First Order Pre-Factory Workshop

[Tanomas Graf]

No.

 

[Cyrus Tregessar]

Just remember that any 2200+ ship will require 30 posts of dev with at least 3 writers.

Also i brought along some tech from the OS that might be worth looking at. The Bastion System in particular goes well on larger ships with a lot of point defense weapons.

 

[Valessia Brentioch]

B O L T​

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Image Source: Fractal Sponge (x)
Affiliation: First Order
Manufacturer: FOCIE (First Order Corps of Imperial Engineers)
Model: FIWS Bolt-class
Modularity: Yes

• 
  Defenses
  
• 
  Engines
  
• 
  Cargo Capacity
  

Production: Mass-Produced
Material: Durasteel hull
Classification: Picket Corvette

Length: 75m
Height: 15m
Width: 25m

Armament: Rating - 6
6 Rapid,Point Defense Cannons
4 Ion Cannons
4 Quad Lasers
2 Intruder Missile Launchers

Defenses: Rating - 5
Light Warship Shielding

Hangar: 0 Squadrons

Special Features: Listed as;

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Reserved - WIP

Maneuverability Rating: 6
Speed Rating: 7

Hyperdrive Class: 1

Strengths:
[+] Under 12 Parsecs: The Bolt is fast, very fast - and she can turn on a dime.


[+] Han Shot First: She doesn’t believe in hokey religions, she believes in skill and in taking the first shot. The Bolt will not hesitate to unleash a barrage of fire on her enemies. Built to go into dogfighting mode, the Bolt can handle herself against pesky starfighters - and keep capital vessels on the edge.

Weaknesses:
[-] Lightweight: Lightly armored, and shielded the Bolt is vulnerable to being one-hit wonders or being shot down in one hit from enemy guns.

[-] Forward Facing: Her guns are fixed, they only face forward and thus she has to be facing her enemy in order to fire at them. This requires teamwork from her crew otherwise she’s completely done for.

[-] Nope, Nope, Nope: The Bolt while meant to keep capital ship’s busy she’s not meant to take them on head on. She’s of best use when in accompaniment of her larger sister vessels such as the Inflictor-class or the IDX. Or diverting fighters away with her sister the Dagger-class. If she sees she’s alone in a tango with a capital vessel, her best bet is to retreat.

[-] The Garbage Will Do!: She is produced in massive quantities, thus leaving her more vulnerable to wear and tear. She’ll need to come in for maintenance and repair a lot more often than other vessels. Either that or her crews will just have to figure out how to patch her up in between repair times.

Description: A last minute bid from Cloud City Imperial Shipworks landed them the contract to produce the Bolt. Originally designed by Primo Victorian Shipwright and Design, the design was sold to Cloud City on the condition that Primo Victorian can withdraw the rights at any time. For now, that doesn’t seem necessary, but the idea of the

Bolt would be a vessel that was capable of fighting off larger ships, aid her sisters and turn on a coin as it were. Due to her speed and maneuverability, it was agreed that the Bolt would require a brilliant pilot and thus those wishing to pilot her from the Navy are sent to train with the Starfighters. Keeping aware that the bolt is seventy-five meters and not say, twelve.

The Bolt was brought up as a way to increase the Navy’s flexibility, diversity and being able to go, ‘small.’ Admittedly her design is based off an old Corellian freighter, the YT-1300 to be exact. Ms. McBose grew up on Coruscant and hearing many tales about the admired vessel; the Millennium Falcon. Her desire to create one of her own finally came to fruition, unfortunately with Primo Victorian already taxed she was forced to sell the design while retaining the rights.

Which. She has done all of her designs, regardless - still, this one, this one holds a special place in her heart. The Bolt was sponsored by the Tarkin Naval Foundation in cooperation with the Bespin Imperial Society.

Development Thread: No

Intent: To create a smaller more maneuverable ship for the First Imperial Navy. Diversifying our fleets and giving captains another option to choose from.

Who Can Use This: First Order

Primary Source: N/A

 

[Tanomas Graf]

This flagship design is confidential until the Development Team reaches an accord.

 

[William Kerkov Sr]

[member="Tanomas Graf"]


*Redacted*

 

[Tanomas Graf]

REDACTED

 

[William Kerkov Sr]

[member="Tanomas Graf"]

I'll admit my last response wasn't as constructive as it should have been. I'll give you now a much more helpful thought on your ship. First we'll start off technically.

