feedback

It's been roughly six months since I created this character, and I thought now would be a good time to get some feedback. :)

So yeah I had one of these a while back, and got a ton of good advice, now I really would like to now if I improved as a writer, and if Abyss improved as a character. Something that always made me feel bad on chaos was that as none native speaker my grammar, my spelling and especially the...

As my first character, Dax is approaching 1000 posts (yay!) I was looking for some feeback regarding him as a charcter, and me as a writer. So yeah hit me with it! Also, I realize some of my posts are unduly short, but I find that's because I want to give the other writer a chance to respond...

Let me begin by stating that I know my history on this site, along with my behavior is one of a touchy subject. I understand that that alone may be the cause as to why my ideas (while sound), do not gain the traction they need; coupled with my constant jumping from idea to idea. I have in...

http://starwarsrp.net/topic/96548-hi-my-name-is-jamic-rp-profile/#entry1401363 Please could some of you have a look over my character and give me some feedback

Hey there! To be entirely honest, I feel really comfortable writing this character and it's been a good since time since my return. I've made roleplay a big part of my life once more and considering Chaos was a pretty great place for Roleplay before my departure, I decided to come back. I've...

So I'm curious as to what any of you guys or gals have seen in Celiana that you love, hate, or would offer advice on...Wanna write a great character and constructive critique is key! For those of you I've RP'ed with I'm especially keen to hear what you peeps have to say... Thanks Loves! <(^.^)>

So I'm curious as to what any of you guys or gals have seen in Celiana that you love, hate, or would offer advice on...Wanna write a great character and constructive critique is key! For those of you I've RP'ed with I'm especially keen to hear what you peeps have to say... Thanks Loves! <(^.^)>

First and foremost I wish to state that this is my opinion this is not meant in anyway to offend anybody or to criticise any judgement. Also if you decide to take this post down I understand your decision I just wanted to get my voice out. I believe this whole drama could have easily been...

Hello! I'm creating a new character (again). I'd like a little input/inspiration/ideas from anyone to put into my character. Current ideas: A New Republic Special forces soldier (NFU) Human Corellian Strengths: Creative, in shape, resourceful, resilient to the point of stubborn. Weaknesses...

For the past few weeks, I've been seeing ALLOT of people complain about stuff like Mimban, the Black Tie Syndicate and The Mandalorian Empire. But the biggest complaint I had heard so far is about the whole ordeal of the Galactic Alliance attacking Coruscant. And I am here to say, I fully...

Hi. I'm Jay and I'm not a Staffer. Nope. I'm just a curious little kitty. So, and thusly... Give me Feedback on the New Invasions! I say 'new' because we had a rule change recently. Now Invasions are judged for good teamwork and polite play. Rather than just who has the biggest stick and can...

Everybody manages their Sub-Forums differently. Some people use Announcements, News articles, and even the old Mass PM function. Some people just throw everything into a single "OOC" sub-forum and call it good. Indeed. Some people archive their faction discussions when they are over. Quick and...

Some spammer started posting to my topic: http://starwarsrp.net/topic/87595-introductions/?p=1283156

So In case you didn't know fatty is currently limited to the use of a keyboard-less tablet, and this is extremely frustrating for me. In effect, I am currently incapable of writing effective IC posts without wanting to tear off my own head. That has not stopped me from reading or wanting to...

I wang to offer a minor change. It would not be difficult at all, as during my time running my site recently, I have done the same easily - from a phone. The RPJ, Founder, and CJ all show more or less the same color. I recommend a change of at minimum of one. When I, as said a Vet to the...

Open Threads. Often hailed as the starting point for any good RP career. Also known for getting your character ganked and spawn-killed by Bounty Hunters. Lol. So, love em' or hate em'. Erry'body has done an Open Thread. But what's your opinion really? Give me some feedback on Open Threads in...

The Looking For Group forum is a mostly-new addition to the Chaos top page. So I was wondering how it was going for you guys and gals? Like it? Hate it? Never use it? Give me feedback here. Thanks! :D *this is not a Staff related topic*

Just wanted to note that there is an edit necessary in the rules. http://starwarsrp.net/page/articles.html/_/the-factory/salvaging-rules-r41 Within these, it clearly states, more than once, that the salvaging of an older submission negates dev thread - as they count towards it. After...

Hello, I am quitting the Chaos Star Wars RP forum, I do not feel I'm getting much interaction with any members on the forum. Only had two NPC characters approved by the respectful dedicated staff that took the effort and time. On the note of RP, it died down very quickly and I understand other...