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I often wonder if we lack in strong leaders, if we're seeing a new trend of people shying away from factions, if a lot of the concepts have 'already been done', if we're 'in between eras' with a lot of the Major Factions out of play right now, or if our expectations for factions are too high...

Greetings chaos! I was hoping to see what the other writers of Chaos think of Tyluko Dubykee. I have only been a member for a few short months and Tyluko is my only character so far, but he is something that I have taken great pride in and is someone I would like to improve, since he is my...

February 19, 2017 Blarghity Blargh Blargh-Today at 6:18 PM Can I ask your advice? Its not Chaos tech related or anything specific that staff can answer. More something in your wheelhouse whenever you have the time.(edited) Tefka sup Blarghity Blargh Blargh When your interviewing for an...

Carlyle Rausgeber is my first character on chaos, and one whom is beloved to me. I think I write him fairly well, but that could also be the Dunning Kruger effect in action. After recently having dropped and found muse with Carlyle. I would like to hear any feedback you guys have for the man...

Ok so I'm needing to mix things up a bit with story ideas for my main Celiana. So here's what I got for ideas maybe....I'll probably need to have a few victims *ahem* Volunteers, yeah that's what i meant to help out with these. Ideas are as follows... 1 Stop blowing holes in my ship! In this...

Hi there. It's almost a year since I first joined Chaos now, and I've done a lot in that time. However, I've been finding that, say...about 85% of the stuff I do on chaos is OOC. While a lot of that is obviously due to being a CJ, I feel like I'm neglecting my character. I mean, when I picture...

Self explanatory. Been about a year, figured I'm due. Here's some threads. Peruse, and tell me what you think of the Kitty-Jedi. Training Related Threads To Meet a Knight Further Trainings Circle of Protection Action/Adventure Threads Lost in the Dark Drama(?) The Day the World Fell Apart...

Hello all, I've been writing with you guys for a little under a month but I have quiet a few threads out and I wanted some feedback on my writing, what I could do better, what I could add, and some advice for my character in general. ANy advice and feedback would be appreciated.

Well it's been at least 6 months since i have joined this wonderful community and so i feel that i am way overdue for this. I haven't rped that much with Jakkor for now and this is a first character that i have had for months so i am open to critique and or any advice i can get,and perhaps ways...

It's been roughly six months since I created this character, and I thought now would be a good time to get some feedback. :)

So yeah I had one of these a while back, and got a ton of good advice, now I really would like to now if I improved as a writer, and if Abyss improved as a character. Something that always made me feel bad on chaos was that as none native speaker my grammar, my spelling and especially the...

As my first character, Dax is approaching 1000 posts (yay!) I was looking for some feeback regarding him as a charcter, and me as a writer. So yeah hit me with it! Also, I realize some of my posts are unduly short, but I find that's because I want to give the other writer a chance to respond...

Let me begin by stating that I know my history on this site, along with my behavior is one of a touchy subject. I understand that that alone may be the cause as to why my ideas (while sound), do not gain the traction they need; coupled with my constant jumping from idea to idea. I have in...

http://starwarsrp.net/topic/96548-hi-my-name-is-jamic-rp-profile/#entry1401363 Please could some of you have a look over my character and give me some feedback

Hey there! To be entirely honest, I feel really comfortable writing this character and it's been a good since time since my return. I've made roleplay a big part of my life once more and considering Chaos was a pretty great place for Roleplay before my departure, I decided to come back. I've...

So I'm curious as to what any of you guys or gals have seen in Celiana that you love, hate, or would offer advice on...Wanna write a great character and constructive critique is key! For those of you I've RP'ed with I'm especially keen to hear what you peeps have to say... Thanks Loves! <(^.^)>

So I'm curious as to what any of you guys or gals have seen in Celiana that you love, hate, or would offer advice on...Wanna write a great character and constructive critique is key! For those of you I've RP'ed with I'm especially keen to hear what you peeps have to say... Thanks Loves! <(^.^)>

First and foremost I wish to state that this is my opinion this is not meant in anyway to offend anybody or to criticise any judgement. Also if you decide to take this post down I understand your decision I just wanted to get my voice out. I believe this whole drama could have easily been...

Hello! I'm creating a new character (again). I'd like a little input/inspiration/ideas from anyone to put into my character. Current ideas: A New Republic Special forces soldier (NFU) Human Corellian Strengths: Creative, in shape, resourceful, resilient to the point of stubborn. Weaknesses...

For the past few weeks, I've been seeing ALLOT of people complain about stuff like Mimban, the Black Tie Syndicate and The Mandalorian Empire. But the biggest complaint I had heard so far is about the whole ordeal of the Galactic Alliance attacking Coruscant. And I am here to say, I fully...