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Welp, I think I'm doing one of these. So basically I'm getting bored, lying in bed, and trying to think about my writing and how to improve -- as much as I love the *endless* praise by my bestie [member="Krystal Estain"] I don't feel like I'm getting enough feedback from multiple sources. So...

Ludex-Class walker incinerating a hostile fortification with its' plasma flamethrower Source (x) "Welcome back Pilot, bridge cooling reactivated. Ludex A.I transferring control to Pilot." -Genetrix de Infernus [OUT OF CHARACTER INFORMATION] Intent: Create another Walker in the same series of...

Before His Face Was Ruined: Haven't been here long but I thought I'd get some feedback anyway. Orex Mauda.. I like to think of him as an exaggerated reflection of myself. He's an Anakin, but much more cruel. His very soul is torn apart beyond repair due to childhood trauma's (Detailed in...

So after roughly two years of writing as Yuroic, yes there was a couple short breaks during that, he has made Master rank! This is great and loved developing Yuroic as a character during this, seeing him change throughout the two years. Figure since he has reached Master Rank I'd see what...

So, I usually try not to ask for a review on a character until after I've gotten at least a hundred posts with that character down. But given the surprisingly high number of likes this character has gotten since her debut (Which caught me completely by surprise, tbh) I have decided to open up a...

So, been roleplaying as this character for a while now, and I'd like to know how I am doing with her, whether she's a compelling character, what could use improving, are her scenes written well, etc.

So, I've reached 3k posts after nearly two years of writing this character. Personally, I feel as if he's grown a lot, just as I have. But I also wanna know what you guys think of him. Things I need to improve, flesh out more, ideas for what I could do with him next, or even if you just like...

It's been a good 6 months since the last time I asked for feedback, and I think enough time has passed for an evaluation on both my character [member="Darth Carnifex"] and myself as a writer. Especially because so many new faces have joined the site. So have at it, fam.

Good day all. As you are all aware we are constantly looking to fine tune the way rules, and especially Invasions work here at SWRP. Just over a year and a half ago a significant change was made to invasions and how they were judged. Rather than judging based on duels or NPCs they were instead...

It's not finished, I know. But I'm just curious as to what people think of my bio so far, if it's too much, too little, what I should add/remove...that type of stuff. If you know Garrus from ME, that's who I'm trying to 'recreate.' Let me know if the humor I put in, yeah I'm bad at humor, but...

So another char. It's been very long since I tried my hand at a Sith. I'm trying to write Ari as less of a marauder and more a cold, Calculating Sith. Much like a cross between Palpatine and Dooku. With a little Darth Plageuis in the mix. How am I doing?

Hey everyone, Currently, the Factory is in an active discussion over the an increasing concern when it comes to ships. I know there are several aspects of Ships itself that is a pain point, but in this specific case, I really wanted to get some crowd sourcing ideas because I am stumped and my...

The invasion of Charros IV marks the end of the first stage in Irina's story, which has set up what the character will become following her apparent death aboard the Firedrake. For those of you who have read any posts for the character, what are your thoughts?

OUT OF CHARACTER INFORMATION Intent: To develop an advanced warship for the Shrouded (And write a good story about it) Image Source: ModDB Canon Link: N/A Restricted Missions: None Primary Source: N/A PRODUCTION INFORMATION Manufacturer: Developed by the Wolfe Design Bureau / Produced by the...

Hello. If you have any suggestions/feedback for the faction, post them here.

Today marks the one year anniversary of me joining this community. A year of writing with the greatest folks around, my boys and girls in the First Order. Before I jump into the whole critique thing, I think it prudent to thank the people who gave me this start on this site, and whom I have come...

Figured as it was roughly a year since I last sought some feedback out on my character, I would ask to see what anyone thought of her

Hey guys, almost 10 months ago I started the character of Thomas Kyrel, who then later became Kyrel Ren a servant of the Dark Side and devout follower of the Supreme Leader of the First Order. Throughout his time he has witnessed the outbreak of the Black Wing Virus within the Red Nebula. Aided...

How are we doing? How are you doing? We used to do these Critique threads way back in the day to get honest feedback from the community on how we can improve our jobs. Chaos has been going on for a fairly long time now, and I'm very proud of how far we've come. So let us know! Good or bad...