Right off the bat it's 4x too big. The Chaos length limit is 5,000 meters, correct me if I am wrong, and that is only for flagships. The weapons, although I don't remember the specific rules are far out of the limit for flagships as well. The hangar carries far too much to be allowed, but the speed, maneuverability, and defenses seem alright.

Now, the First Order already has a flagship being worked on by @Evangiline Omar, although I do not know if it is still being worked on or if it has been flat out abandoned. If you really want, you can help with that project if you ask [member="Natasi Fortan"], or again, after asking our Faction Owner, replace that project with this, although heavily nerfed. Otherwise, I like the history and it's an interesting idea for having an Executer esque flagship.

 

[Natasi Fortan]

That's a thing of beauty, it's just too bad we can't use it. But I would like to have an actual flagship at some point. Not for the Grand Moff, necessarily, but for the faction.

 

[RIP Carlyle Rausgeber]

just too bad we can't use it.

Have we tried getting down onto our knees and begging yet? I think we could collectively whinge the mods here into submission.

 

[Cyrus Tregessar]

[member="Tanomas Graf"]

Please do check out the following tech. On the FO Resurgent in particular it might fit quite well.

• Mk 26 'HARM' Guided Missile Weapon System
• 'Bastion' Advanced Fighter/Missile Defense System
• 240mm/83 Mk 74 Hypervelocity Cannon
• Mk 50 Mod 1 'Mauler' Turbolaser Turret

Bastion and a few of the 74's in particular.

I will also note that for a 20/20 speed/maneuver you've got the same Arm, Def, and smaller Hanger than the IDX. Granted, Arm and Def are related to class but I think you can safely buff it. Additionally, especially for larger ships like this don't feel too confined by gun math. It's all pretty relative anyway at this point so a few hundred 'points' over is no big deal if it makes for a better look.

[member="Valessia Brentioch"]

For a lightly armed, lightly defended small ship like the Bolt you can probably go quite a bit faster. Maybe down to a 4 in speed if you leave the maneuverability as is, or down one on each point. You could potentially make it smaller too, I figure.

 

[Doc]

FO-01M Medic Storm trooper Armor

Image Source: http://img01.deviantart.net/2eee/i/2013/109/1/c/armour_suit_design_of_the_royal_army_medical_corps_by_robbiemcsweeney-d6295p7.jpg
Intent: To provided Frist order front line medics with an adaptable study armor more suited to their role on the battlefield.
Development Thread:
Manufacturer: The First Order
Model: FO-01M Medic Stormtrooper Armor
Modularity: 4 interchangeable specialty med packs { ie Burns Trauma, Cold injuries, Heat injury, and muti system trama.]
Production: MINOR (First Order PCs and NPCs only)
Material:
Plastoid
Duraplast

Classification: Multi-purpose

Weight: 14kg

Special Features: Medical backpack

Armour Componants:
Compression Body Glove
Energy Dispersing Surface
Manual Environmental Regulation
Reinforced Duraplast Forearm Segments
Environmental Seal Functionality
IFF circuitry for Indenification
Security Resonator
Genetic Coding Activation
Magnetic Weapon Holsters

Helmet Componants:
Multi-Frequency Target and Acquisition System (HUD, Friend/Foe Designation)
Self-preserving Oxygen Filters and Reserve Tank (2 hours)
Automatic Polarising and Anti-Flash Blinding Lenses.
Holographic Vision Processors. (Thermal/Nightvision/Ultraviolet/Infrared)
Encrypter Internal Comlink with Three-Phase Sonic Filter
Vocoder for audio output.
Audio and Video Recorders
Cooling and Atmospheric Temperature Control System
Indagrated med scanners
Utility Components:
Utility Belt equipped with:
High Tension Wire
Grappling Hooks
Spare Power Packs
Ion Flares
Energy Rations
Encrypted Anti-Jamming C1 Military Comm Link
Water Packs
Medpacs
Coded Thermal Detonator
FXXXX Medical back pack (WIP)


Description:

Were as most other Stormtrooper armor is designed for battle, this variant is designed to provide protection, and carry the necessary equipment for combat medic/Corpsman to function at peak efficiency.. Allowing for quick assessment and treatment/ stabilization the wounded trooper. So that trooper can be treated in the field and remain in the fight or if necessary the armor model come complete with a medical back pack that houses among other tool and equipment portable repulsor-stretcher with 150 kilogram weight limit for medevacing trooper to higher level medical facilities. Other the the appearance the biggest difference between this and base model Stormtrooper armor is weight due the back pack and other components this armor weighs nearly twice that of the base armor.




