Invasion STANDOFF | Bryn'adûl Invasion of SJC held Lexrul, Ruusan, Sev Tok & Shador

[Tathra Khaeus]

Laertia Io I don't think its particularly necessary.

 

[Mig Gred]

Rurik Fel Hope you don't mind the slight hotheadedness. Thought it'd be interesting, plus a slight IC history of seeing similar things to bombardment handled poorly.

 

[Dagon Kaze]

Sylok'Vanari

Ayyy, I saw you seemed to not have direct opposition as of yet (unless I am wrong) so I tagged you in my last post as Dagon and Yula Perl are headed towards the Epitaph. If you're game to beat each other up with sticks and stones lmk! im also on Discord if you are there hmu Zef Halo #8332

 

[Mig Gred]

Uhm Tathra Khaeus . Correct me if I'm wrong, but it seems like you may have ignored my last post in your most recent one. Or at least I don't see any reference to the T-1 Sluggers attacking the Reavers, or the fighters attacking your swarm fighters, or the Kad's short burst of test bombardment.

 

[Aayla Shan]

Do excuse me, but I'll have to drop out of the invasion from this point on, feel free to NPC my character for those who need too.

 

[Nine Lives]

Tathra Khaeus

You also ignored Thirdas, Beltran, and Me in your latest post

 

[Laertia Io]

Sorry, wrong account. You missed Thirdas, Beltran and Laertia

 

[Tathra Khaeus]

Mig Gred
Sorry I forgot the fighters but I did mention rail guns which I thought was the slugs? (Which is why one of them died.)

Also can you point me to the bombardment cause I had a lot of info to cover and clearly missed it. Very sorry.

Laertia Io
Also I didn't miss you guys, but from what I understand you are both with Thirdas who I asked, is looking for Tathra. Not near him, myself and Thirdas Heavenshield even talked about this before I posted, which concluded with me saying I'd make Tathra visible.

 

[Mig Gred]

Tathra Khaeus

Sure. Here’s the quote.

"Surface be warned. Heavy turbolaser fire inbound." And then they opened up with a quick, light on bolts burst, a test of how the Bryn shield would react. Malo needed to know before she'd put consistent fire on that thing.

Mind pointing me to where the tanks and fighters are mentioned too, cause I Your post has me a bit lost.

Edit: I found the tank part.

 

[Tathra Khaeus]

Mig Gred I'm not at my laptop, but I'll edit and add the fighters and make the tanks more clear..Again, my b.

 

[Sylok'Vanari]

Dagon Kaze I tried adding you on Disc, I think the name is wrong? If you wanna add me, feel free too, I'm down just was gonna head over to Osam and even the playing field. My discord name: LzopianFury#4725

 

[Kranak Vizsla]

Osam Hey just a heads up, Kranak is headed towards Cadere 's position to aid him. Narration wise Kranak's going to be extracting any and all wounded SJC personnel and move back to his side of the frontline, but throughout that time we have the opportunity to exchange some shots between one another. Just giving you a heads up and seeing if you're fine with that!

 

[Osam]

Kranak Vizsla

Hiya Kranak!

Currently on my way over to Cas as well to provide both he and Zephyr with a beatdown. (They asked for it, I promise.)

Fighting against all odds is a big tenant of the Bryn'adul, and while I recognize I'll be a bit outnumbered, I would sooner bite off my own toe than not fight literally every single writer who comes at me simultaneously.

In other words: sure thing! I'll throw down with everyone!

 

[Tathra Khaeus]

Mig Gred

Edited my post to more explicitly reference tanks and seeing as there is more than one thing killing the Phedrak Fighters I went for a blanket statement on that part.

Tis all in the first paragraph, if any more is required give me a shout.

 

[Tegan Starfall]

Hmm the Bryn are in need of Healing it seems.

 

[Mig Gred]

Laertia Io

Hey. I just wanted to say that part of your last post kinda felt like you took control of everyone (the seismic charge part). Reading again I can see there is choice there, but you may want to change the wording a little to avoid confusion.

 

[Laertia Io]

Will edit immediately Mig Gred . May I ask for advice on the edit to best address concerns?

 

[Zemira]

Laertia Io Do you have discord?

 

[Laertia Io]

No, but I made a preliminary edit to the posts, saying now that the shockwave was racing towards instead of automatically hitting the defensive line around the Epitaph. Zemira and Mig Gred

 

[Mig Gred]

Laertia Io

The main thing I would change is take out the "which they did" and/or just say the forces under your forces are falling back at that moment. That way you get the urgency, but without making it seem like you're controlling other characters.