Submission Modifications

[Bastille Rommer]

Submission Name: Ra'Katha
Link to Submission: http://starwarsrp.net/topic/141357-rakatha/
Summary of Modification: Changing Hex Coordinates
Reason for Modification: I'm trying to get Ra'Katha into the CIS, so i'm moving it to a hex closer to CIS territory
Modification: Change current hex coordinate from V-57 to V-53

 

[Siobhan Kerrigan]

Submission Name: Order of Fire
Link to Submission: Here
Summary of Modification: Move to Pre-Codex
Reason for Modification: Making several edits to update lore and bring the submission in line with the new template.
Modification:

Move to Pre-Codex

 

[Kaida Taldir]

Submission Name: Exemplars
Link to Submission: Here
Summary of Modification: Update Strengths and Weaknesses. Modifying equipment. Adding Unit Experience.
Reason for Modification: Updating unit. The unit was described as being an elite one when I first subbed, though the Unit Experience category did not exist back then. So I am adding in this category to make things more transparent.
Modification:

In Combat Information, add:

• Unit Experience: Elite.

In Equipment, change this:

• Seraphim Assault Armour or Cusaeris Armour Mk3.

To this:

• Seraphim Assault Armour.

In Equipment, change this:

• Sonic imploders, thermal imploders, EMP grenades, smoke grenades, frag grenades, Dampener aerosol grenades.

To this:

• Grenades, sonic imploders, thermal imploders (Up to 6).

In Equipment, add:

• Wrist Bolter
• Verpin Shatter Rifle
• Magnetic Repeater
• BCC BC-11 Comlink (purchase request here, permission here).

In Strengths and Weaknesses, change this:

The Exemplars are a crack unit of elite infantry. They are composed of Knight level Force-users, who specialise in elemental abilities (fire, ice, earth and air/lightning), as well as offensive and defensive telekinesis. The Exemplars are characterised by high morale, discipline under fire and zeal. However, they have only a few heavy weapons and lack heavy combat vehicles. This can put them at a disadvantage when confronted by heavy armour or heavy fortifications, despite their preternatural powers. Being infantry, they are vulnerable to long range bombardment, such as artillery and air strikes. They have a few portable missile launchers and can use elemental skills, such as manipulating the wind, to counter attacking aircraft to an extent, but this is quite variable.


The unit is also fairly small, which limits how many of the warriors can appear on the battlefield at any given time. Thus enemy forces that are unable to match them on a one-on-one basis could overwhelm them through sheer force of numbers as attrition sets in. Battle shields can provide protection in a pitched fight, but a shield wall is also rather slow-moving, vulnerable to flanking attacks and bombardment. It also cannot stop turbolasers, missiles and so on. They may be able to strike hard and establish a bridgehead in enemy territory, but would require support to hold it and exploit this gain, especially over a prolonged period. While the Exemplars train extensively in the use of conventional weapons and tactics, losing the Force means being deprived of their biggest asset. Thus they can be at a disadvantage if forced to engage enemies who utilise ysalamiri or devices that negate the Force. Most of the soldiers in the unit are Eldorai. Members of this race are more agile and dexterous than humans, but on average physically weaker and possess a lower pain threshold.


To this:


The Exemplars are a crack unit of elite infantry. They are composed of Knight level Force-users, who specialise in elemental abilities (fire, ice, earth and air/lightning), as well as offensive and defensive telekinesis. They are capable of using the Force for physical augmentation to buff themselves and control their pain. The Exemplars are characterised by high morale, discipline under fire and zeal. However, they have only a few heavy weapons and lack heavy combat vehicles. This can put them at a disadvantage when confronted by heavy armour or heavy fortifications, despite their preternatural powers. Being infantry, they are vulnerable to long range bombardment, such as artillery and air strikes. They have a few portable missile launchers and can use elemental skills, such as manipulating the wind, to counter attacking aircraft to an extent, but this is quite variable.


The unit is also fairly small, which limits how many of the warriors can appear on the battlefield at any given time. Thus enemy forces that are unable to match them on a one-on-one basis could overwhelm them through sheer force of numbers as attrition sets in. Battle shields can provide protection in a pitched fight, but a shield wall is also rather slow-moving, vulnerable to flanking attacks and bombardment. It also cannot stop turbolasers, missiles and so on. They may be able to strike hard and establish a bridgehead in enemy territory, but would require support to hold it and exploit this gain, especially over a prolonged period. While the Exemplars train extensively in the use of conventional weapons and tactics, losing the Force means being deprived of their biggest asset. Thus they can be at a disadvantage if forced to engage enemies who utilise ysalamiri or devices that negate the Force.