[member="Natasi Fortan"]

 

[Doc]

Medical backpack

Image Source: http://vignette2.wik...CM-598_Medical_
Backpack.jpg/revision/latest?cb=20090422214511
Intent: To create a medical backpack for Frist order combat medics/Corpsman { specifically me at the moment)
Development Thread: N/A/?
Manufacturer: The Frist Order
Model:FMB-01
Affiliation: Frist order
Modularity:Contents changed out to suit different climates/environments
Production:Limited
Strengths: adaptability, built in portable repulsor-stretcher with 150 kilogram weight limit
Weaknesses: can only carry a limit limiter amount of supplies before need to be restocked @ a major medical facility or ship. It also add considerable weight to the armor, and size and shape limites mobility while carrying it.

Description:
A backpack designed to carry medical supplies for first order combat medics/corpsmen While the are semi customizable deepening the environment and expected hazard the troops will be facing, the pack has a limited space and supplies needing to restocked semi frequently, it adds considerable to the armor and due to size and shape somewhat limits the mobility and speed of medic in certain environments.

Each pack contains:

Resource items:
medical datapad- http://starwars.wiki...Medical_datapad
Emergency procedure database x1
portable repulsor-stretcher with 150 kilogram weight limit x1

Cardiac items:
wireless defibrillator x2
cardiovascular monitor x1

Trauma items:
universal plasma fluid sacks x4
heat-insulating blanket x1
resuscitating ventilator x1
vials of injectable bacta and bota x4 ea
injector power cells x2
injector handle and head x3 ea
synthflesh x 6
bacta patches x10
bone stabilizers x8
stim-shots x8
spray splint and bandage x4
flexclamps x10

Anti toxic, anti-venom, and, anti-radiation Items
Various anti-venom, and anti-radiation medicines
Filtration maskx1
adaptors for pressor field generator, and filtration x4 ea
a basic sample analyzer with a few sample vials

General tools
Laser scalpel x3
medicine dispenser(number of each vary with environment and expected hazards.)
antisepticsx 4
sonic scalpel x3
laser cauterizer x4
medical bandage patch- http://starwars.wiki...andage_patchx5



( the contents are a combination of the
http://starwars.wiki...ith_medical_kit
http://starwars.wiki...edical_Backpack
[SIZE=11pt]http://starwars.wiki.../Medpac/Legends [/SIZE]
[member="Natasi Fortan"]

 

[Doc]

I was looking a post from the mandolorian clans and their armor and I saw a few thing I thought we use to upgrade/enhance our stromtrooper below is the list of thing I think would good to add as well a link to thread were I found it.

http://starwarsrp.net/topic/91336-aliitvereen-eukgargam/

Digital Life Support System
Environmental Filter, Rebreather, Oxygen Filtration System, Nutrient/Water Dispenser,
Combat Harness
Grenade Hooks (6)
Ammunition Pouches (4)
Ion Flares (3)
Grappling Hook Launchers (2); High Tension Wire
Combat De-Ionizer, Blast Energy Sinks
Energy Rations, Canteen, Mandalorian Survival Medpak
Anti-Security Blade, EMP Disruptor Stylus, Field Disruptor Overloader, Electronic Lock Breaker, Laser Lockpick
Individual Field Disruptor, Universal Jammer

 

[Tanomas Graf]

Image Source: Here.
Affiliation: The First Order
Manufacturer: The First Order
Model: Victory I-class Star Destroyer
Modularity: No
Production: Mass-Produced
Material: Durasteel hull
Classification: Heavy Cruiser
Length: 900m
Height: 170m
Width: 330m

