaks during that, he has made Master rank! This is great and loved developing Yuroic as a character during this, seeing him change throughout the two years. Figure since he has reached Master Rank I'd see what...

So, I usually try not to ask for a review on a character until after I've gotten at least a hundred posts with that character down. But given the surprisingly high number of likes this character has gotten since her debut (Which caught me completely by surprise, tbh) I have decided to open up a...

So, been roleplaying as this character for a while now, and I'd like to know how I am doing with her, whether she's a compelling character, what could use improving, are her scenes written well, etc.