 

[Siobhan Kerrigan]

Submission Name: Order of Fire Silencers.
Link to Submission: Here
Summary of Modification: Adding Experience. Update equipment.
Reason for Modification: Updating unit. The unit was described as being an elite one when I first subbed, though the Unit Experience category did not exist back then. So I am adding in this category to make things more transparent.
Modification:

In Combat Information, add:

• Unit Experience: Elite.

In Equipment, add:

• Semiautomatic Rifle (access to ARGH gear here).
• Taozin amulet
• MKI Boltgun (including APE Rounds)
• Hardsound Gun
• Holdout bolter

 

[Siobhan Kerrigan]

Submission Name: Cataphracts of the Ascending Phoenix
Link to Submission: Here
Summary of Modification: Adding Experience and tinkering with equipment.
Reason for Modification: Updating unit. The unit was described as being an elite one when I first subbed, though the Unit Experience category did not exist back then. So I am adding in this category to make things more transparent. The Cataphracts saw extensive combat action during the Tephrike campaign.
Modification:

In Combat Information, add:

• Unit Experience: Elite.

In Equipment, add:

• Ashira's Maul
• Cortosis Staff

In Equipment, change this:

• ACS-207 Aerosolblaster (purchase request here, approved here), ARGH flamethrower (Wrist variant), Wrist Bolter. Two wrist weapons per soldier.

To this:

• ACS-207 Aerosolblaster (purchase request here, approved here), ARGH flamethrower (any variant, permission here), Wrist Bolter.

In Equipment, change this:

• Taegis battle shield

To this:

• Seraph shield

 

[Karrigan'Xalda]

Submission Name: Heralds of the Destroyer
Link to Submission: Here
Summary of Modification: Adding Experience. Update gear.
Reason for Modification: Updating unit. The unit was described as being an elite one when I first subbed, though the Unit Experience category did not exist back then. So I am adding in this category to make things more transparent.
Modification:

In Combat Information, add:

• Unit Experience: Elite.

In Equipment, add:

• MSD-32
• DS-8K (Firemane has access to FFE gear per this thread)
• Sonic Disruptor
• Taozin amulet
• ACS-207 Acidthrower (purchase request here, permission here).

In Equipment, change this:

• Cylix bolt pistol, Magnetic Revolver, Dissuader KD-30 or Sonic Wave Pistol.

To this:

• Cylix bolt pistol, Magnetic Revolver or Sonic Wave Pistol.

 

[Tegaea Alcori]

Submission Name: Qadiri Sepoys
Link to Submission: Here
Summary of Modification: Adding Unit Experience
Reason for Modification: Updating unit. The Unit Experience category did not exist back when the unit was subbed. So I am adding in this category to make things more transparent.

Modification:

• Unit Experience: Trained

 

[Scherezade deWinter]

Submission Name: Endelaan
Link to Submission: http://starwarsrp.net/topic/134184-endelaan/
Summary of Modification: Changing the planet's precise location.
Reason for Modification: With the changes brought to us with the new Map changes and with it the ability to move the location of planets we've submitted a long time ago, I would like to use this opportunity to strike the planet off the hex on the submission-level, and keep it off the map until further notice. The planet is already not a part of the new map, and I would like its submission to reflect that.
Modification:

Please change:

• Coordinates: AB-3

To:

• Coordinates: Exact coordinates currently unknown. The planet does not appear on the map at present.

 

[Darth Carnifex]

Submission Name: The Behemoth
Link to Submission: Click
Summary of Modification: Move to Pre-Codex
Reason for Modification: Want to work on it more
Modification:

Slip Slop Slap that baby on over

 

[Srina Talon]

[member="Marcellus Decker"] #722 - The Sandali - [Completed]

[member="Anya Venari"] #723 - Tygara - [Completed]

[member="Tathra Khaeus"] #724 - Bryn'adul | Writhing Servitors - [Completed]

[member="Bastille Rommer"] #725 - Ra'Katha - [Completed]

[member="Siobhan Kerrigan"] #726 - Order of Fire, #728 Order of the Fire Silencers, & #729 Cataphracts of the Ascending Phoenix - [Completed]

[member="Kaida Taldir"] #727 - Exemplars - [Completed]

[member="Karrigan'Xalda"] #730 - Heralds of the Destroyer - [Completed]

[member="Tegaea Alcori"] #731 - Qadiri Sepoys - [Completed]

[member="Scherezade deWinter"] - Endelaan - [Completed]

[member="Darth Carnifex"] - The Behemoth - [Completed]

Note: I did a lot of subs in one go, so please, if I made a mistake let me know. Thanks!