Armament: 17

• x10 Despoiler-class Quad Turbolasers
  5 port
• 5 starboard

[*]x40 Dual Long Range Turbolasers

• ​10 fore
• 15 port
• 15 starboard

[*]x20 Assault Concussion Missile Launchers

• ​10 port
• 10 starboard
  ​x25 Concussion Missiles per launcher

[*]​x3 Tractor Beam Projectors

• ​3 fore

Defenses:17

• x30 Point Defense Laser Cannons​
  10 port
• 10 starboard
• 10 aft

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[*]​Deflector Shields
[*]Titanium-reinforced Armor
Hangar:

• x1 squadron of TIE/IN Interceptors (12 fighters total)
• x5 Sienar-Jaemus First-Order Atmospheric Assault Lander

Ground Forces:

• x15 All Terrain Scout Transports
• x10 All Terrain Armored Transports

Special Features:

• x3 Hoersch-Kessel Ion Engines
• Class 1 Hyperdrive
• Back-up Class 15 Hyperdrive

Manoeuvrability Rating: 16
Speed Rating: 16
Hyperdrive Class: 1
Minimum Crew: 1,785
Optimum Crew: 5,200
Passengers: 2,040
Cargo Capacity: 8,100 metric tons
Consumables: 4 years

Strengths:

• Heavy Armament: Like other Imperial and First Order vessels, the Victory X-class has an increased amount of turbolasers, permitting it to deal with any enemy threat, be it pirates or an enemy faction.
• Heavy Shielding: Alongside its healthy compliment of turbolasers, this heavy cruiser boasts above-average shields, allowing it to take hits as well as return them.
• Medium Armor: Made out of a rather thick durasteel hull, the ship can withstand an average amount of turbolaser blasts, with some titanium-reinforcement in certain areas like the bridge and the reactor bulge.
• Concussion Missiles: Armed with numerous launchers and stockpiles of warheads, the Victory X-class can pierce ray shields of enemy shields, but still being destroyed by standard particle shields.

Weaknesses:

• Lack of Fighters: Carrying only one squadron of TIE Fighters, the Victory X-class lacks bomber support, allowing enemy fighters to exploit its blindspots.
• Slow: Like other ships of the Order's arsenal, the Victory X-class has a slow speed and maneuverability for a ship of its class.
• Lack of Aft Weaponry: This cruiser only has 10 point defense laser cannons covering its stern, allowing fighters and capital ships to destroy it from behind,
• Missile Storage: While stored under titanium-reinforced durasteel, the missiles are rather close to their launchers, allowing the entire stockpile to explode if the launcher is hit the right way.
  

Description: With the continued usage of old Imperial models such as the Victory I and II destroyers, the First Order felt the need to give the aged ship design a break. After the tested success of the Imperial X-class Star Destroyer, First Order engineers began to design a complete upgrade to the Victory series, the Victory X-class Star Destroyer.

Carrying an impressive amount of turbolasers and concussion missile launchers, the Victory X-class boasts the ability to dispatch enemy ships as a mainline heavy cruiser, being backed up by equally impressive deflector shields. The hull itself is almost fully durasteel, with some parts of the ship such as the missile storage and the bridge being reinforced with titanium.

While magnificient as a fleet escort and cruiser, the Victory X-class still has a few notable weaknesses. The first and foremost being the fact that it can only field one squadron of TIEs at a time due to space being taken up by ground forces, armor, and missile storage. Another flaw is its slow speed and manueverability, which coincides with the lack of weaponry in the stern section, a common problem in Imperial ships that has issues being rectified due to space restrictions.

Though one of the most fatal flaws this ship has is in fact one of its advantages, carrying a missile stockpile for each launcher and reinforced by titanium-durasteel, if the launcher explodes at just the right angle, the entire stockpile can go up in a fiery inferno that could severly damage the ship.

The advantages do outweigh the disadvantages though, making this a deadly adversary to face in large numbers on the battlefield. May the First Order us it to its full destructive potential.

Development Thread: If necessary
Intent: To create a mainline heavy cruiser for the First Order's Navy
Who Can Use This: The First Order

[member="Cyrus Tregessar"] [member="Valessia Brentioch"]

 

[Cyrus Tregessar]

[member="Tanomas Graf"]

So I don't think it fills a really different role than the Retribution and Inflictor atm. It doesn't necessarily have to, of course. But we've got quite a few big slow heavy gun cruisers. We could use a fast brawler, more long range firepower, Electronic support ships, or something more clever. Again, not something that need affect this sub, just a note for future development.

