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So, I've reached 3k posts after nearly two years of writing this character. Personally, I feel as if he's grown a lot, just as I have. But I also wanna know what you guys think of him. Things I need to improve, flesh out more, ideas for what I could do with him next, or even if you just like...

It's been a good 6 months since the last time I asked for feedback, and I think enough time has passed for an evaluation on both my character [member="Darth Carnifex"] and myself as a writer. Especially because so many new faces have joined the site. So have at it, fam.

Good day all. As you are all aware we are constantly looking to fine tune the way rules, and especially Invasions work here at SWRP. Just over a year and a half ago a significant change was made to invasions and how they were judged. Rather than judging based on duels or NPCs they were instead...

It's not finished, I know. But I'm just curious as to what people think of my bio so far, if it's too much, too little, what I should add/remove...that type of stuff. If you know Garrus from ME, that's who I'm trying to 'recreate.' Let me know if the humor I put in, yeah I'm bad at humor, but...

So another char. It's been very long since I tried my hand at a Sith. I'm trying to write Ari as less of a marauder and more a cold, Calculating Sith. Much like a cross between Palpatine and Dooku. With a little Darth Plageuis in the mix. How am I doing?

Hey everyone, Currently, the Factory is in an active discussion over the an increasing concern when it comes to ships. I know there are several aspects of Ships itself that is a pain point, but in this specific case, I really wanted to get some crowd sourcing ideas because I am stumped and my...

The invasion of Charros IV marks the end of the first stage in Irina's story, which has set up what the character will become following her apparent death aboard the Firedrake. For those of you who have read any posts for the character, what are your thoughts?

OUT OF CHARACTER INFORMATION Intent: To develop an advanced warship for the Shrouded (And write a good story about it) Image Source: ModDB Canon Link: N/A Restricted Missions: None Primary Source: N/A PRODUCTION INFORMATION Manufacturer: Developed by the Wolfe Design Bureau / Produced by the...

Hello. If you have any suggestions/feedback for the faction, post them here.

Today marks the one year anniversary of me joining this community. A year of writing with the greatest folks around, my boys and girls in the First Order. Before I jump into the whole critique thing, I think it prudent to thank the people who gave me this start on this site, and whom I have come...

Figured as it was roughly a year since I last sought some feedback out on my character, I would ask to see what anyone thought of her

Hey guys, almost 10 months ago I started the character of Thomas Kyrel, who then later became Kyrel Ren a servant of the Dark Side and devout follower of the Supreme Leader of the First Order. Throughout his time he has witnessed the outbreak of the Black Wing Virus within the Red Nebula. Aided...

How are we doing? How are you doing? We used to do these Critique threads way back in the day to get honest feedback from the community on how we can improve our jobs. Chaos has been going on for a fairly long time now, and I'm very proud of how far we've come. So let us know! Good or bad...

....Chaos has had a tumultuous relationship with drama. We love it We hate it We love to hate it We hate to love it. How do you make amends with drama? Do you enjoy being a centerpiece of it? Do you enjoy watching it? Do you hate it and want to ban it forever? Or do you believe a nice...

What was fun about it? What memories do you specifically recall that made that time memorable? What roleplays, what stuff was going on, what drama, etc, etc. Let's throw don on some nostalgia today and chat about the yesterdays of Chaos.

Alright, so, I've only done one of these before, but, I thought it might be time to do another one at last. I'm currently at a set of crossroads with Lykos, readying to start off a new arc for him, and, well, rather than risking continuing writing him as I have been and not correcting any huge...

Mother of Dragons So after a while of debating it i finally decided to get some original art of my character Scheherazade...otherwise known as 'Cinder'. And after finding an artist to draw her we had to figure out...what does she even look like? And what you see now is the result i am...

Calder's been around for a while, though normally he's just been another of my alt accounts that I forget about or can't write out in the way I want to. Thankfully, the big fluffy has taken most of my attention and I've been having fun writing out both his inner turmoil and old wisdom (Well...

So I have been writing Myles Davorak for about two months now and I just wanted to get some opinions on the writing? This character is different than the ones I have made in the past with other RP channels. Other characters I have made were based on myself and I found that boring. With Myles I...