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A lot of Chaos characters are humans or near-humans. I think so, especially with some of the more experienced rpers, that this happens because humans have more images and gifs than aliens. I've tried to be diverse and include as much non-human characters as possible, with at this point, 7...

Planets: Commenor (Capital World) Gyndine Talasea Cato Neimoidia Cyrillia Yutan Attanox Sev Tok Tarhassan Belasco Mek Va Uil Surron Founded: 16-September 2016 Members: 51 Description: The Commenor Systems Alliance first started out as an dream, a galaxy not so heavily polluted in war...

I've seen the evolution of Canon Companies since we brought them into fruition at the birth of the board. There are many strong opinions on the matter and we kept them because of the nostalgia factor. However, personally, reviewing the rules and regulations with canon companies, why bother...

I know this runs along the same vein as "Do you think it is worth tiering up your company?", but i wanted to do an opinion poll on companies and how they work right now. What changes, incentives, or suggestions do you have for how Companies Tier Up and work? I love brainstorming sessions, and...

Or are you more apt to just tier up until tier 3 and stay there? ( you can build ships beyond 1000m and mass produce at this level) We are in the process of revamping the Factory due to no dev and such, and in that companies have come into the spotlight. The bulk of the feedback i've...

I often wonder if we lack in strong leaders, if we're seeing a new trend of people shying away from factions, if a lot of the concepts have 'already been done', if we're 'in between eras' with a lot of the Major Factions out of play right now, or if our expectations for factions are too high...

Greetings chaos! I was hoping to see what the other writers of Chaos think of Tyluko Dubykee. I have only been a member for a few short months and Tyluko is my only character so far, but he is something that I have taken great pride in and is someone I would like to improve, since he is my...

February 19, 2017 Blarghity Blargh Blargh-Today at 6:18 PM Can I ask your advice? Its not Chaos tech related or anything specific that staff can answer. More something in your wheelhouse whenever you have the time.(edited) Tefka sup Blarghity Blargh Blargh When your interviewing for an...

Carlyle Rausgeber is my first character on chaos, and one whom is beloved to me. I think I write him fairly well, but that could also be the Dunning Kruger effect in action. After recently having dropped and found muse with Carlyle. I would like to hear any feedback you guys have for the man...

Ok so I'm needing to mix things up a bit with story ideas for my main Celiana. So here's what I got for ideas maybe....I'll probably need to have a few victims *ahem* Volunteers, yeah that's what i meant to help out with these. Ideas are as follows... 1 Stop blowing holes in my ship! In this...

Hi there. It's almost a year since I first joined Chaos now, and I've done a lot in that time. However, I've been finding that, say...about 85% of the stuff I do on chaos is OOC. While a lot of that is obviously due to being a CJ, I feel like I'm neglecting my character. I mean, when I picture...

Self explanatory. Been about a year, figured I'm due. Here's some threads. Peruse, and tell me what you think of the Kitty-Jedi. Training Related Threads To Meet a Knight Further Trainings Circle of Protection Action/Adventure Threads Lost in the Dark Drama(?) The Day the World Fell Apart...

Hello all, I've been writing with you guys for a little under a month but I have quiet a few threads out and I wanted some feedback on my writing, what I could do better, what I could add, and some advice for my character in general. ANy advice and feedback would be appreciated.

Well it's been at least 6 months since i have joined this wonderful community and so i feel that i am way overdue for this. I haven't rped that much with Jakkor for now and this is a first character that i have had for months so i am open to critique and or any advice i can get,and perhaps ways...

It's been roughly six months since I created this character, and I thought now would be a good time to get some feedback. :)

So yeah I had one of these a while back, and got a ton of good advice, now I really would like to now if I improved as a writer, and if Abyss improved as a character. Something that always made me feel bad on chaos was that as none native speaker my grammar, my spelling and especially the...

As my first character, Dax is approaching 1000 posts (yay!) I was looking for some feeback regarding him as a charcter, and me as a writer. So yeah hit me with it! Also, I realize some of my posts are unduly short, but I find that's because I want to give the other writer a chance to respond...

Let me begin by stating that I know my history on this site, along with my behavior is one of a touchy subject. I understand that that alone may be the cause as to why my ideas (while sound), do not gain the traction they need; coupled with my constant jumping from idea to idea. I have in...

http://starwarsrp.net/topic/96548-hi-my-name-is-jamic-rp-profile/#entry1401363 Please could some of you have a look over my character and give me some feedback

Hey there! To be entirely honest, I feel really comfortable writing this character and it's been a good since time since my return. I've made roleplay a big part of my life once more and considering Chaos was a pretty great place for Roleplay before my departure, I decided to come back. I've...