I personally avoid listing ammo counts in launchers for anything bigger than a freighter. I tend to assume a 900m vessel has literally hundreds of reloads, to be honest. Also given that we've got two cool point defense missile launchers, highly recommended that we use them.

Also you're way under on gun math. Technically it doesn't matter but it helps ships look more menacing. Right now you're at 240 Turbolasers (4 per Enforce, 8 per Despoiler), 20 Heavy Launchers, and 30 PD guns.

You're allowed 400 Turbolasers, and trust me it doesn't cost 160 Turbo's to get a squadron. The basic trade is 2 PD guns per Turbolaser, and 5 Turbolasers per Heavy Warhead.

So as a possible alternative concept for this ship, you might consider the following.

Keep current anti-cap armament as is. Significantly buffing AA armament. Adding in the Bastion system, and reducing production to 'Minor.'

That would make the Victory-X a very capable AA cruiser with a good regular battery as well. Throw in some notes about a Command and Control suite and you've got a respectable backup command ship or small force flagship.

Totally up to you, I'm never going to tell someone how to write a sub, and the above can always wait for a different ship. But that's probably where'd I'd be looking at taking things.

Also as far as strengths and weaknesses go, bear in mind that both 'Slow' for weaknesses and 'Heavy Arm/Heavy Shiedling' is kinda moot when you're running at the standard numbers.

 

[Valessia Brentioch]

S T O R M C L O U D​

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Image Source: Scifi-Meshes // Stormcloud (x) (x)
Affiliation: First Order
Manufacturer: FOCIE (First Order Corp of Imperial Engineers)
Model: FIAC Stormcloud-class
Modularity: Yes

• 
  Armament
  
• 
  Defenses
  
• 
  Mission Specific
  

Production: Minor; First Order
Material:

• 
  Turadium/Durasteel Compound Frame
  
• 
  Quadanium Lined Frame
  
• 
  Transparisteel Viewports w/ Durasteel Shutter Rigs
  
• 
  Turadium Reinforced Alusteel Hull
  

Classification: Heavy Cruiser

Length: 800m
Width: 320m
Height: 140m

Armament: Rating - 16

12 Repeating, Heavy Turbolasers
8 Heavy Quad Turbolasers
16 Repeating, Heavy Quad Turbolasers
32 Ion Cannons
4 Baradium Missile Launchers
16 Flak Cannons
14 Quad Laser Cannons

Defenses: Rating - 16

Reinforced Hull
Standard Warship Shields
EWAR

Hangar: 0

Special Features: Listed as;
TBD - WIP

Maneuverability Rating: 14
Speed Rating: 14
Hyperdrive Class: 2

Strengths:
[+] Fire Everything!: The Stormcloud sends her regards, built to be the IDX’s little sister. Her repeating turbolasers are meant to unleash a torrent of heavy firepower at a steady rate. Her broadside power complements that of the IDX and perhaps most of the fleet.

[+] Ampful Nacelles: The Stormcloud is just a little faster than the average heavy cruiser, although this upkeep in speed came at a price. Because she is just a little bit faster, the Stormcloud is good to surge and support First Order lines while in the thick of battle.

Weaknesses:
[-] Given’er All She’s Got: As the Stormcloud has been built to go faster than your average heavy cruiser, this means she has more engines than them as well. This leads to her having to be in need of repair more often than they do, and the possibility of simply overheating a lot more frequently than your average heavy cruiser.

[-] Nova Squadron: She has no squadrons available, not even a shuttle to her name. Where a hangar would be is where her engines are housed. Reliant on carriers and vessels who have squadrons to run defensive screens, the Stormcloud is left vulnerable to attack craft.

[-] To Be or Not To Be: There is one fatal flaw in her armor her armor is thinnest where her exhaust is and as the engines take up a lot of space. All it takes is two hits from missiles or torpedoes to either decimate her or render inoperable for a severe length of time.

[-] All Good Things: And even for the Stormcloud, her end could be met if her missile storages are hit, given the amount of destruction baradium missiles can cause. The Stormcloud would not be able to weather that storm, and would succumb to her severe wound almost instantly.

Description:
TBD - WIP

Development Thread: If Necessary

Intent: To create an assault cruiser worthy of the First Imperial Navy. To diversify our fleets and give captains / admirals another choice of ship.

Who Can Use This: First Order

Primary Source: N/A

 

[Asharad Graush]

First Order Chromium Officers Armour​

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Image Source: http://pre15.deviantart.net/e0af/th/pre/i/2015/349/8/8/captain_phasma___digital_3d_model_and_render_by_juanmartingf-d9ka13c.jpg
Intent: To differentiate the Elite Officers of the First Order's White Wolves Regiment from other standard stormtrooper units.
Development Thread: If necessary
Manufacturer: Vitiate
Model: First Order Chromium Wolf Officers Armour
Affiliation: First Order Stormtrooper Commissioned Officers
Modularity: N/A
Production: Limited
Material: Chromium, Reinforced Duraplast
Classification: Multipurpose
Weight: 15kg
Quality: 7
Special Features:
(Helmet)

• Multi-Frequency Target and Acquisition System (HUD, Friend / Foe Designation)
• Self-Preserving Oxygen Filters and Reserve Tank (2 hours)
• Automatic Polarising and Anti-Flash Blinding Lenses
• Holographic Vision Processors (Thermal, Night vision, Infrared)
• Encrypted Internal Comlink with Three Phase Sonic Filter
• Vocoder for Audio Output
• Audio and Video Recorders
• Cooling and Atmospheric Temperature Control System

(Armour)

• Heat Resistant Compressed Body Glove
• Energy Dispersing Surface
• Manual Environmental Regulation
• Environmental Seal Functionality
• IFF Circuitry for Identification
• Security Resonator
• Genetic Coding Activation
• Magnetic Weapon Holsters

(Utiltiy Belt)

• High Tension Wire
• Grappling Hooks
• Spare Power Packs
• Ion Flares
• Energy Rations
• Encrypted Anti-Jamming C1 Military ComLink
• Water Packs
• Coded Thermal Detonator

Strengths:

• Resistances: Energy dispersing plates, duraplast, and chromium makes for a strong defense against energy based weapons.
• Duraplast: Defense against EMPs and Ion technology. Can take medium slugs and a light laser cannon, once in the front, once in the back.
• Protects against radiation.

Weaknesses:

• Everything Breaks: It's armour, it'll break down eventually.
• Weight: Heavier than the standard Stormtrooper armour.

Description: The White Wolves are an elite unit of Stormtroopers. From the conception of the First Order's Stormtrooper Corps, to the combat on Zarnathea and Castameer, the First Order's White Wolves have been on the front lines almost since the beginning of the Order. They have ventured through dangerous territory and emerged on the other side relatively unscathed. The unit's Officers are typically found at the front, rather than the back of the unit, their ability at finding themselves in the thick of the battle unparrelled by any other Stormtrooper Unit. They deserved an armour that would allow them to survive better, if not, put them even at a higher risk.

The chromium finish on the armour blocks out low levels of radiation, a component that should be included in all forms of Stormtrooper armour, though chances were it'd come at a later date. The layer after that is the reinforced duraplast. Capable of blocking a single lightsabre strike on any given body part or plate, it excels at protecting against glancing strikes from lightsabres, though with the dispersing energy plates, any given plate can survive one direct slash, or three glancing strikes before being rendered useless. And finally, underneath all of the plates and metal is the heat resistant body glove. It provides light protection against blasters, and has more chances of being melted into the flesh rather than catching aflame.
Primary Source: FO-01 Stormtrooper Armour

 

[Atlas Kane]

 

[Cyrus Tregessar]

[member="Valessia Brentioch"]

You can definitely put more guns on there, especially some of the proprietary stuff we've got, which is all pretty neat.

The main thing I would do is add a few of those 8-count high precision turbo's of Popo's, and then pack on pile of long-range turbolasers. Point defense recommend buffing with Mk26 HARMs or Pursuits, and since it's minor production it can fit the Bastion with no trouble. That would give the craft a very strong anti-fighter and anti-warhead defense at no extra cost.

 

[Valessia Brentioch]

[member="Cyrus Tregessar"]

I'm already taxed at 400 capital guns. PM me your exact suggestions for the Stormcloud. I probably won't have her fluff pieces completed until later tonight.